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I just cant be honest (first 4 color pages)

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Bubble number on said page

Character dialogue outside a bubble, if it has a number next to it its
because there are several character dialogues outside bubbles.
Non-character "dialogue"

Page 1.
#2

What!? should have the question mark. I havent finished solving

this question/problem. Problem sounds better.

#7

Ive... had feelings for you since long ago!/for a long time now!

Page 2.
#1

Would/Could you forgive for always being so strict/stern?

#6

Maybe put some ellipsis after finally...? since you can tell she
suddenly stops her thought.

Page 4.
#3

Ouch.

#4

Geez.

I just cant be honest (continuation)

Page 6.
#2

How many times have it been already...

#4, #5
#10

No commas needed.

It should say You... Do you... to match what she said on #7.

Page 7.
#7
...strange for me to have...
Page 8.
#3

Does... really have a...

#6

...Takahino-kun didnt have...

Page 9.
#1

...like a brat, unlike you...

**4

...like a brats you said?

Page 10.
#10

...when fondling them through a bra.

Page 11.
#5

Either This... doing this kind of thing!... or These... doing these

kinds of things!... Also, Didnt you say you already have a
girlfriend...?

#6

Didnt you say...? Question mark at the end.

Page 12.
#3

...when a woman asks for...

Page 17.
#4

Why did it turn out...

Strategy to fix a tomboy

Page 21.
#6

Ill blow it for you, so get this thing hard quickly/now/already!

**

Sounds better if you use the same words as used by the girl: Get it
hard you say/said?

Page 23.
#4

Hiyaa or heyaa instead of Yahoo

Page 24.
#9

...are expected to follow ladies etiquette... or ...are expected to

follow a ladys etiquette...

#10

My patience is at its limit! or My patiences reached its limit!

#13
#14

Well decide on this matter...

Needs a question mark at the end, probably.

Page 25.
#6

The there you have it should be inside quotation marks since hes
imitating her in a mocking way. Also, no comma.

#9

Could also be ...the act of making children/babies

#10

I dont understand that you know what?, it doesnt feel connected to

the rest of the conversation...

#11

Instead of discussion maybe put arguement.

#12

...should just shut up and listen to what I say!

Page 26.
#1

How come instead of why

#7

Hurry, get this thing hard! or Get this thing hard, quickly!

Page 27.
#2

Just shoot it in my mouth quickly and get this over with already.

#5

...there will be no baby, right?

Page 28.
#4

That place is not related to sex... or has no relation to sex...

Page 31.
#3

from someone who only has brute power/raw strength

#10

I think that socializing with a man should be inside quotation marks.

Page 32.
#1

Ladylike no space and youll get expelled, wont you?

Page 33.

#6

Should both be Come come! or Coming coming!

Page 35.
#4

Now well go all the way

Page 38.
#6

Im coming

Page 39.
#4

I think the now at the end is redundant/not necessary.

Heart and body/Body and heart

Page 43.
#1

her sex friend.

#6
But you dont usually have to take care of your sisters man too/as
well, do you?
#10

Even with such a rare and fine figure/body?

#11

Stop staring at me like that, pervert!

Page 44.
#8

Typo in just go back to your

Page 45.
#3

Considering youre also very loud or Considering you also have a

big mouth something along those lines.

Page 46.
#2

of everything, arent you? Are is the auxiliary so the question also

uses it.

#4

With that said, dont you think you are an amazing

#6

It would be better if you were more honest with yourself though

#7

This is repayment/compensation for the

#11

it feels good, right?

Page 47.
#3

Ah its okay if its just the thigh, right?

**6

Is not soaking wet, is it?

Page 48.
#3

eavesdropping on us when were having sex, arent you?

#6

you cant deny it, can you?

#8

Anyone would use such sounds to feed their lecherous thoughts

that doesnt make you a bad girl.

**1

Its not wrong?

Page 49.
#1

When youre doing it alone

#8

right now, arent you?

Page 50.
#1

Just be a little more honest with yourself.

#2

you could blame it all on me.

Page 51.
#3

Put it deep inside your mouth you can use your other hand

**3

Could be Im losing my mind here or My mind is going blank.

My head is getting numb sounds too awkward
Typo in practising practicing, also are you always practicing
for this?

#6

Page 52.
#2

Im coming!

