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Pamela Coke EDUC 463: Methods for Teaching Language Arts 18 December 2013
LESSON
Day 1 08/19/2013 Monday 52 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 2.1.c.i Analyze multiple interpretations of a story, drama, or poem (e.g., recorded or live production of a play or recorded novel or poetry), evaluating how each version interprets the source text. (Include at least one play by Shakespeare and one play by an American dramatist.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.7) 2.3.a Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening. (CCSS: L.11-12.3) 3.1.a.iv Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters. (CCSS: W.11-12.3d) 3.1.a.vi Use a range of strategies to evaluate whether the writing is presented in a clear and engaging manner (such as reading the text from the perspective of the intended audience, seeking feedback from a reviewer)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will meet teacher and jump straight into content. Students will begin to understand the implication of word choice how even the smallest words can matter. Projector/Doc Cam for examples and reflection questions 8.5x11 printer paper for Six Word Memoirs Dark markers for pages 52 minutes
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Introduction: [5 mins]
Introduce myself: where Im from, why Im teaching, what Im hoping to get out of the school year - Will go over syllabus and all that on Wednesday want to get started with the good stuff right away *Transition: I LOVE words. And words hold incredible meaning for me. I want to share a quote with you from one of my favourite graphic novels: Because while the truncheon may be used in lieu of conversation, words will always retain their power. Words offer the means to meaning, and for those who will listen, the enunciation of truth (V for Vendetta, Alan Moore). Were going to be doing a short activity that will highlight the importance of words and telling our stories. -
About [2 mins] Examples [10 mins] Discuss examples with class What makes these impactful? What we can assume about the author? How would this change if one word was changed? Prompt (posted): [5-10 mins] Write your own Six Word Memoir that explains one of the following: - Your summer - Your goals/hopes/ambitions for this year - First day of school - Junior Year - Appropriate alternative Please write a paragraph (at least 5 sentences) on the back explaining your Six Word Memoir. Why did you choose it? Please write your name on the back as well. Give students 10 mins to write their own on 8x11 white paper with dark markers provided. Have students tape their pages around the room. Have students do a Gallery Walk with their notebook, writing down Memoirs that speak to them (have them record those in their notebook) [5 mins] - Make note of themes/commonalities Have students sit back down and discuss: - What was that activity like for you? What was easy/difficult for you personally? - How did you ultimately decide on your Memoir? - Does anyone want to explain one of the Six Word Memoirs they wrote down? Why? - Whats something you didnt think youd have in common with someones Memoir? - What are some of the trends or themes between some of these Memoirs? - Why are we doing this activity?
LESSON
Day 2 08/21/2013 Wednesday 94 minute class period 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 1.1.c Deliver oral talks with clear enunciation, vocabulary, and appropriate organization; nonverbal gestures; and tone
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will know and begin practicing the expectations of the classroom, building community through the Values Sort activity. Students will be able to define their top 5 values and write a short reflection on how that value plays out in their own lives. Projector/Doc Cam Values pages to tape up around the room, all 54 (attached) Journals for warm up Syllabi (attached) Reflection questions emailed/posted online 94 minutes
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5863 US Literature and Composition Fossil Ridge High School 2013 2014 Credits: 10 Prerequisites: World Literature and Composition Instructor: Mr. Jake Pappas Room: XYZ Wing, Room 123 Office Hours: Periods 1 and 5, Tuesday/Thursday; 8:00-10:00 p.m. Monday/Wednesday on GoogleChat; and by appointment. Office Phone: (970) 488-6260 Email: pappas25@gmail.com GoogleChat: pappas25 Welcome to US Literature and Composition! My names Mr. Jake Pappas. I grew up here in Fort Collins and attended Colorado State University to major in English Education with a minor in Leadership Studies. I am passionately dedicated to not only abiding by and meeting the Common Core State Standards, but also allowing students the space to respond to and ask meaningful questions regarding identity, authentic purpose, and the courses overarching concept. Throughout the year, we will be exploring American Society and the intersections of our identities within larger communities. We will be setting strict community guidelines in order to promote this trusting space, and I hope we find value in both discussion and advanced formative/summative assessments. With this sense of open communication, I encourage all students to ask questions that enhance their own learning experience. Participating in one-on-one writing conferences and attending office hour appointments are highly recommended to receive more individualized instruction and guidance. I have provided my information for GoogleChat above. This added medium of communication is more instantaneous than traditional email, and is also accessible from my mobile devices. Please feel free to engage with me through this method as frequently as you would over email. I will respond to all emails, voicemails, and messages in a timely (humanly) manner. All records of emails and chats will be filed for each student. Overarching Concept What are the values of American Society? How does our personal writing inform our identities and their comparison to larger communities (friends, family, regional, United States)? What does Being American mean to us an engaged individuals who live in this country? This course will focus on different types of writing for each unit, paired with a multitude of anchor texts. These multiple genres of writing will range from narrative writing to argumentative writing, and just about everything in between. Course Description American Literature courses focus upon commonly known American authors and their work. Students improve their critical-thinking skills as they determine the underlying assumptions and values within the selected works and as they understand how the literature reflects the society of the time. Oral discussion is an integral part of this course as is the emphasis on narrative informational/explanatory, and argumentative writing. At FRHS: The course is taught thematically rather than chronologically. Course Setup Unit 1: Personal Values and Identity Unit 2: Voices of the American Dream Unit 3: Powers of Persuasion Unit 4: American Forums -- The Marketplace of Ideas Unit 5: The Ethics of "Being American" Unit 6: The American Future Panem
