Corrections to add to First Draft of Deodorant Advert.

Use establishing shot of scene at the beginning of TV (Starbucks) Film at angle so the lighting is good Use closer shots and a variety of close up (on eyebrows, eyes) Clear shot of Sam spraying himself with the product Try and film when it will be more quiet so less background noise. Must have a shot of the product at the end of the advert with information about it (24 hours protection, gives you confidence)