**2

Hes coming before me/I am and Its already over

Page 53.
#4

Ahh I guess were done here, right? It would actually be bad if we

did the whole thing/if we went all the way

#8

Then you should say it clearly

Page 54.
#1

Hmmm I wonder what Suzune-chan wants~

Page 55.
#2

Youre now begging for a dick yourself

#7

Maybe change it for What did you do to become this perverted?

**1

No way Hes inside me

#9

like this, didnt you? Also, pumping sounds odd lol maybe
thrusting/raping/plunging.

Page 56.
#2

You were begging

**2

Where my fingers cant/wont-

#8

This is the second time youve said you dont want to

#9

You could just keep listening through the wall from now on!

Page 57.
#2

that you wanna get plunged/raped by a penis

Page 60.
#7

In exchange for making me this perverted

Heart and body/Body and heart (color pages)

Page 61.
#1

Needs question mark at the end.

#3

taught me

#4

You really turned into a lewd girl, didnt you Suzune-chan?

Page 62.
#3

Made me this way

Frozen beauty
Page 65.
#4

she always has sex

#5

They say she never does it with the same partner twice

#7

I was just curious about that but then I checked it up

#8

for the sake of winning a match.

#10

Moreover, she talks badly about her partner when she isnt satisfied,
thats a pretty poor personality she has, right?

Page 66.
#7

Instead of called you could use mentioned

Page 67.
#3

What did you do to her?

#4

Typo in arent (the apostrophe is misplaced)

#6

Cumming should be replaced with coming

#7

I had higher expectations because you said you loved me but this
isnt pleasing me at all.

#8

Really, what a useless man.

#11

Remove the by yourself, its redundant. Or maybe replace the whole

masturbate by yourself with do it yourself or something like that.

#13

Dont ever talk to me again

Page 68.
#4

Didnt I tell you not to talk to me ever again?

Page 69.
#2

But you havent found any partner, have you?

#4

That has nothing to do with you.

#6

hardly knows any other men, right?

#10

Ill show you that

Page 70.
#6

Come on

#7

youll quickly get an erection, wont you?

Page 72.
**1

He already held it in for three minutes

Page 73.
#1

You you said it was only a blowjob

#2

Giving a titty fuck is cheating

#8

You said it was only a blowjob you broke the rules!

Page 75.
#5

Thats right
themselves.

men

are

creatures

who

only

wanna

pleasure

#6

Dont you also think that women are nothing but tools for pleasure?

#9

Separate pleasure like this: plea-sure

Page 76.
#4

You were able to put it in, and yet youre still keeping with that
farce?

#6

Even though I dont love him, I can do it with any man you know? or
it can also be I can do it with any man even though I dont love him,
you know?

#8

Cute fits better than charming I think..

Page 77.
#1

Same as before.

#3

Its not usually shown on your face

#5

Maybe rephrase it like this Butthats irrelevant now, isnt it!?

Page 78.
**1

Typo in feels My body feels strange

**2

Could also be just So hot

#8

I dont understand how is love or cuteness related to sex

Page 79.
#8

You are finally satisfied with a mans penis, arent you!?

Page 80.
Basically replace all cummings with coming.
Page 82.
#10

There might be a translation mistake here, apparently it is the guy

thats saying What are you trying to say? or What are you
saying?, its not the girl.

#11

Try to separate championship like this: champion-ship

Experience!
Page 85.
#2

and if its not done in the same environment, practicing has no

meaning, does it?

#7

since I took you as

#8

and if I do something wrong give me an advice, ok?

Page 86.
**2

To answer Towada-sans seriousness

**3

Sounds better like this: Im sure its only research and it wont go
that far

Page 87.
#3

I told you to stay put

#6

just hold on for a little longer-

Page 89.
**2

Separate thrusting like this: Thrust-ing

**5

the places where my fingers cant/wont reach

Page 90.
#3

putting it between your breasts like that

Cums should be replaced with come

Page 92.
**1

youre joking right? It hasnt calmed even after coming once?

Page 94.
#3

Only talking about research/knowledge

**

You could shorten it to This is what sex feels like

Page 95.
#1

Use convincing instead of persuasive

**

What could I have doneafter you made me feel this kind of

pleasure---

Page 96.
#1

should I pull my penis out right now? and You can also pull it out
by yourself, cant you?

Page 98.

#6

Since when are you there!?

