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A very enjoyable essay to read, though your conclusion could do with strengthening up,
well done.
Some mistakes in word choice, and one sentence started with but, other than that very
good.
Area
Task Response
Coherence and
Cohesion
Lexical Resource
high
low
fully addresses all parts of the task
barely responds to the
20-0
presents a fully developed position in
task
answer to the question with relevant, fully does not express a
extended and well supported ideas
position
may attempt to present
one or two ideas
but there is no
development
uses cohesion in such a way that it
has very little control of 20-0
attracts no attention
organizational
skilfully manages paragraphing
features
uses a wide range of vocabulary
uses an extremely limited 20-0
with very natural and
range
Grade
18
18
17
Paragraphs
Capitalization and
punctuation.
of vocabulary; essentially
no
control of word formation
and/or
spelling
cannot use sentence
20-0
forms except in
memorized phrases
Student fails to use
10
formatting
Student fails to use any
form.
19
10
100-0
total
92