1. Oral Expression and Listening 1. Verbal and nonverbal cues impact the intent of communication 2. Validity of a message is determined by its accuracy and relevance 2. Reading for All Purposes 1. Complex literary texts require critical reading approaches to effectively interpret and evaluate meaning 2. Ideas synthesized from informational texts serve a specific purpose 3. Knowledge of language, including syntax and grammar, influence the understanding of literary, persuasive, and informational texts 3. Writing and Composition 1. Stylistic and thematic elements of literary or narrative texts can be refined to engage or entertain an audience 2. Elements of informational and persuasive texts can be refined to inform or influence an audience 3. Writing demands ongoing revisions and refinements for grammar, usage, mechanics, and clarity 4. Research and Reasoning 1. Self-designed research provides insightful information, conclusions, and possible solutions 2. Complex situations require critical thinking across multiple disciplines 3. Evaluating quality reasoning includes the value of intellectual character such as humility, empathy, and confidence Required Texts Bless Me, Ultima Rudolfo Anaya The Crucible Arthur Miller The Perks of Being a Wallflower Stephen Chbosky Into the Wild Jon Krakauer Book Club Texts (One of the five): On the Road Jack Kerouac Their Eyes Were Watching God Zora Neale Hurst The Surrendered Chang-Rae Lee The Great Gatsby F. Scott Fitzgerald 9/11 Commission Report The Hunger Games Suzanne Collins
The Twelve Tribes of Hattie Anaya Mathis The House on Mango Street Sandra Cisneros
Course Requirements and Weight 1. Active Class Participation (20%): Being actively engaged in class activities is a key to success in this course. Students will promote professional dialogue and conversation. This will be a time to ask each other pivotal questions to the development of our overarching concept and each unit question. There are 80 class sessions this year. Each session will provide the opportunity for two points: one for presence and one for active engagement. Unexcused tardies will result in the loss of that days presence point. While school excused absences will be honored, any attendance issues not registered with the Front Office will result in the loss of that days presence point and active engagement point. 2. Assignments / Formative Assessments (30%): a. 10% will be derived from Dialectical Journals and Reading Notebooks. These will be assessed periodically throughout each text. b. 10% will be derived from Reading Quizzes. These quizzes will assess reading progress with higher-level thinking questions that address majors themes of the current text. c. 10% will be derived from daily assignments, ranging from in-class writing activities to group work. A 30% reduction of points-possible will be accumulated for each day the assignment is late unless noted otherwise. 3. Summative Assessments (50%): Assessment weight will vary per specific assignment. Each assessment (larger test, paper, project) will be penalized 20% for every day late. Rubrics will be given for each summative assessment at least two weeks in advance.
4. Enrichment Opportunities (3%): There will be three opportunities throughout the school-year to participate in a Service Learning Enrichment Opportunity. Each project will have a sign-in sheet for attendance. A 2-3 page reflection will be submitted within one week (7 standard days) of the project via email. Prompts for each individual opportunity will be posted on the class site at least two weeks in advance. Enrichment Opportunities cannot be submitted late or resubmitted to earn points back. Grading 98-100 = A+; 93-97 = A; 90-92 = A78-79 = C+; 73-77 = C; 70-72 = C0-59 = F
Make-Up Work Full credit will be given for any assignment turned in late with proof of school excused absence. Any summative assessment that is turned in late will be reduced in point value unless provided proof of school excused absence. Any summative assessment with a grade lower than 90% earned may be resubmitted within a week of the original due date to earn points missed. An Assessment Reflection form and all drafts of the assessment must be submitted to be considered for this opportunity. Late point reductions will not be granted for resubmission. Expectations - Turn in homework and assignments at the beginning of class, unless instructed otherwise. - Respect the space around you. Eating in class will not be allowed. Drinking water in a closed container is appropriate. - Active Participation will include responding to and asking thoughtful questions regarding analysis and class content, displaying appropriate nonverbal actions, and providing personal experience and prior knowledge to engage the class with the text. - Inclusive, appropriate language is expected at all times. Language that does not promote a safe environment conducive to authentic learning will not be tolerated. You will be immediately dismissed from class with an expectation of a later one-on-one conversation if this stringent guideline is not acknowledged. - Actions leading up to and including Referrals will be administered if needed. - Attend class with necessary supplies and texts. Supplies: Writing utensil Note-taking material Texts (specific to unit and time needed) Journals Reading Notebooks Academic Integrity This course will adhere to the Poudre School District and Fossil Ridge High School academic integrity policies. For more information, please see the Student Conduct Guide. I will ask you to sign an Honor Pledge for all summative assessments.
