STANDARD 3.3 Use teaching strategies STANDARD 3.4 Select and use resources Topic !" Place #ohanna $%4% &pisode $' (ear )e*el + Term $ ,ee- 3.+ Date /ommencing 20 th April 21$3 2RA!!AR 34/US 53 le*els6 $. ,hole te7t structure o8 a persuasi*e piece o8 te7t An opening statement A statement of opinion Background Information to support the opening statement Arguments to support opinion Evidence and facts to support each argument A concluding statement that sums up the argument, suggesting a solution or possible action. )anguage 8eatures 8or the te7t.t"pe 2. Sentence le*el Present tense Persuasive voice Use of connectives (Firstl, secondl! 3. ,ord le*el Emotive "ords Use of first person (I, "e, us! Use of con#ectures (therefore, furthermore! ($ing %an, &''(, pp. )**+)*,!. Te7t t"pe and mode )istened to Spo-en Read ,ritten 9ie:ed Produced Persuasi*e argument te7t 7 7 7 7 7 7 Steps in Teaching and )earning /"cle 5adapted Dere:ian-a, $001;211'6 ). Building topic kno"ledge &. Building te-t kno"ledge./odel the genre 0. 1uided activities to develop vocabular and te-t kno"ledge 2. %oint construction of te-t 3. Independent construction of te-t *. 4eflecting on language choices 3requentl" used )iterac" <nstructional Strategies 5hink Aloud 6anguage E-perience Approach (4.$! 4ead to 7hared 4.$ 1uided 4.$ /odelled "riting Interactive "riting Independent 4.$ 6iterature 8ircles 4eciprocal 5eaching /ini lesson 4oving conferences 4eading Intervie"s 8lo9e 7hared time Topic.speci8ic *oca=ular" 8or the unit o8 :or- 8hores, thesis, school, business, responsibilities, emploment, gender roles, stereotpes, social order, evidence, statement, education, eras, decade, timeline, rights, e-pectations, aspirations, entitlements, histor, Indigenous Australians, evidence, proof, #ustif, support, reason, e:ualit, duties, routines, tanner, paragraphs, ke "ords, abbreviations, persuade, rhetorical :uestion, opinion, closure, argument, o"nership, control, discussion, debate, ;<uring the decade=, countr, ma#orit, evidence, proof, #ustif, support, reason, linking and conclusion. Thin-ing Tools;techniques to support children>s thin-ing =e8ore;during;a8ter an acti*it" 1raphic >rganisers (1>! e.g. ?enn <iagram, @+8hart, 5+chart, 7emantic gridA BrainstormA /indmapA 5hink+Pair+ 7hareA <>?EA PlacematA 1raffiti $allA Post+it BotesA 7unshine $heelA A+C proformaA Problem+solvingA 4eflective 6earning %ournalsA 7hare timeA 4eflection 8irclesA 4ole+plaA Fish Bo"lA <ebateA <iscussionA PBIA 3?IPsA BundlingA /omprehension Strategies PredictingA ?isualisingA /aking connectionsA DuestioningA InferringA <etermining important ideasA 7ummarisingA Finding evidence in the te-tA Understanding ne" vocabularA 7nthesisingA 8omparing and contrastingA ParaphrasingA 4ecognising cause and effectA 7kimming and scanningA ?uestion t"pes self+:uestioningA 0 levelsA (literal, inferential, evaluative! DA4 Resources $ing %an, 6. (&''(!. Write ways. 7outh /elbourneE >UP.pp. *,+F), (2+(3, &'&+&'FA EPI7><E )F G ),2,E %>HABBA English teaching resources do"nloaded on &nd >ctober &')0 from """.mplace.edu.au.. / Place "ebsite """.mplace.edu.au ?ideo clip Episode )F ()!A AB80 /Place httpE..""".abc.net.au.abc0.mplace. Analysing Checking Classifying Cooperating Considering options Estimating Explaining Generalising Hypothesising Inferring Listening Locating information Making choices Note taking Obsering !erforming !ers"ading !lanning !redicting !resenting #eading #ecognising bias #eflecting #eporting #esponding $eeing patterns $electing information $elf%assessing $haring ideas $"mmarising &esting 'ie(ing 'is"ally representing )orking independently )orking to a timetable *esigning Elaborating Interpreting +"stifying Ordering eents Organising !roiding feedback ,"estioning #estating #eising $ynthesising TEACHING & LEARNING CYCLE (Identify step in the T & L cycle and the literacy learning intention or sessions focs ! "H#LE CLA$$ Tning In (Identify a strategy or a tool to help acti%ate prior &no'ledge and(or to introdce the topic)! *INI LE$$#N (E+plicitly ,odel the se of a ne' strategy