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Progress Report

by Mario Salguero

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this header should come first, and it needs


a different title

this 1st sent makes it sound like the proposal is all you've
finished. Try a topic sentence.

nice, clean, consistent design: good.

good details at the end

do
you
mean
steps?

remember, only 5 total guides are required.

Progress Report
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE

GENERAL COMMENTS

93

Instructor

/100

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this header should come f irst, and it needs a dif f erent title

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this 1st sent makes it sound like the proposal is all you've f inished. T ry a

topic sentence.

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nice, clean, consistent design: good.

details add
by adding specif ic details here, you'll let your readers know exactly what you're claiming.

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good details at the end

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do you mean steps?

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remember, only 5 total guides are required.

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RUBRIC: IFIXIT PROGRESS REPORT RUBRIC

CRIT ERIA 1

Prof icient

Form & Organization


ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or


do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING

Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT

Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED

Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content


concisely, specif ically, and accurately

CRIT ERION 2

Advanced

Content & Persuasiveness


ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

T he report f ails to describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
work; the group seems in danger of not f inishing the project on time.

DEVELOPING

Descriptions of the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work may be
vague; evidence of the group's ability to complete the project on time isn't quite
convincing.

PROFICIENT

Some specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
work adequately; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

ADVANCED

Specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work
directly and aptly; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

CRIT ERION 3

Advanced

Appearance
ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
the report.

DEVELOPING

White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT

White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED

White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4
Language

Prof icient

ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability.

DEVELOPING

Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability or otherwise distract


f rom meaning.

PROFICIENT

Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom
meaning.

ADVANCED

Outstanding control of language, including ef f ective diction and sentence variety.