Adapted from Dr. Pamela Cokes EDUC463 Course Description
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Duration: 94 minutes Take Attendance and Collect Syllabus Slips / Values Reflection [5 minutes] Anticipatory Set [5 minutes]: - Short class discussion: How do you like to read? What are some choices you make while reading? What environment do you read best in? Do you mark up the text when you read? Teaching [60 minutes]: (25 minutes to PowerPoint and Bless Me, Ultima discussions Input/Modeling) (10 minutes for Sample #1 Modeling) (10 minutes for Sample #2 and discussion Guided Practice) (15 minutes for Sample #3 and discussion Independent Practice) Input/Modeling - Students view PowerPoint on Annotating Narrative Texts to refresh their memories (see attached slides) - After PowerPoint, students will watch instructor annotate one example I Was Raised By poem (see Sample #1 attached) after listening to the poem out loud (http://vimeo.com/62904155). Annotations done on Doc Cam. Checking for Understanding - Ask students to find key points throughout the first 48 pages of their text that could be annotated. o What is important about this section? o How can this relate to your life/experience? o What does this tell us about Antonios/mother/father character? o How does this moment progress the plot? o What questions do you have about this point in the novel? - Students will record their annotations on paper and think/pair/share to discuss their annotations and points of interest. Questioning Strategies - See above. Guided Practice: - After watching the instructor do a quick annotation of the first sample on the Doc Cam, students will annotate Sample #2 as a class (see attached). [Samples #2 and #3 on one sheet of paper] o Students read through it silently, making own annotations. Share points of interest to class. o Instructor reads through it out loud, asking students to make more annotations. o Discuss How did you decide what things to annotate? Where did you have a hard time understanding what was going on? At which part did you find the authors voice coming through with strength? Closure: As you read throughout the class text, its the expectation that youre annotating some of these important markers. These notes and markings will help you identify and analyze the progression of characterization and plot throughout the entirety of the novel. Its the expectation that youre putting at least 4-5 sticky notes of annotations for every section of reading that is assigned. These close reading and questioning strategies will help us to have great class discussions with Bless Me, Ultima. Independent Practice: - Students will annotate Sample #3 on their own (see attached). - Discuss with class after: o What things did you annotate? Why? o What words/images stuck out to you? Why? o Where did you personally connect with the text?
After Independent Practice (Finish procedures) [30 minutes / remainder of class]: - Assign I Was Raised By Poem assignment - Walk students through I Was Raised By Poem Assignment Sheet o Clarify due date o Cite examples of things to include from Samples #1-3 - Have students individually brainstorm ideas for their I Was Raised By assignments that might be derived from vivid memories, family traditions, identities, etc. Give students 20 mins / remainder of class to brainstorm and begin drafting as TOD o TOD will be checked for completion on students way out of the door, not turned in. Students will use their TOD to help write their assignment due on Monday.
http://vimeo.com/62904155
Raised by Women
Kelly Norman Ellis
I was raised by Chitterling eating Vegetarian cooking Cornbread so good you want to lay down and die baking "Go on baby, get yoself a plate" Kind of Women. Some thick haired Angela Davis afro styling "Girl, lay back and let me scratch yo head" Sorta Women. Some big legged High yellow, mocha brown Hip shaking Miniskirt wearing Hip huggers hugging Daring debutantes Groovin "I know I look good" Type of Women. Some tea sipping White glove wearing Got married too soon Divorced
in just the nick of time "Better say yes maam to me" Type of sisters. Some fingerpopping Boogaloo dancing Say it loud Im black and Im proud James Brown listening "Go on girl shake that thing" Kind of Sisters. Some face slapping Hands on hips "Don't mess with me, Pack your bags and get the hell out of my house" Sorta women Some PhD toten Poetry writing Portrait painting "I'll see you in court" World traveling Stand back, I'm creating Type of queens I was raised by women
Sample #2: Guided Practice Name: ____________________________ Period: ______ Date: ___________________
MUSIC
By Shona Curtis
I was raised by smooth jazz Make you want to sit down and Cry kind of music Some move your feet and shake Those hips feel like you dancin Down the streets of Argentina Kind of music Some hip hop and you dont stop Movin to those beats that feel the energy Comin out of the radio Kind of music Some hit right where you need it soul Music make you think of the old days When that was all we had Kind of music Some jump up and down slame to The beat of the rock Kind of music Some poppin pop grab your Best friend and put on your Favorite costume and dance Kind of music. I was raised by music.
