Alex:

look at audience
more description - a little more energy?
more background info
reading off notecards - speak to audience
Maddie:
LOOK AT AUDIENCE
more background info
stop reading off notecards!!
connect to audience
who is vilaro?
speak in sentences, not bullet points
Hattie:
DONT LOOK AT NOTECARDS!!!!!!!!
could you tell a little bit more about jamaicas slave history?
little more description
Happy:
slow down!
talk to audience, not notecard
describe what youre going to as well as what youre going to do
youre saying different things than what is on your google earth placemarks
you mentioned batista many times - who is he? famous cuban architect?
more background needed
Lana:
slooooow down