By: Samuel Painter

Introduction: Necessary : Mostly good, could forecast rest of proposal

Problem: Not Stated. : Should have
Objectives: Necessary: Gave some questions that are not objectives. If the objective is to answer
those questions then your Problem or goal are not sufficiently developed
Solution: Not Stated. : Should have
Method: Not Stated : Not too important in our case. not a requirement
Resources: Not Stated : Fine
Schedule : Necessary : No time estimation
Qualifications: Necessary : good explanation
Management : Not Stated : Fine
Costs: Necessary: Should be expanded to display some reasoning.

By: Joseph Birch

Great formatting
Objectives are clear and concise.
Your Qualifications are great for this project.
I would make Solutions its own section.
There is no Conclusion section for this memo.
Your Schedule is well written. Instead of totaling up the costs of Phase 1, 2, 3, explain in a Cost
section as to where costs are being generated.