Strengths

Really bright, colourful

shots, shots are clear,
nice variation of shots.

Any Questions
The hand held tracking
shot looks a bit
unbalanced?
Could that be re-shot? I
know tracking shots
move, but I think it could
look neater.

Improvements
Tiny bit of shakiness at
the start when Leo walks
towards the bench.

Mark
4

Mise-en-scene

Locations are natural,

effective as they are
everyday making them
realistic for your
audience to imagine.

Is it all going to be set in

the two locations of the
outside area and the
bedroom?

Maybe some school

playground shots?
Or the main character
with other people.

Editing

I love the title.

Ruby looking at her
reflection as a superhero
is really clever.
Title is effective and will
appeal to your target
audience.
I like the dialogue, its so
cute.

Are you going to add

special effects for when
she is a superhero?

More special effects when 3/4

she is a superhero.

What will your sound

track be? Will they be
music and ambient
sound?
More location?
More characters?
A sidekick?

Might want to add some

sound.

Cinematography

Sound

Ideas for the ending

She could realise that she

can beat bullies even if
she isnt actually a
superhero. Selfconfidence in herself.
Psychological superhero
helped her see that.