Raised
By Anaih Rhodes
I was raised by a lovin Church goin, home cookin, belt whoppin, Non-stop children bearin, Money arguin, Youre going to be something great one day, Mom and Dad I was raised by a Jesus lovin, behind tearin, Bomb cookin, hair pressin, garage sale givin Grandma A politic lovin, money givin, pipe puffin, Fish fryin, Cadillac whippin, wine sippin, Study hard now! Grandpa I was taught by a tongue talkin Sanctified, holy ghost filled, fire baptized, Shoutin Member to keep God first, Baby! Kinda church folk Some aisle runnin, teary-eyed, joy jumpin, Devil rebukin, seed sowin, How you doin, Baby? Type of church folk I was brought up with that hold on, Wait on God, dont give up,
Weepin may endure for the night, But joy comes in the mornin, What a friend we have in Jesus, music By some double darin, house playin, Fightin, scratchin, teasin, tauntin, Crumb snatchin, To football playin and track runnin I got cha back! Cousins I was brought up by that race Everyone on the block, barefoot, wind my face, win or lose, spirit of runnin To that sweatin, trainin, muscle tearin, Shin splintin, intense burnin, Heavy workout, deep breathin crazy Type of runnin. Raised
VITAL INFORMATION
Author *Subject(s) Topic or Unit of Study *Grade/Level *Summary Jake Pappas US Literature and Composition Unit1: Personal Values and Identity 11 I Was Raised By poems are due Read-Around for poems Ticket Out the Door reflection
STANDARDS
*Standards 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.1.d Analyze audience responses to evaluate how effectively the talk or presentation met the purpose 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11-12.1) 1.2.a.i Come to discussions prepared, having read and researched material under study; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence from texts and other research on the topic or issue to stimulate a thoughtful, well-reasoned exchange of ideas. (CCSS: SL.11-12.1a) 2.1.a.iii Analyze the impact of the authors choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed). (CCSS: RL.11-12.3) 2.1.b.i Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including words with multiple meanings or language that is particularly fresh, engaging, or beautiful. (Include Shakespeare as well as other authors.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.4)
UBD (UNDERSTANDING BY DESIGN) LESSON PLAN ELEMENTS REQUIRED: STAGE 1 DESIRED RESULTS
Established Goals Understandings Overarching Understanding Related Misconceptions Open classroom community of sharing I Was Raised By poems and giving each other positive comments through the Read-Around activity (Christensen 69). Reflection on process of sharing. Students will define their sense of identity and values in order to beginning defining what Being American means to them. Misconceptions: Touchy feely things in the classroom are a waste of time. Rebuttal: Christensen writes, We dont build communities instead of working on academics. We build communities while we work on academics (15). How do you define your upbringing? In what ways can you learn about the development of your classmates from I Was Raised By poems? What are some common themes among you and your classmates upbringings? Students will need a safe environment in order to feel comfortable sharing their poems. Students will already be aware of the classroom guidelines and expectations for giving and receiving feedback. Students will be able to give appropriate and positive feedback to their peers during the Read-Around portion of sharing their poems. Students will be able to independently write short reflections (TOD) on the discussions heard in class, addressing the topics of community and identity.
Essential Questions
Knowledge
Skills
UBD (UNDERSTANDING BY DESIGN) LESSON PLAN ELEMENTS REQUIRED: STAGE 2: Assessment Evidence
UBD (UNDERSTANDING BY DESIGN) LESSON PLAN ELEMENTS REQUIRED: STAGE 3: Learning Plan What learning experiences and instruction will enable students to achieve the desired results? How will the design:
In Day 4 of the Unit, this will be the first real sharing experience for their writing. We will be focusing on positive engagement and contributions for feedback to help build classroom community, and give students a space to feel like their writing will be valued and appreciated. This activity will help students brainstorm and prepare for topics to write in their Narrative Essay assignment. How will you hook students at the beginning of the unit? This activity will already be initiated in the previous lesson, and this will be the sharing day. Where are your students headed? Where have they been? How will you make sure the students know where they are going? What events will help students experience and explore the big idea and questions in the unit? How will you equip them with needed skills and knowledge? Students must first understand their own identities in order to begin asking the overarching questions of what Being American truly means to them and our society. The I Was Raised By poem will allow students to reflect on their upbringing, values, identities, etc. in order to more holistically view their being.
How will you cause students to reflect and rethink? How Students will be writing questions and positive notes of will you guide them in rehearsing, revising, and refining feedback for each speaker in the session, and then will their work? be completing a Ticket Out the Door that asks students to evaluate the quality of the session, the impact on classroom community, and the feelings throughout the sharing process. How will you help students to exhibit and self-evaluate their growing skills, knowledge, and understanding throughout the unit? Part of this self-evaluation will come from their TOD.
How will you tailor and otherwise personalize the learning Students have been given a broad assignment to plan to optimize the engagement and effectiveness of ALL complete, so wont feel restricted by mechanics and students, without compromising the goals of the unit? grammar to complete the poem. The sharing process will allow students to vocalize their poetry, and build community with their peers through conversation and positive feedback. This sense of community will help all students feel valued, and students will learn about one another to build relationships in the classroom.
