Your writing critiqued

Liam Tullberg graduated with an MA in Professional Writing from Falmouth University in 2007 and has been writing on and off since. He’d like to get back into a regular writing routine and is working on a collection of short stories.

If you would like to submit an extract of your work in progress, send it by email, with synopsis and a brief biog, to: jtelfer@writersnews.co.uk

Mother was right, Agata thinks, kneeling on the floor and restocking the mini-bar in room 334. English people really do drink a lot. Agata positions the tiny bottles carefully, making sure all the labels face out neatly like she’s seen their full-size counterparts in the supermarkets. It’s unnecessary, perhaps, but she takes pride in Not that she could afford to stay somewhere like The Manor Hotel, of course, which has bedrooms bigger than the entire tiny flat she shares with four other girls on the outskirts of Hammersmith.