or a tool to assist 'ith the literacy learning intention or focs of the session and to prepare stdents for sccessfl co,pletion of the set tas&) Reference to "ing -an inclde page details! IN.E/EN.ENT LEARNING (E+tended opportnity for stdents to 'or& in pairs0 s,all grops or indi%idally on a set tas&) Ti,e for teacher to pro1e stdents thin&ing or 'or& 'ith a s,all grop for part of the ti,e) Reference to "ing -an inclde page details! $HARE TI*E AN. TEACHER $2**ARY (3ocssed teacher 4estions and s,,ary to dra' ot the &no'ledge0 s&ills and processes sed in the session! A$$E$$*ENT $TRATEGIE$ (shold relate to literacy learning intention or focs of the session) Incldes ho' & 'hat yo 'ill se to ,a&e a 5dg,ent on stdents atte,pt('or&! 7ession )E 1uided activities to develop vocabular and te-t kno"ledge. 5e-t specific vocab building. 7tudents re+"atch Episode )) of %ohanna ),2, (see appendi-!. 5he familiari9e themselves "ith the era and ho" %ohanna spends her time. 2ra88iti :all Using our notes in previous sessions and ne" findings from toda. 7tudents create a graffiti "all detailing "ords that are appropriate for the era. /odel ho" to use a thesaurus to e-tend the "ords "e have included on our graffiti "all. For e-ample, the "ord ItiredJ ma be replaced "ith Ie-haustedJ. Using 3 "ords model 3 sentences "here ou have taken a "ord off the "all and made it more interesting. 7tudentJs "ork in small groups using thesauruses to find the snonms of 3 "ords off the "all and use these ne" "ords to create sentences. 7tudents then create 8lashcards to be used in a game of memor. Teaching group :ith small group o8 &A) 2uided :riting 4evie" first video clip again. Ask individuals to share a ke"ord for a specific scene in the video clip. Have them e-plain "hat that "ord means to them and give an e-ample from their o"n culture. As a class students create a ne" gra88iti :all using the ne" "ords the have learnt in todas lesson. Each student then receives a 8lashcard of the old "ords on the graffiti "all and "hen the teacher reads aloud the ne" matching "ord. 5he student "ins a pri9e. Anecdotal notes are taken during guided "riting "ith the small group. 4ecord studentsJ abilities for choosing "ords that emphasis meaning "ithin the te-t. Also note ho" the decide to record their 7ession &E %oint construction of te-t. 7eeing ho" the te-t relates to us in real life. Discussion Have a special guest to the class knock on the door and inform students that the principal has cancelled sport for the ne-t "eek. 5he teacher models thin-ing aloud asking the class "h this ma have happenedK 5he teacher should re+ phrase student suggestions, as "ell as record these on the I$B. Role pla" 7tudents are placed in t"o large groups one a group of students and the other a group of people acting as the principal. >n butchers paper students "rite all the reasons that their character believes sport should. or should not be including in ne-t "eeks activities. Thin-.Pair.Share 7tudents pair up "ith someone of the opposite group to them. 5he de=ate using e-amples the have formed "ithin their larger groups. Teaching group :ith small group o8 &A) 7tudents also debate this topic. 4evisit an vocab from the discussion. 7tudents then reflect on the sentences that the felt "ere trul convincing. 4ecording one on the "orksheet and completing the columns II thoughtJ and II feltJ (see appendi-!. 7tudents can use Re8lecting circles 7tudents are given time to "rite do"n a reflection of their e-perience. 5he teacher encourages them to focus onE What points did you raise that were truly convincing to others? Why do you think this may have been the case? How did you feel when you were debating with your peers? What did you think Anecdotal notes are taken during guided "riting "ithin the small group. 4ecord studentsJ reflections of their selected sentence in their "riting #ournals. pictorial responses her if necessar. when the principals explained to you why sports should be cancelled? 7ession 0E Independent construction of te-t. Bring in old photographs of oung children "orking in the ),''Js. <iscuss "ith the class "h this occurred and "h man students did not attend school. 7tudents should be encouraged to make te7t to te7t and te7t to :orld connections. Thin- aloud Pose the :uestion to the class. 7hould %ohanna stop "orking and attend schoolK
