TASK 1

The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates data about visits to two new music websites , namely Music
Choice and Pop Parade, in a fifteen-day period.
= The line graph illustrates data about visits to two new music websites namely Music Choice and
Pop Parade, in a fifteen-day period.

According to the graph, the initial number of visits to Pop Parade was just under
120,000. The figure remained stable during the first three days. Then it dropped
sharply to the bottom at only about 30,000 in the 7th day. After that, the number
started to recover. Despite certain intense fluctuation, the total visits shot up to the peak
at approximately 170,000 in the last day.
= According to the graph, the initial number of visits to Pop Parade was just under 120,000. The
figure remained stable during the first three days. Then it dropped sharply to the bottom at only
about 30,000 on the 7th day. After that, the number started to recover. Despite certain intense
fluctuation, the total visits rapidly hit the peak at approximately 170,000 on its 15th day.

On the other hand, Music Choice was far less popular than its counterpart as it only
enjoyed 40,000 visits at the very beginning, merely one-third of that of Pop Parade.
And the figure fluctuated slightly during the following 10 days with almost no increase.
However, from the 11th-day onwards, it soared rapidly to 120,000 within 24 hours

and leveled off at that point for another two days by day 14. Nevertheless, the number
of visits eventually declined to less than 80,000 in day 15.
=On the other hand, Music Choice was far less popular than its counterpart as it only enjoyed
40,000 visits at the very beginning, merely one-third of that of Pop Parade. Moreover, the figure
fluctuated slightly from the 4th day until the 10th day of its airing with almost no increase.
However, on its 11th-day onwards, it soared rapidly to 120,000 within 24 hours and leveled off at
that point for another two days by day 14. Nevertheless, the number of visits eventually declined
to less than 80,000 on its 15th day.

In conclusion, Pop Parade enjoys more popularity than its rival Music Choice because
the average number of its page views vastly outnumbers that of Music Choice.
= In conclusion, Pop Parade enjoys more popularity than its rival Music Choice because the
average number of its page views vastly outnumbered that of Music Choice.

The report was able to explain or describe the chart provided in the question with minimal
mistakes. For the betterment of the report, it would be better for the writer to be aware about the
proper usage of IN and ON prepositions. IN is mainly used for years and others whereas ON is
used for days and dates. I give the essay a band score of 6.5