Factual writing: Write an article about the pros and cons of a Job

STUdenTS name: agUSTn fLoReS pReZ

TeacheRS name: mc cLaUdia Rodrguez Rosas- Agosto ____
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improvement

TITLE



Interesting title
The title is not
interesting enough
The title is not related to
the topic
The title is missing
INTRODUCTION
PARAGRAPH
1
State the topic so clearly
(summary of the topic
without giving your
opinion.)
State the topic a little
bit clearly (summary of
the topic without giving
your opinion.)
State the topic but it is
confusing.
You do not state
the topic.
PARAGRAPH
2
write the pros of the topic
with supporting details
using the linking words in
correct way ( to begin
with
in addition, furthermore)
there are justifications,
examples and/or reasons
write the pros of the
topic with supporting
details using the linking
words in correct way
( to begin with, in
addition, furthermore)
There are a few
justifications and
examples.
Write the pros of the
topic with supporting
details using just two
linking words. The
justifications or examples
are not clearly
The pros are not
enough and the
linking words are
not used correctly.
PARAGRAPH
3
Write the cons with
supporting details. using
the linking words in
correct way (however, for
example, furthermore
etc)
there are justifications
examples and/or reasons
Write the cons with
supporting details.
using the linking words
in correct way
(however, for example,
furthermore etc)
there are a few
justifications and
examples
Write the cons of the
topic with supporting
details using just two
linking words. The
justifications or examples
are not clearly.
The cons are not
enough and the
linking words are
not used correctly.
PARAGRAPH
4
CONCLUSION
Summarize the main
points you mentioned and
state your opinion using
appropriate transitions(
all in all, to sum up, in
conclusion etc)
Summarize the main
points you mentioned
and state your opinion
but you do not use an
appropriate transitions
( all in all, to sum up, in
conclusion etc)
Summarize the main
points you mentioned.
You do not
Summarize the
main points you
mentioned.
SENTENCES &
PARAGRAPHS

Sentences and paragraphs
are complete, well-
constructed and of varied
structure. The linking
words are using correctly.

All sentences are
complete and well-
constructed
Paragraphing is
generally done well.
Most sentences are
almost well-constructed.
Paragraphing needs
some work.
Many sentence
fragments or run-
on sentences OR
paragraphing
needs lots of work
Grammar
&Spelling
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There are less th

you applied the grammar
correctly and words are
spelled correctly
There are 3-6 words
spelled incorrectly but
all assigned words are
spelled correctly.
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Contains little evid

Too many grammar error
and words are spelled
incorrectly.
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Most words are s

Most words are
spelled incorrectly
with little evidence
of knowledge og
grammar.
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THE CRAZY LIFE OF A DOCTOR

The doctor is that character must be attentive to the health of their patients, is
who provides advice and security from a disease, known or not, however, his
personal life is a puzzle, since most of the time should be available even when
enjoying a moment of relaxation, and especially because their patients would
like to know if your medical care their own health and follow their own
advice.

Despite the changes taking place in the profession, applications to medical
schools rose to an all-time high in the late 1980s and early 1990s and while
they have stabilized in the last ten years, school still receive 3 to 5 times more
applicants than they have positions for. Certainly one reason for this is that
medicine is the country. Life of a doctor is very rewarding because it saves
lives heals the people; a doctor is always friendly and understandable, helpful
and attentive.

Also a doctor also has to be person, even friendly, because his work has
behave safely and strength although, this could be a disadvantage of being a
doctor because almost marry the profession they must always be aware of
what may arise, for example when you have to give a notice to a family that
their relative died they say seriously and security, sometimes death comes
before the planned

To summarize the life of a doctor can sometimes be overwhelming and
sometimes tired stressful despite it is always rewarding and happy, it feels
great to help people and as a kind of hero that helps others, but in many ways
it is also great to be a good doctor because you earn the trust of many people
and youre winning some recommendations of life of a doctor is funny
sometimes it is difficult but not impossible something that can not be resolved