Name: Hannah Kennedy

Unit: 1.5 Force

Task:

Teachers comments:

Ao1:

3 artist analysis (9 photos)

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Analysis.
How well have
you understood
the work of
other
photographers?

This section should contain 3 artists with three images per

artists analysed in full. You have the images but
where is the analysis

Nadav Kander (3 photos)

You talk about the project and then show the images but you
do not individually analyse the images this needs to be done.

Francois Delfosse (3 photos)

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Analysis?
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Bernd And Hilla Becher (3 photos)

Where is this section

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Ao2:

Force of nature

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Progression
from 1st to 2nd
response. How
have the photos
been refined?

A first response but why you not put up your edits from this
shoot you have must do this. Also where is your second
response?

Applied force

A strong first response demonstrating a good understanding of

technique and process but where your second response.

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Imposing architecture

Potentially a very strong section but the images in the contact

sheets are so small I cant really mark it. You have to put your
edits up.

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The three strands are excellent and demonstrate your ability

well done. However there is no annotation explaining what you
are doing and why please add these to the work. .

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3 strands

Ao3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs.
How has the
subject been
recorded?

You demonstrate a good understanding of the techniques

looked at in class but more refinement needs to take place
between your first and second responses.

Composition

On the whole your composition is good but I would like you to

get closer in some of your images.

Location and subject matter

Your choice of subject matter is good but you need to expand

your location used especially when looking at a second
response to imposing architecture

Ao4:

3 final images

Final Piece,
How have you
presented and
realised your
unique
photographs?

Project Grade: C

WAG: C +

The two giffs that you have created are good but I feel they
need refinement. This technique needs to use a tripod to keep
the image in the same place throughout and avoid the jerky
movement we see in these images. Also there should be a
third giff.

Target: A

Final Comment:
This has the makings of a good project but a lot of work needs to be done please complete all the tasks and gaps

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mentioned.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques
and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.