ACTUAL LESSON PROCEDURES: 54 minutes INTRO [2 mins] Welcome students, briefly remind students of the expectations for sharing our poetry, and the short time we have allowed for this activity. Read-Around Activity [40 mins] Explain general briefing of activity, begin. 1. Seat students in circle. 2. Pass out scraps so students can write specific, positive pieces of feedback on each writers poem. 3. Ask students to write authors name on the top of the paper strips before each reading, with their names at the bottom. - People are sharing their lives with you. Be a hungry listener. Listen with your head and your heart. 4. Instruct students to respond to each piece with a positive comment. Review ways to respond: - To writers content - To their style of writing NOTE TO SELF: - Share a memory that surfaced for you - As writer reads, write down lines, ideas, words, phrases that you liked Need to devote more time 5. After student reads piece, ask class to orally respond with a few short to this activity? Like a comments. block period? I want all 6. After all students have read, students hand each other their comment slips students to hear everyones poems and Reflection Ticket Out the Door [10 mins] have time to properly, but Students will turn in responses as they leave. Post prompt on Doc Cam / Projector: worried about time What is one classmates story that stuck out to you? Why? restraints. What did you enjoy about listening to your classmates responses? Whats one thing you learned about a classmate in this room? Whats something you wanted to say but didnt?
LESSON
Day 5 08/28/2013 Wednesday 94 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 2.1.c.i Analyze multiple interpretations of a story, drama, or poem (e.g., recorded or live production of a play or recorded novel or poetry), evaluating how each version interprets the source text. (Include at least one play by Shakespeare and one play by an American dramatist.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.7) 2.2.a.i Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain. (CCSS: RI.11-12.1) 2.3.a Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening. (CCSS: L.11-12.3) 3.1.a.vi Use a range of strategies to evaluate whether the writing is presented in a clear and engaging manner (such as reading the text from the perspective of the intended audience, seeking feedback from a reviewer)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will be able to find textual evidence to support claims about the effect of setting and context. Students will explore the similarities that they have with other students they assumed are very different from them. Students will begin to understand that self-identification is multi-dimensional, and is not always obvious to the eye, or stereotypes. Projector/Doc Cam Whiteboard/markers Paper slips in 8 different colors 94 minutes
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The Big 8
Identity Broad Definition Whats mine?
Ability
Age
Ethnicity
Gender/Sex
Race
Religion / Spirituality
Sexual Orientation
Socioeconomic Class
LESSON
Day 6 08/30/2013 Friday 94 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.1.d Analyze audience responses to evaluate how effectively the talk or presentation met the purpose 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 1.2.a.i Come to discussions prepared, having read and researched material under study; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence from texts and other research on the topic or issue to stimulate a thoughtful, well-reasoned exchange of ideas. (CCSS: SL.11-12.1a) 2.1.a.iii Analyze the impact of the authors c hoices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed). (CCSS: RL.11-12.3) 2.1.b.i Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including words with multiple meanings or language that is particularly fresh, engaging, or beautiful. (Include Shakespeare as well as other authors.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.4)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will understand whats being asked of them in the Narrative Essay assignment. Students will support claims from Chapters 10-11 with textual evidence and personal connection. Projector/Doc Cam Narrative Essay Assignment Sheet Ticket in the Door (for Socratic Seminar) due next class 94 minutes
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Reminder: Your outlines are due ONE WEEK from today (Friday 09/06) spend the weekend and next few days narrowing your choices. Sit down with close friends and family to discover some ideas as well. Class share out: Anyone have some great ideas theyre excited about and want to share?
Preparation for Socratic Seminar Ticket in Door for next time [5 mins]
Walk students through the TID for Socratic Seminar prep. (see attached) Talk over questions expectations for answering them. This should be completed outside of class, not in class. **Cannot enter Seminar without their Ticket in the Door!!!