#9

Could be translated as Ththis isyou know, I miscalculated so

#10

Translation mistake. Here shes saying So thats why this isnt

really cheatingsee?

Restart
Page 99.
#2

It seems your grades are improving-

#3

Ill rely on you from now on!

#4

Well it cant be helped, huh-

Page 100.
#4

Listen why did you suddenly break up with me?...

#5

You know, even if you said we were breaking up if you do it onesidedly like that, I wont know your reasons.

#6

give me a chance to

Page 101.
#1

You had already fucked two other women

#2

You think I dont already know about them?

#3

After all, you were only going out with me for my body!

Page 102.
#2

Im not bullshitting you this time!

Page 103.
**2

This is so I can face my next love properly

Page 104.
#3

Typo in cooky cocky

#4

you absolutely loved sucking me, didnt you?

#6

has instead of have

Page 105.
#4

Ah~ you got wet just by giving me a blowjob

#8

Insides instead of inside also lol at ransacking (dont change it

though, its perfect as it is ;))

Page 106
#4

How much do you crave for sex?

#6

That Ive poured my sperm into this perverted hole.

Page 107.
#1

Question mark at the end.

Page 108.
**1

with this its all over

**2

I wont be able to face Akira again

Page 109.
#1

Whywhy are you putting it in as you like? Pull it out!

#6

are you? instead of arent you?

#8

Replace bitch with slut

Page 111.
#1

Remove the always

#4

would it? instead of wouldnt it?

Page 114.
**3

I think it will work out in the end.

Cross change
Page 116.

#6

You know, rubbing each others important parts

#13 As a token of our childhood friendship we, Maidou Kai and Kouta, will
show you!
Page 117.
#2

Yeah they said its been a long time since we spent time together.

#3

should have had contacted us before

#8
it~

Replace its no matter~ with thats okay~ or dont worry about

Page 118.
#1

is this about what I asked Mai before?

#5

Enough instead of sufficient

#12 someone is missing inside the sentence Doing it with someone

other than Shou-kun is or you can just put it like this: Doing it with
another man is
Page 120.
#3

Typo in Ami Mai

#5

I think you could delete the word own

#8

Your lips might say no

#9

Enjoying instead of expecting

Page 121.
#4

Comma between yourself and begging

#9

for real! is ok but what do you think of seriously!?

Page 122.
#7

Typo in thrustin thrusting

Page 123.
#3

my raw dick feels good, doesnt it?

Page 125.
#8

Is it okay as long as you have any dick deep inside!?

Page 127.
#7

Remove
the
besides.
Replace
lewd
with
erotic/perverted/sexy/whatever synonym. Replace hold it with
hold myself.

#9

pump lol thrust/plunge or even fuck are better in my opinion.

Page 128.
#1

vaginas instead of vagina

#5

coming instead of cumming

Page 129.
#2

come

Adult video heart

Page 132.
**2

No comma necessary between Ayumi-chan and after all?

**4

Its no exaggeration to call her our years school idol

#4

This will appear on the test-

**7

But she looks just like her

Page 134.
**1

theres a lot of chatter

#6

Could it be, is it about that?

Page 135.
**1

4th floor of our/the schools extra building

Page 136.

#3

Thank god! sounds better.

#6

Eh this is the mens restroom you know!?

Page 138.
#6
My breasts are a bit bigger than others/than the others, so I can
do this~
Page 139.
#3

Are you going to/gonna move?

Page 142.
#6

Replace grade with class

Page 144.
#4

There they already left, didnt they?

Page 146.
Replace cums with come
#6

I think an exclamation mark should be at the very end.

Page 147.
#1

The I in Im should be capital. Also use com- instead of cum-

Page 148.
#2

Could it be that you mistook me for my older sister? or Could it

be that youve mistaken me for my older sister?

#4

Yep Those boys before were seniors you know?

#6

Its the rumour that we started dating, havent you ever heard about
it?

#12

I also crave for more aggressive sex.

Hardcore Hospital
Page 150.

#2

How many times have I told you not to bite the dick!

#7

I already told you

Page 151.
#5

Remove the our

#8

disciplinary reasons!

Page 152.
#1

being able to work as a nurse, like mom

Page 154.
**1

Why did this guy prepare so fast!?

#8

my instructions?