4evise the structure and language features and model ho" to complete the graphic organiser ham=urger for assistance "ith paragraphs. Encourage students toE Ask yourself, do have? An opening statement A statement of opinion Arguments to support my opinion A concluding statement that sums up the argument, suggesting a solution or possible action! 7tudents "ork individuall to create a persuasive te-t, using the hamburger organiser as a guide for their paragraph structure. Teaching group :ith small group o8 &A) 4evise the structure and language features. Have students create a planner of "hat the "ish to include. 7tudents "ill onl "ork on one paragraph and aim to include a connective. In share circles have students discuss their stance and ideas about the topic. Encourage talk about e-amples in real life that support their arguments. Who do you think our audience would be? What is your opinion? Why as the author is your opinion important? How do you want your readers to think and feel? 7tudents are marked on their abilit to use present tense, a persuasive voice and connectives (Firstl, secondl!. 7ession 2E Editing.Preparing to publish Read aloud 4ead to the class our persuasive argument as to "h %ohanna should stop "orking and attend school. Thin- aloud /odel the persuasive te-t on the board. Using one colour model revie"ing our o"n "ork. Adding punctuation, grammar and spelling as necessar. Using another colourA have a student come up and revie" our "ork. Allo" them to model ho" the "ould edit our "ork also. Pair :or- 7tudents return to the floor "ith t"o different coloured pens. 7itting back to back "ith a partner the begin editing their o"n "ork. >nce finished, the s"ap "ith each other. Teaching group :ith small group o8 &A) 7tudents also form partners, but are given a rubric as a guide, askingE If all their sentences make sense. If the have used capital letters If the have used full stops. 5"o students are selected to share "ith the class their e-perience in editing each otherJs "ork. 7tudents can no" commence tping their "ork on their laptops. What things should be looking for when am checking my work? How can tell if my sentences make sense? How does reading aloud help me to see if need to use a full stop? Both the small group and teaching group use a peer assessment checklist "here the assess ho" "ell their partner could edit their o"n "ork and look for errors. 7ession 3E 4eflecting on language choices. Using a :ord cline model the "ords hot and cold on the I$B (see appendi-!. <iscuss "hat "ords ma be in the gaps. <iscuss "ith students ho" "e can use a thesaurus to enhance IboringJ nouns "ith interesting ad#ectives. Thin- aloud /odel an introduction paragraph (on the I$B!, using a studentJs "ork and the student to assist ou. Have the student add in "ords (in a different colour! to enhance their o"n "riting in front of the class. Encourage positive feedback from classmates. Pair :or- 7tudents return to their laptops. $ith the student ne-t to them the read each otherJs "ork and discuss appropriate "ords to enhance each otherJs "riting. Teaching group :ith small group o8 &A) 7tudents are given access to dictionaries and thesauruses. Individuall students edit their "ork adding at least three ne" "ords. Share time 7elect t"o students "ho have printed their "ork and have them share their e-perience "ith the class. Why is it important that we revise our work with others? What type of words did we use to make our writing interesting? How did you feel knowing that you had edited your work plenty of times? "id you find using a thesaurus to be helpful? /on8erencing $ork "ith students one+on+one to revise their te-t. Using a rubric demonstrate to students ho" the have meet the outcomes. Ensure ou use the sand"ich approach.