Rationale: Throughout this unit we have been working (and will continue to work) on defining our own sense of identity, along with characters in Bless Me, Ultima. This assignment will ask you to incorporate discussions weve delved into through our class sessions, activities, readings, and assignments. In order to best understand what Being American means in our society, we must look inward and define identity for ourselves. In this way, we can have a more clear idea of where we come from in order to find out where wed like to go. Assignment: You will write a Narrative Essay that tells a story of your upbringing. We will take time to brainstorm a number of ideas for your writing. Select a story that can be expanded and reflected upon for a number of pages. In your essay, a sense of whats going on will need to be provided. Some aspect of a context, story, and reflection on how this instance has changed who you are today will need to be provided. Please be a storyteller in this assignment. Find ways to artfully weave a story that shows us the characters of your narrative, succinctly depicting your point of development and how it has shaped who you have become. Incorporate our discussions on identity and values. It will be a good idea to use your Values Sort activity and I Was Raised By poem as a springboard for ideas in this essay. Please see below for the specific requirements of the Narrative Essay and its components. This assignment is very broad in its scope, so please dont hesitate to ask many questions. Requirements and Grading: Your narrative essay will meet the following requirements ____ 4-6 pages in length, 12 point Times New Roman font, 1 inch margins, MLA format [5] ____ Setting/context is clearly and artfully articulated. [15] ____ Clearly depict a point of development from upbringing [20] ____ At least 3 connections are made to how the instance has shaped the writers life today. [15] ____ Writer has used at least three alliterative phrases (and are labeled as such). [6] ____ At least 3 references to class discussions (identity, values, I Was Raised By, etc.) are given. [9] ____ All drafts are completed on the assigned date and attached to the final draft. [20] ____ Reflection questions are all clearly answered and fully complete. [10] TOTAL: ____ / 100 Audience: The audience for this assignment will be me, your instructor, and a small group of your peers. Your work on brainstorming, drafting, and revisions will be done in pairs and small groups. You will be sharing certain excerpts and sections of your narrative with a small group on the day these essays are due. Reflection: You will include a reflection page that completely and thoroughly answers the questions below. These responses should be typed and attached to your final draft. - What was easiest about this Narrative Essay assignment? - What was most difficult for you? Why?
What did you gain from the drafting/revision process? Please reference specific points in your narrative. Do you feel your narrative is an accurate representation of who you have become? Are there some things you wish you would have included in your paper?
Due Dates / Checkpoints: In order to reach a polished, final draft of your essay, we will be doing a number of editing workshop to refine your piece. These sessions will include drafting, reflection, and participation in order to receive full credit. Please attach ALL original drafts and revisions to your final draft. 08/30: Brainstorm in class (quick write) 09/06: Basic outline due (partner feedback) 09/09: First draft due with added transitions (workshop on content/ideas) 09/11: Second draft due (workshop: attention to detail, voice, etc.) 09/13: FINAL DRAFT DUE (with all preceding drafts, revisions, and the attached reflection and checklist)
Please attach the bottom half of this page to your final draft with scores for your self-assessment.
Student and Instructor Checklist SELF INSTRUCTOR ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ [9] ____ ____ ____ 4-6 pages in length, 12 point Times New Roman font, 1 inch margins, MLA format [5]
____ Setting/context is clearly and artfully articulated. [15] ____ Clearly depict a point of development from upbringing [20] ____ At least 3 connections are made to how the instance has shaped the writers life today. [15] ____ Writer has employed at least three alliterative phrases (and are labeled as such). [6] ____ At least 3 references to class discussions (identity, values, I Was Raised By, etc.) are given.
____ All drafts are completed on the assigned date and attached to the final draft. [20] ____ Reflection questions are all clearly answered and fully complete. [10]
This will be your Ticket in the Door for Wednesday Socratic Seminar. If this handout is not fully completed (with references to page numbers and specific scenes in the text), you will not awarded points for participating in the Seminar. Feel free to draw anything in our reading up to Wednesdays reading (p. 168). 1. List at least two specific points in the text where Antonio has undergone a change in his values/identity/development. Cite the page number and give a very brief explanation of the event. Why has it changed him?
2. Have you ever felt split between two opposing ideals like Antonio is in Bless Me, Ultima? What points in his challenges can you relate with? Give at least two examples.
3. How do Gabrel and Maras attitudes regarding the process of growing up relate to
Antonios future? Cite at least one example from the text for each parent.
4. Discuss at least two examples of points of interest you have annotated that are not included in the questions above. Why did you feel the need to annotate these?
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Day 7 09/04/2013 Wednesday 94 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.1.d Analyze audience responses to evaluate how effectively the talk or presentation met the purpose 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 1.2.a.i Come to discussions prepared, having read and researched material under study; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence from texts and other research on the topic or issue to stimulate a thoughtful, well-reasoned exchange of ideas. (CCSS: SL.11-12.1a) 2.1.a.iii Analyze the impact of the authors choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed). (CCSS: RL.11-12.3) 2.1.b.i Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including words with multiple meanings or language that is particularly fresh, engaging, or beautiful. (Include Shakespeare as well as other authors.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.4)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will be able to define Socratic Seminar. Students will democratically engage in whole class discussion, drawing from textual evidence and personal experience. Students will reflect on the experience of participating with a whole class debrief and an independent writing activity. Projector/Doc Cam TID for Seminar Paper for TOD 94 minutes Check Ticket In the Door as students come in. - If students didnt complete TID, they will not be awarded that half of the points for the Seminar, but will still allowed to participate in the discussion.
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Day 7 ADAPTATION 09/04/2013 Wednesday 94 minute class period Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 For an ADAPTATION, Friday, 08/30 was a HEAT DAY and that content will have to be combined with todays content.
