Imani Belgrave

English 112
Reflection
11 December 2014

In my polished work I made many changes to my papers. To begin with my Rhetorical

Analysis I notice I had the information, but I did not explain enough exactly what you wanted. I
made numerous grammatical errors previously. This time around I gave examples of my topic of
discussion. I fixed the many grammatical errors. In the proposal I had less correcting to do. I did
add more this that related to my paper. This included medical information that explained my
topic, which is HIV. The Annotated Bibliography had many errors. I was unfamiliar on how to
write out an annotated bibliography. I fixed the citations, the order, and I added on more citation.
In the round table essay, I was lacking specific detail. I had to go back into my sources, and
explain the information it provided me. I had to provide more examples and go into depth, so the
audience could understand the voices I wanted to get across. Each polished work I would like for
you to look at and re-edit.