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2) WP2 Organization/Structure
Text from my initial WP submission:
paragraph 1 = conventions/rhetorical features scholarly
paragraph 2 = conventions/rhetorical features blog
An observation or question I received from De Piero or a classmate:
Im wondering about your organization here So, in other words, break the paragraphs up by
the writing terms/ideas that youre analyzing?
The change(s) I made to what I initially wrote:
paragraph 1 = evidence in both
paragraph 2 = formatting in both
paragraph 3 = tone in both
How this change impacts my paper:
Because this assignment required the students to compare/contrast, comparing two aspects in
one paragraph allows the reader to more clearly see the difference. In addition, Zack gave me
comments referring to my shaky topic sentence and that Im jumping around a bit in the
paragraphs. However, by specifying indicating what is in the paragraph with a specific topic
sentence, the organization and clarity becomes more apparent.