use of tracking shots. N/A Appropriate pace and content Bit slow at points but generally good pace. Maybe a bit more bullying? Maybe seeing how it affects her. N/A Character representations Can clearly see who the main character is. N/A Targeting the audience In my mind it appeals to a younger audience, really young like the age Ruby is. N/A Dialogue Very basic but I guess the characters are young. N/A Music/ sound effects Sound effects clearly tell what is happening. There is also a good range of music N/A Editing Only used cuts? Maybe more of a range of transitions. Additional focus: Plot Interesting storyline. Maybe more bullying? Cant completely understand the superhero bit.