CELEBRATION WRITING PROP\MPT REFECTION

Today our teachers gave us our writing prompt and our marks. I received uent, the same as October. I think though, that Im pretty good and I think I have put in more Voice. I think that what I am good at is putting in Voice. I also tried my best to put in as much Steps To Success as I could and I think I succeeded well. I also organized my Celebrations pretty nicely and put them in Paragraphs. I also seem to have been a bit hilarious which was, obviously, my aim. Something else that is good is that I have an excellent ow to my words. What I need to work on is my strange habit of drifting of topic and try to not do that. I also, sadly, seem to give out some irrelevant information. Thinking about what I need to improve on also reminds me that, although I try not to, I rely to much on trash words. What I need to improve on there is to nd more interesting words to help me stay away from the trash words. Something that can really help me is my STS( steps to success sheet) which Mr Thomas always rightly reminds to keep on our desktop when we are writing anything.

Dilip Devadass

Friday, 21 March, 2014 11:19:12 AM Hong Kong Standard Time