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All chairs touching, in circle We wont use raised hands Try to cite specific points in the text so everyone can follow along Think connections (Text-text, self, world) Ask questions of your peers Speak to peers, not me Keep notes things that resonate, questions you dont know the answer to, your responses (even if you dont answer outloud) **Tell students these notes will be vital at the end of class for the reflection** Start with prework questions, and let it organically move towards open discussion. Seminar Prepped questions: 1. List one specific point in the text where Antonio has undergone a change in his values/identity/development. Cite the page number and be ready to discuss why it has changed him. 2. Have you ever felt split between two opposing ideals like Antonio is in Bless Me, Ultima? What points in his challenges can you relate with? Write a brief few words to speak about. 3. How do Gabrel and Maras attitudes regarding the process of growing up relate to Antonios future? Cite at least one example from the text for each parent. 4. Discuss at least one example of points of interest you have annotated that are not included in the questions above. Be ready to discuss why you felt the need to annotate these. [[Seminar shortened because of ADAPTATION]]
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Day 8 09/06/2013 Friday 94 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 1.2.a.i Come to discussions prepared, having read and researched material under study; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence from texts and other research on the topic or issue to stimulate a thoughtful, well-reasoned exchange of ideas. (CCSS: SL.11-12.1a) 2.1.a.iii Analyze the impact of the authors choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed). (CCSS: RL.11-12.3) 2.1.b.i Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including words with multiple meanings or language that is particularly fresh, engaging, or beautiful. (Include Shakespeare as well as other authors.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.4) 2.3.c Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. (CCSS: L.11-12.5) 3.1.a.iv Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters. (CCSS: W.11-12.3d) 3.1.a.vii Evaluate and revise text to eliminate unnecessary details, ineffective stylistic devices, and vague or confusing language 3.3.d Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. (CCSS: W.11-12.5)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will practice giving constructive feedback that highlights their peers accomplishments and helps them shape their Narrative Essay outline. Students will practice using colourful writing so that they may insert more elaborate and complex descriptions in their Narrative Essays. Whiteboard/Projector Journals Outlines Peer editing half sheet Colorful Writing examples 94 minutes
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Outline and Editing half sheet will be attached to Final Draft of essays. Colorful Writing: Students create their own Colorful Writings. To keep the time from being busy work, there will be a 5 minute check in where everyone shares out colors, a 10 minute check in where everyone shares out words, and a 15 minute check in where poems are shared. TOD: Students need to write in complete sentences and include at least 3 examples of ways they would include colourful writing in their narrative.
3. Read through the paper a second time and use these markings below. What topics of identity and/or values are listed in the outline? Underline them. Are there any connections to how this event has shaped who they are today? Circle them. 4. Spend time showing your partner each of your responses. Explain your reasoning and give them time to respond/explain. Have partner take back their paper and mark your discussion points throughout their outline.
3. Read through the paper a second time and use these markings below. What topics of identity and/or values are listed in the outline? Underline them. Are there any connections to how this event has shaped who they are today? Circle them. 4. Spend time showing your partner each of your responses. Explain your reasoning and give them time to respond/explain. Have partner take back their paper and mark your discussion points throughout their outline.
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Day 9 09/09/2013 52 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 1.2.a.i Come to discussions prepared, having read and researched material under study; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence from texts and other research on the topic or issue to stimulate a thoughtful, well-reasoned exchange of ideas. (CCSS: SL.11-12.1a) 2.1.a.iii Analyze the impact of the authors choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed). (CCSS: RL.11-12.3) 2.1.b.i Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including words with multiple meanings or language that is particularly fresh, engaging, or beautiful. (Include Shakespeare as well as other authors.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.4) 2.3.c Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. (CCSS: L.11-12.5) 3.1.a.iv Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters. (CCSS: W.11-12.3d) 3.3.d Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. (CCSS: W.11-12.5)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will participate in a reflective discussion on workshop techniques, with wins and opportunities and looking forward to upcoming workshop session. Students will evaluate each other base content of the Narrative Essay posing questions and points of confusion on their general story, impact, and influence. Projector/Doc Cam Copy of Draft One for revisions and edits Paper for workshop feedback and TOD 52 minutes
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Day 10 09/11/2013 Wednesday 94 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 1.2.a.i Come to discussions prepared, having read and researched material under study; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence from texts and other research on the topic or issue to stimulate a thoughtful, well-reasoned exchange of ideas. (CCSS: SL.11-12.1a) 2.1.a.iii Analyze the impact of the authors choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed). (CCSS: RL.11-12.3) 2.1.b.i Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including words with multiple meanings or language that is particularly fresh, engaging, or beautiful. (Include Shakespeare as well as other authors.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.4) 2.3.c Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. (CCSS: L.11-12.5) 3.1.a.iv Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters. (CCSS: W.11-12.3d) 3.1.a.vii Evaluate and revise text to eliminate unnecessary details, ineffective stylistic devices, and vague or confusing language 3.3.d Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. (CCSS: W.11-12.5)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Student will refresh their definition of alliteration and be able to incorporate alliterative phrases in their Narrative Essay. Students will complete the Tightening Writing workshop and make draft changes for the Final Draft due on Friday. Projector/Doc Cam TWO copies of Second Draft (one for student, one for editor) 94 minutes
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Alliterative Character Poem Mini Lesson: [25 mins] Intro [3 mins]: Who remembers what alliteration is and can give us a definition? (Write on whiteboard). Have three students come up and write examples on the whiteboard.
