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taken so long to raise the interest rates. Fed board members are aware that
if they do not do it in the precise moment, the raise could be catastrophic for
the world economy. The current interest rates dilemma is a very interesting
topic and I would love to write about it for several reasons. First of all, the
impact on an eventual interest raise is a doubt, no one can say exactly what
will happen and I enjoy reading different economists' opinions on this debate,
each of them have their own hypothesis. Also, an eventual interest rate rise
in the US will have tremendous impact on other nations' economies, which is
making them adapt to the Fed's different decision scenarios. Developing
countries are the ones that will suffer the most consequences. As US plans to
raise interest rates, many capital from these developing nations is being
taken out from their countries' currency to buy US dollars and hold American
currency until the eventual interest raise. Once the Fed would raise interests,
investors would allocate their capital to receive more interest payments at
the same level of risk. I would like to know in detail how nations are
preparing for this eventual event and how they will be affected. Another
aspect, and the one I consider the most important one, that makes me very
excited about writing over this debate is the fact I do not know enough on
this topic to have an opinion. By researching and writing about it, I expect to
learn in detail more on this topic, and as I get to know more over this debate
I am sure I will be able to have my own opinion on this fascinating issue.
In order to analyze in deep this dilemma that the US is going through
there has to be thoughtful research on the topic. There are many academic
SOURCES:
Interest Rates, Inflation, and Federal Reserve Policy Since 1980
Peter N. Ireland
Journal of Money, Credit and Banking
Vol. 32, No. 3, Part 1 (Aug., 2000) , pp. 417-434
Published by: Ohio State University Press
Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/2601173
The Feds Plan to Hike Interest Rates. The Economist. The Economist
Newspaper, 31 Aug. 2015. Web. 21 Sept. 2015.
approach that is harder for professors to do. Students know exactly in what
other classmates are struggling as they went through the same process to do
the assignment. This makes student feedback very precise and extremely
helpful. Also, the audience for this first assignment are other students. There
is nothing better than receiving feedback from the same audience you will
address in the future.
Being that said I would like to thank my classmates Saskia Vasilef and
Maram Alattas for their very helpful and thoughtful feedback. From Saskia I
realized that I was having grammar mistakes, I tried to fix them all for the
final draft. Also she explained me why I needed to cover in more detail what
would be the impact of an eventual interest raise for specifics industries. For
my final draft I included a paragraph covering why every industry,
corporation and citizen would be affected with the eventual interest raise.
From Mara's feedback I realized that that not all students are economics
major, therefore I need to clarify some definitions and principles that I was
taking from granted that all knew. Also, I really appreciate her comments on
the academic essay I incorporated to my paper. She explained me and
convinced me that I had to create a connection between the essay
incorporated and the current debate I was covering. The only thing I did not
follow from Mara's recommendations was changing the essay incorporated,
which was published in 2000, for a more recent one. After asking professor
Enos and analyzing it in detail I am convinced that even though is old, the
economic principles from 2000 and today are the same. Despite I did not
agree with Mara on this, I appreciate her comment since it made me realize
how powerful and convincing was the essay incorporated to my paper.
Professor's feedback was essential to have what I believe it is a final
strong and convincing essay. I really appreciate professor's feedback for our
drafts, it really helped a lot, in each of the points she mentioned I learned
something new to improve for my essay. There were some basic
recommendations that made me edit my essay immediately, such as the fact
that articles titles should be in quotes, and journal titles italicized. Another
simple recommendation that clarified a lot to me was avoiding casual 1st
person tone since it does not sound completely convincing. And the last
simple recommendation that made me change my essay was reading the
essay out loud. By doing so I realized how I was missing some commas.
Regarding the academic essay incorporated to our papers I found particularly
helpful the difference the professor mentioned of summary versus analysis. I
realized that I was lacking analysis on my paper. My first draft had much
summary but not much analysis, for my final draft I tried to be more analytic.
I did not only learned of interest rates by doing this paper but I am
confident that I improved my writing. The hardest part of this essay was
maintaining it short. When I started for the first time writing on the topic I
realized that I had more than 1800 words, which was way too much. I had to
be more direct and precise and avoid unnecessary information in order to get
close to 1000 words. Also, I learned how to analyze an academic essay and
translate it into a more friendly tone for fellow classmates. It was not easy
but I am happy to read my final draft now and see how I managed to convert
those complex definitions into a completely new tone.