Page 155.
**

what the chief nurse did

Page 156.
#3

See, you can do it if you try

Page 157.
#1

Ahh here it comes~, basically remove the it come,

Page 158.
#10

Am I right? Then theres not much you can do, right?

Page 159.
#4

Havent you used it? or Havent you been using it?

Page 160.
#8

Wah it really hasnt been used lately

Page 162.
Cumming Coming
Page 163.
#1
no?

Replace cums with come, also the I in Its should be capital

#3

Remove the out

Page 164.
#2

Question mark at the end instead of the exclamation one.

#6

Chief nurse~

A couples memoria

(this title is better than the one already there,

in my opinion, if you change it, dont forget to do so in the content and
ending pages as well)
Page 166.
#3

Replace election report with admission letter

#9

send instead of write

Page 167.
#5

Cumming coming. Too frequently so often

Page 169.
#11

Rephrase it to: Your admission letter was delivered here just now!

#15 result notification admission notification/notice/letter, also

23th 23rd
Page 170.
#1

Dont cry, I only lost a week worth of memories!

#2

But they arent some trivial memories

#5

Then you forgot about it, didnt you?

#6

Our first time- and also the things we talked about then

Page 174.
#8

Cum- com-

Page 175.
#10

something as perverted as that-

Page 176.
#2

I actually want to/wanna put it in right now

Page 179.
#1

cum come

#7

same as #1

Page 180.
#4

cum come

Page 181.
#5

cum come

#8

That thing youve been holding tightly over there what is it again?

#10

eh huh

#12

Maybe rephrase it to: I got accepted and are you sure thats it?

Since we are neighbors

(From the next room sounds wrong

just use this one instead)

Page 183.
#6

Needs a period at the end.

Page 184.
**1

Ahh this feels good

**2

Its like poison to my eyes- or Its just intoxicating-

Page 186.
#4

Didnt I tell you

Page 187.
#4

Needs period at the end.

#11

Same as #4 enjoyable stuff.

Page 188.
#1

Oh god a womans tongue

#2

Needs ellipsis at the end

#3, #4
To convey the feeling that her mouth is full better put it like
this: Ish ohay Feleafe ih indo my mouf hnn
#5

cumming coming

#6

Change it to You put the whole thing deep inside

Page 190.
#5

Hiro-kuns thing is so big~

#7

How is it? Does your first time inside a woman feel good?

#8

cum come

Page 192.
#5

feelt felt

#6

I havent came yet

Page 193.
#8

gently gentler

#9

needs period at the end.

Page 195.
#3

Trusted thrust or is touching

#5

Kuh didnt you say you wanted to come!?

Page 196.
#1

cum come

#6

cumming!! coming!!

Page 198.
#3

cum come

#4

That thing do you do that with anybody?

#5

No, I dont.

#6

If it hadnt been with someone I loved; I wouldnt have done it

#13

something I shouldnt have-!

Lets do some rehab! (better translated as that)

Page 199.
#2

Relationship relationships

#3

His acts are a hindrance to our schools morals!

#4
The schools disciplinary committee and us, the student council,
must
#5

For starters, why did he even do it with someone he doesnt love?

#6
Hey what should we do!? Its started again. Narasaki-kaichous
maidens speech!
Page 200.
**1

Here it is

Page 201.
**1

Isnt that the schools beauty committees president, Sawada-san!?

Page 203.
#1
Nirasaki is it? Thank you for your hard work in the student
council!

#7

true love and affection

#8

fulfill boost

#10

for us girls, doing

Page 204.
#4

Rephrase to If Nirasakis words are true, then prove it to me

#5

Prove it?

**1

If I can endure it

#10

Remove be

#12

School council student council

Page 205.
#4

erected hard

#5

already aroused from having your nipples played with?

Page 206.
#3

You know- it seemed a bit humid

#6

I ran when coming here thats when my sweat ahhh!

#10

if we werent

Page 207.
#4

Remove already

Page 208.
**6

Typo in dontnt dont

Page 209.
#1

then its time for the show or then its time to put it in or
then its time for the main event

Page 211.
#1

Will you admit that it feels good?

Page 212.
#5

you know it feels much better when came inside your womb!

Page 214.
#10

It was the best sex Ive ever had.

Afterword.
First paragraph
Could can
Second paragraph
gets loved by the others. gets loved by others.
Third paragraph
esteemed important
Fourth paragraph
whove always helped me!