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Kaitlynn Abrams
De Piero
Writing 2
16 March 2015
Revision Document
Text from my initial
WP submission:
(a phrase, sentence,
paragraph, idea,
move, punctuation,
piece of evidence,
etc.)
WP1-Writers use
rhetoric to get their
point across to their
audience and use
conventions as a way
to show their
rhetorical abilities.
Album reviews tend
to have certain
defining
characteristics, but
also leave much room
for personalization.
WP1-When looking
at three different
reviews of the album
Four by One
Direction, the
conventions of an
album review become
clear. As well as the
fact that genre is a
useful subject to
study because it aids
readers in
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
classmate:
Writers of album
reviews tend to follow
that there are certain
defining characteristics,
but there is also room
for personalization.
..but Im still
wondering what,
exactly, youll be
arguing in your
paper.
Analyzing the
conventions and
rhetorical features of
three different reviews
of the album Four by
One Direction reveals
the importance of genre
awareness in
understanding a piece of
writing.
Abrams 2
understanding the
piece better
WP1- As I explore
the titles further, two
were very similar and
the other seemed like
an odd ball.
Remember: this
paper/assignment
needs to be tailored
to an academic
audience, which
means it needs to be
formal and
scholarly.
WP1- Paragraph 4 in
rough draft.
Abrams 3
WP1- End of
paragraph two in the
rough draft.
I would, however,
like you to get more
specific about
stating what,
exactly, the
similar/dissimilar
moves and
conventions are that
have caused the
tie.
Changing my
organization helped
me do an analysis that
can lead into how the
analysis shows the
importance of genre
in a more logical way
than just adding a new
paragraph in the
middle.
Abrams 4
You kind of
dropped this word
from your paper
over the past couple
of pages.
If I could make
one suggestion here,
itd be: who the
hells this Bunn
guy? Why bring
him into the mix?
What does it matter
what he has to
say?
When I presented a
quote or idea from the
course readings, I
introduced the writer.