Profile peer reviews:

Group 1:
Student name:
Ayun K. Ramon R. Glenn H. Jason M.
COMMON:
STYLE:
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Need quotes and better citations.

Clear academic style.
Add headers
Picture citations
Relate more to audience clearly.

FORMAT:
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Academic essay.
Good introduction.
Clearer information flow.
Good conclusion.
Heading to organize.
Captions if you choose.
Cover page with APA format.
More information and less argumentative.

CONTENT:
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Well informed but needs organization.

Credible sources.
Peer reviewed journal.
Relevant background.
Why readers care.
Distinction.
Good Pictures
Supports with evidences.

Group 2:
Student name:
Annalisa. Alejandro. Edgar. Dommic.

COMMON:
STYLE:
1. Dont forget to cite photo and make photo a bit smaller.
2. Explain thoroughly for audience to understand.
FORMAT:
1. Good essay format.
CONTENT:
1. Consider a hook in opening introduction and thesis.
2. Work on transition from paragraphs.