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JakeBeekmann
Whostosaythatit'snotjustifiedforonetoconsumemarijuanainordertoprovidesecurityforcitizens
onasmallscale?Infact,BenjaminFranklinonceacknowledged,Anysocietythatwillgiveupalittle
libertytogainalittlesecuritywilldeserveneitherandloseboth.It'sabouttimetheFederalGovernment
receivesawakeupcallandrealizesthatmarijuanaprohibitionhasfaileddramatically.Theyhavedenied
citizensthelibertytoconsumeasubstancewithstrongmedicalproperties,aswellasavastamountof
recreationalpleasure.Ithasbeenalmost40yearssinceCongresspassedthecurrentbanonmarijuana,
whileinflictingimpairmentonsocietyforasubstancefarlessdangerousthanalcohol.Thetimeislong
overdueforCongresstorepealthatdecision.InordertoensurejusticeamongcitizensoftheU.S,the
federalgovernmentmustlegalizemedicalmarijuanatoincreasetheeconomicopportunitythatis
currentlyuntapped.Thelegalproductshouldbetaxed,andthetaxwindfallsshouldbeusedprimarilyto
fundourstrappedU.S.publiceducationsystem.(
Withregardstothis,theU.S.facesasubstantialamountoffederaldeficitsaccordingtoCNNMoney,
leavingusmorethan$18.1trillionorabout74%ofGDP(GrossDomesticProduct)indebt
.
Federal
spendinghastakenamajorcutinthelastfewyearsandit'sabouttimethatthedilemmafacesaquick
improvement.Thelegalizationofmarijuanacouldboosteconomicopportunityconsiderablyandsupport
thefederalgovernmentspending.Accordingto
ForbesMagazine,
therewasarecentlayoffof200,000
oilfieldworkers.Theincreaseofjobsnationwidethroughlegalizationofcannabiscouldfulfillthe
massivejoblossandcreatemoreopportunityforthosewhostrugglefromsevereeconomicdepression.
Opponentstomarijuanalegalizationpointtoitsschedule1status,claimingthatpothasahighpotential
forabuseandhasbeenrecordedasaharmfuldrug.However,basedonrecentstudiesrecorded
byCableNewsNetwork(CNN),marijuanahasproventohavepositiveeffectsonmedicalpatientsthat
experienceseizures,chronicpain,stress,multiplesclerosis,Crohn'sdisease,andHIV.Inarecentreport
donebytheEpilepsyFoundation,
Seizuresdecreasedbyanaverageof54%in137peoplewho
completed12weeksonEpidiolex.Clearly,
medicallyprescribedcannabishasprovidedpositiveresults
tofamiliesacrossthenation.Althoughitisrecommendedthatfurthersafetyinformationisacquiredfor
longtermuseandeffectsonchildren.Theevidencesupportsthatitmustbeconsideredtoberescheduled
toaSchedule2drug.Stillwiththepotentialforabuse,whileopenformedicaluse.
Recognizingthepublicmoralityassociatedwithstatesthathavemarijuanalegislation,Iwouldsuggestwe
mustprotectthelibertyofourcitizensasawhole.Accordingto19thcenturyUtilitarianphilosopher,John
StuartMill,Theonlypurposeforwhichpowercanberightfullyexercisedoveranymemberofa
civilizedcommunity,againsthiswill,istopreventharmtoothers.Soasacountrythathasclearly
definedjusticeasliberty,shouldn'titbejustifiedtoallowadultsthelibertytodistinguishmoralsofdrug
consumptionaslongasitdoesnotposeharmtoothers?Ofcourseitshould,althoughifindividual
libertieswereviolatedinrelationtomarijuana,thenitshouldbejustifiedforthegovernmentregulatethe
industry.
