Time Essay Template

Name: yaoxin yang Thesis statement: If time is money, then____ spend it on correct way ___. (Fill in the blank.) Explain the thesis:

A: Now a day, have a lot of rich people in the world, sometimes they may waste their money. But, if the time changed to the currency, people need to spend it on correct and useful way. Otherwise, we dead because out of time.

Give an example of the thesis:

A: I watched a movie called In Time. It talks about the time became currency in the future. People work for make time; spend time to buy food or something like that. Some people in that movie waste their time at drink bar or gambling house, when they out of time that they have, they just dead at there.

State the summary or conclusion: A: If time turn to currency in our world, we need spend it carefully and make it to be more value in our life. A day it is seems not much time. But it can do a lot. Otherwise, time is money right now in our word, even you didnt realize that.

Time Essay Evaluation Rubric

Points Possible

Points Awarded

Sensible completion of thesis sentence?

Do the explanation and example support the thesis sentence? Is there a logical conclusion?

Acceptable Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation & Sentence Structure

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