Memo Peer Review Sheet Criteria Style: Addresses audience with an appropriate, clear, and succinct style.

Attends to audiences needs and values. Form: Uses conventional design of memos, including heading, statement of purpose, summary, discussion, and recommendation sections effectively. Content: Defines relevant criteria and provides specific details to support its endorsement or rejection of each magazine. Organizes results and paragraphs in a smooth, logical pattern. Comments Grammatical errors. Feels that there is hesitation in your conviction. Keep it consistent. More or less, pressure the reader to understand your argument. Form wise, the memo looks perfect. Impressed with the footnotes.

Again, keep working on sentence structure. Your argument for TIME magazine is nearly immaculate but the arguments against the other two are extremely weak.

Address the postwrite question here: The visitors are not visitors of the waiting room. Word it towards visitors not visitors of the waiting room. Good content for TIME magazine but add more evidence towards the arguments against Atlantic and National Geographic.