Perhapswemustaddresstheconcernsrelatedtomarijuanaconsumptionbyunderliningthatwhen
someonedecidestousemarijuanainanaddictivemanner,itforcespeopletolosecontrolofthemselves,
whileinflictingharmonthepeoplearoundthem.Thismaycausealargedecreaseincivillibertiesif
peopleuseitthroughselfdestructionandexposuretoyoungchildren.Millmightbelievethatthe
reductionofcivillibertiesisimmoraliflegalizationofmarijuanaisnotmade.However,Millsdoesargue
thatoncesomeoneslibertiescauseharmtoothersortosocietyasawhole,thenthatlibertyshouldnotbe
tolerated.Infact,theonlyformofgovernmentMillwouldjustifyisonethathelpsprotectindividuals
fromtheft,fraudorphysicalharm.Basedonthatreasoning,Iwouldarguethatsometypesofregulation
arejustifiedinordertobothprotectindividuallibertyandsecurity.AlthoughIagreewithMills
reasoning,Ialsobelievethatourgovernmentneedstoputfocusintocitizensthatareexperiencingthe
morallyundesirableunemploymentrate.
TheHuffingtonPost
hassuggestedthattaxmoneyearnedfrommarijuanasalesshallbepouredintothe
U.S.educationsystems,inordertoprovidethelowerclasswithaffordableeducationandeducationthat
teacheschildrentherisksthatareassociatedwithdrugconsumption.Inaddition,Iwouldsuggestthata
percentageofthetaxationbededicatedtosubstanceabuseandmentalhealthprogramsinordertoaddress
theindividualsthatsufferfromdrugaddiction.AccordingtotheNationalInstituteofDrugAbuse,17
percentofindividualsthatbeginusingTHCintheirteenscanbecomedependentonotherillegaland
harmfulsubstancesintheirdailylives.Studieshavealsoshownthat18.2percentoftheadultpopulation
sufferfrommentalillnesswhichcanoftentimesrelatetosubstanceabuse.Unfortunately,therearenot
enoughprogramsinthecountrytoaddresstheseissues.Itwouldbebeneficialtohavefederalfunding
availabletosupportthisneed.
OnefurtherregulatorymeasureIwouldrecommendthefederalgovernmenttotakewouldbetofollow
ColoradosproceduresbypassingafederalAmendmentsimilartoColoradosAmendment64,which
states,Intheinterestofthehealthandpublicsafetyofourcitizenry,thepeopleofthestateofColorado
furtherfindanddeclarethatmarijuanashouldberegulatedinamannersimilartoalcohol.Thisincludes
providingidentificationwhichprovesappropriateage,strictbackgroundchecksformedicalmarijuana
licensing,andtaxationthatdirectlyfundstheeducationsystemintheU.S.Iwouldalsorecommendthat
thereberegulatorymeasuresonthepotencyandlevelofmarijuanainordertoprotectchildrenandteens
whomightinadvertently(orpurposely)consumemarijuana.
Ourcountrywouldbenefitsubstantiallythroughtheeconomicopportunityitwouldcreateandbythe
medicalusesforthosesufferingfromdiseaseanddebilitatingconditions.Legalizingmarijuanaonthe
federallevelwillrestorelibertytoourcitizensatasmallmoralcost,butwillprovideahugepublicgain
intermsoftaxdollarsandwillreestablishjusticeamongcitizens.
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______Areyourquotessetupcorrectly?(seethestudentexamples)
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RhetoricandArgumentation___________/10x2.5=_____/25
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oftheparagraphorpaper?
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______Doyouincludeethos,pathosANDlogosinawaythatisrhetoricallyeffective?
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1. Aconnectiontothemoralphilosophythatsupportsyourperspectiveonjusticeasitrelatestothe
issueathand(Utilitarianism,Libertarianism,Deontology,orRawlsJusticeasFairness)
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ArtofPersuasionpowerpoint.Theseelementsinclude:Arrangement,aesthetics,conciseness,toneand
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article?
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perspectiveonjusticeregardingyourpoliticalissue)?
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