Ask students to take out a piece of paper and list two characters of their favourite characters from any film or text. [1 min] Ask students to write at least three values/characteristics from the specific text that they noticed (for each character). [2 mins] Explain the Alliterative Character Poem and provide example(s). [5 mins] (Projector, leave up while drafting) Line 1: Name the character. Line 2: Use at least 4 words beginning with the first letter of the characters name to tell where he/she/it spends their time. Line 3: Use at least four alliterative words to tell about specific actions the character takes throughout the film. Line 4: Using the same letter, (with four words) describe how the character looks and appears on screen. Line 5: Using as many words with the same letter as possible, tell about some special talent, power, attribute this character shows in the film. Example: Rapunzel Resides reluctantly in a rough round room. Rapunzel relishes rotund ripe raspberries. Rapunzel rolls and unrolls her rich radiant hair. Rapunzel unwraps her hair to the royal prince riding a regal steed. (Polette 93) Give time for questions, students to begin work. If complete with one, instruct students to move on to the second character. [7 mins] Ask some students to share out work with classmates. [3-5 mins]
**Remind students they will need to include (and label) at least three alliterative phrases in their Narrative Essay.
Work Time [30 mins / remainder of class] Students have the choice to silently (or in pairs) revise their Second Drafts, or to catch up on reading (or read ahead).
ONGOING ASSESSMENT Students will write a short Alliterative Character Poem to be turned in. If the poem meets the requirements listed, they will receive full participation points for the activity (5). Students will complete the Tightening Writing handout and will attach to Final Draft (with marked edits on their Second Draft).
Gary Provost, 100 Ways to Improve Your Writing 12. Trade papers back. Spend the remainder of the editing/drafting time expanding upon your comments and notes received. What do you dis/agree with? Keep adding to the expansions explode with detail.
Adapted from Linda Christensens Teaching for Joy and Justice (pp. 116-19).
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Day 11 09/13/2013 Friday 94 minute class period 1.1.a Give informal talks using an appropriate level of formality of verbal language and nonverbal interaction with audience 1.1.c Deliver oral talks with clear enunciation, vocabulary, and appropriate organization; nonverbal gestures; and tone 1.1.d Analyze audience responses to evaluate how effectively the talk or presentation met the purpose 1.2.a Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 1112 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. (CCSS: SL.11 12.1) 2.1.a.iii Analyze the impact of the authors choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed). (CCSS: RL.11-12.3) 2.1.b.i Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including words with multiple meanings or language that is particularly fresh, engaging, or beautiful. (Include Shakespeare as well as other authors.) (CCSS: RL.11-12.4) 2.3.a Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening. (CCSS: L.11-12.3) 2.3.c Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. (CCSS: L.11-12.5) 3.1.a.i Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or observation and its significance, establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a narrator and/or characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or events. (CCSS: W.11-12.3a) 3.1.a.vi Use a range of strategies to evaluate whether the writing is presented in a clear and engaging manner (such as reading the text from the perspective of the intended audience, seeking feedback from a reviewer)
Context: Fossil Ridge High School Course: US Literature and Composition Grade level: 11 Period: 6 Students will share their Pride and Joy moment from their Narrative Essay assignment. Students will reflect on the narrative drafting/revision/polishing process. Students will engage in discussion regarding community and development in the room. Projector/Doc Cam Narrative Essays in hand Unit Evaluations YouTube interviews: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2LX8LzC9Ns 94 minutes
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---- [[Students hand in their Culminating Texts]] ---Class Debrief: [10 minutes]
What was the like for you? How does it feel to be done with this assignment? Was this process easy or difficult for you? Did you value the editing/revision process in writing your narrative? How do you feel weve grown as a class since Day 1? **Comment on progression of year: This is Unit 1 of 8. Weve been working to establish and define our identities and values in order to then take the individual and look at society. For the following units we ll need to keep these discussions and connections in mind, but will be throwing our concepts of self into the larger context of America and what it means Being American. Thanks for all of your hard work throughout this first unit Im excited to see where we will grow from here!
Hook for next unit: Gatsby Interview [25 mins / remainder of class]
ONGOING ASSESSMENT Interview with co-screenwriter/director of new Gatsby film, Baz Luhrmann http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2LX8LzC9Ns
Students will submit the Unit Evaluation at the end of class as the TOD. Students will give positive feedback on the Pride and Joy moments shared from their peers narratives.