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Cell phones nowadays are astonishing. They become extremely
sophisticated as they have incredibly improved in terms of size, options and
connectivity.
Unlike the old cell phone generation, the new cell phone is different in
shape. It has become smaller, thinner and lighter. For instance, you can slip it in
your shirt pocket and nobody could even notice it's there. Another remarkable
thing about it is that no antenna is needed anymore. Despite its small size, it has
a huge storing capacity. You can add extra memory cards to store large files like
photos, music or videos.
As for options and functions, the new cell phone offers a multitude of
facilities like sending and receiving short messages besides making multi-calls
wherever you are and whenever you want. You can associate every call number
with a different sound or alert. Furthermore you can make it vibrate instead of
ringing. The power of this tiny device is its ability to allow you to chat, to listen
to music, to play games and to take photos. You can even use it as an alarm
clock.
All in all, mobile phones are still under rigorous ameliorations and
their future utilities will surely be promising and more surprising. The next
generation of cell phones will certainly be exceptional and will amaze us
greatly.
Diction
The essay never ceases to remind us of the Topic of the essay by repeating some
words from time to time. This repetition is mild and even healthy. It is beneficial for both the
writer in order to stick to the point and for the reader to be repetitively reminded of what is the
topic about. The writer also uses almost the right reinforcing jargon to show his mastery of the
subject and the reader will be confident that the writer knows exactly what he is talking about.
Besides this, he uses the same category of adjectives to sustain the topic and keep connected
to the subject. For instance the word "astonishing" mentioned in the thesis statement is echoed
by "promising", "surprising", "exceptional" and "amaze" in the concluding paragraph to make
the circle full. In a word, the vocabulary used is appropriate to the subject. Let alone
punctuation which is used appropriately, too.
Wrapping up
Taking the above quickly stated evaluating observations into consideration, the essay
undoubtedly respects the form and content rules hence acceptable as a model essay.
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