English242B:

EvaluatingYourGroupMembersPortfolios

For:Sarah

Directions:
Beforesubmittingthemidtermversionofyour242BPortfolio,youwillreviewyourgroupsportfolios,
gradeandcompletethePortfolioGradingRubricforeach,andsendeachpersonyourfeedbackfortheirindividual
portfoliobytheduedate.Theywillhave5daysaftertheduedatetopolishandpreparefor
my
PortfolioMidterm
Grade
onMonday,
02/23
.

Your
FeedbacktoPortfolioPartners

DueDate:
Wednesday,02/18
PortfolioMidtermGrade
:
Monday,02/23

PortfolioItems
:Readthrougheachoneofportfoliotabstodetermineifeachcategoryiscompletedinfull.

Need
Reviseandedittheactivitiesandassignmentslistedtoearnagradeforyour
Excelle Proficie
s
portfolio.Makesuretoplaceeachassignmentinthecorrectportfoliotab.
nt
nt
Work
TAB:PersonalDictionaryTerms
ReadingJournal1:(2terms)
ReadingJournal2:(activism+agency)

ReadingJournal4:(3terms:Blanco,Valencia,McCurdy)
ReadingJournal6:(2terms:Heilbroner)
TAB:About
YourThoughtful
Selfie
:
Sentenceclarity
/

Textcohesion
Visual
Completeresponseto
Selfie
questions
TAB:StudentVoicesSymposium
Brainstorming
:Responseto
7questions

Yoursymposiumcontribution
(
paragraph
)
TAB:Reflections
Portfolio
Audience
Reflection
(
paragraph
)
Symposium
Audience
Reflection
(
paragraph
)

/
Essay1Reflection
(completedinclass)
PortfolioRubrics
foryourgroupmembers
:uploadasadocumentor
cutandpastdirectlyontothereflectionpage.

TAB:Home
PortfolioPurpose
:Whatdoyouhopetodemonstrateaboutyourselfas
awriter?Whataregoalsdoyouhaveforyourselfasawriter?Asa
criticalthinker?(
Oneparagraphpostedby2/16)
PublishedPieces
:
PublishEssay1:youmayalsoincludeanyvisualizationsthat
youthinkarerelevanttothisessay.

TargetAudience
:
AcademicCollegeAudience
Afterreviewingtherequiredportfolioitemslistedabout,evaluatethepresentationandorganizationofthedocuments
postedonyourgroupmembersindividualportfoliosites.

Basedonthe
sentencecraft
usageand
organizationofinformation
fortheportfolios,determineifthe
portfolioassignmentsarewrittenandformattedforan
academicaudience
.
Ithinkyourassignmentsare
writtenwell,theresjustfewminorawkwardsentencesonyourreflectionandspellingonyourpublished
piece.
Ifno,
highlightspecificpassagesthathighlightyourperspectiveandoffersuggestionstoimprovingthetext
formatand/orsentencecraft.

1.
IfeellikehowIstartmythirdparagraph
Stereotypinginaclassroomsettingisanongoingissuewithin

theeducationsystem.Studentsfromacertaineconomicbackgroundwillautomaticallybecategorizedwith
otherstudentswhocomefromthatdemographic.Somestudentswillbelabeledandplacedincertain
programssolelybasedontheirdemographic.
Whataboutthisparagraph?
2.IfIhadmoretimeIwouldgobacktorewatch
Walkout
andgettheexactquotesfromthemovietouse
asanexampleasopposedtosimplyexplainingthescene.Iveneverusedsituationsfrommoviesasatext
beforesoitwasadifferentapproachforme.
Introducethefilminabetterform,rewriteit.

Ifyes
,highlightstronglinesthatdemonstratethatthetextiswrittenforacollegelevelacademicaudience.

Themostimportantlessonswecanlearnfromtheexamplesofstudentandcommunityactivismarethat
thestudentsfromlowereconomicbackgroundsarefeelingdisconnectedfromtheireducationbecausethey
arebeingstereotypedinaclassroomsettingandlacktheknowledgeoftheirculturalbackgroundby
teacherswithafixedmindsetonwhocansucceedinhighereducation.Bydoingthisstudentsarebecoming
disconnectedfromtheireducationbecauseinsteadofembracingtheirculturalbackgroundtheyarebeing
taughttobeashamedofit.Theremustbeawellintunedstaffwhoembracetheirstudentstofindtheir
agencywithinthemselvestobesuccessfulinthisworld.
Introduceswelltheproblemandsomesolutions.Afewcommasmissingbutoverallgreatpoints.

Portfolio
Presentation/Organization:
Strengths
PortfolioPresentation/Organization:
Yourblogisveryorganized,andverygood
NeedsWork
looking.

Gobackandfixawkwardsentences.
Iwasimmediatelydrawntoitbecauseofyour

titles,Ithinktheyareverystrongandinvitingfor
Checksomepunctuation.
yourviewer.

Missingsomeassignments
Thestrongestpartofyourblogishandsdown

yourpublishedpiece,(essay1).Specifically
yourintroanecdote.