Fischerkeller 1

Stephen Fischerkeller
Nancy Roche
Writing 1010-013
10 December 2014
Explanation of Major Revision
I decided to go back to the beginning and revise my first major assignment in this class,
the literacy narrative. First I went through and change my spelling and grammar issues. I fixed
spacing between words and between the paragraphs. I also made sure my headers were correct.
Then I went to the opening paragraph and added on to make it more descriptive and meaningful.
After that I went through and added new sentences into the newly added 4th paragraph. After
that I went back through and made sure it all made sense. After going all the way through this
class I was able to add more meaning of literacy into this paper and make it make a whole lot of
more sense.