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Essential Question
Have the realities of war increased levels of PostTraumatic Stress Disorder and do current levels of
regulation for nationally funded benefits support
veterans in the way they are intended?
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Overview
Whole Group Activity
Materials for Students
Materials for Teachers
Appendix: Print-friendly Texts,
Notes and Scaffolds
Task Rational
Through this Performance Task, students build on their
study of literary and informational texts to explore
contemporary opinions on an issue. By integrating
their prior knowledge of literary texts with current
research on a debatable topic, students will
demonstrate their Common Core Reading and Writing
skills through analysis and argumentative response.
Course Content
Scorable Products
Student responses to the constructedresponse research questions at the end of Part
1 and the argumentative report completed in
Part 2 will be scored. Notes completed in Part
1 and pre-writing and drafting in Part 2 will
not be scored
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Present on a projector (or distribute a handout of) the image of World War I amputees
(see attached).
After giving students a moment to look at the image, ask, What do you think this
photograph is of? Based on our studies this semester, what do you know about the
challenges facing soldiers who fought in World War I? What made their experience
unique and how did they deal with this reality?
After taking a few responses, affirm or state that the image is of amputees. In
comparison to past wars, World War I was one of the bloodiest in history; ten million
soldiers were killed along with an estimated ten million civilians. These numbers were
unique because of the technological advances that changed the quality of an armed
conflict at that time.
Invite students to briefly discuss what they remember from their Great War studies.
Discuss the ways that characters in the novel All Quiet on the Western Front felt about
war and the various issues they dealt with and faced as soldiers fighting in it.
After students have recalled prior knowledge via this initial discussion, have them
examine the next visual, a political cartoon that shows a modern day soldier carrying
both his literal and metaphorical burdens (see attached).
Ask students if they believe the various issues Paul and his comrades faced in the novel
are similar to todays service member. What are some similarities and differences?
Once students have finished discussing the visual stimuli, pass out the epigraph
worksheet (see attached). As individuals, or in groups, have students analyze the
epigraph of the novel in an effort to understand the central theme and purpose of the
work. Use the guiding questions to focus discussion. A teacher key has been provided
(see attached).
Say to the students, In the performance task that you are going to participate in today,
you will learn more about issues facing veterans and those touched by war. Now that
you have studied the plight of the soldier through Paul and his comrades, you will focus
your new knowledge of that experience to reflect on warfare today. Specifically, you will
be studying the debate over the extent to which benefits and interventions are offered
to veterans suffering from P.T.S.D and other traumas that result from war. Eventually
you will need to take a position on what these regulations should be and the potential
consequences and benefits of having them in place.
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After questions and comments have been addressed, the Part I of the task can begin.
Source
World War I amputee
photograph
Veterans Day 2009
political cartoon
Find at:
http://www.worldwar1.com/
photos/eww207.jpg
http://cdn.americanprogress.
org/wpcontent/uploads/cartoons/20
09/11/img/111009.jpg
Important to Know
Unit of soldiers who have suffered
amputations as a result of active duty.
Cartoon of soldier carrying literal and
metaphorical baggage as a result of active
duty.
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Using a dictionary, define epigraph. (Be sure to find the most relevant definition.)
2)
Remarque says that this book is not intended to be what? What does he mean by this?
3)
In the second sentence, Remarque describes the intended purpose of the novel. Explain
this statement.
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Why do you think that Remarque included the first sentence? Why did he not just limit
the epigraph to the second sentence?
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From your interpretation of the epigraph, what would you say is the central theme of All
Quiet on the Western Front? In your opinion, is this theme relevant for the experience of
veterans today? Why or why not?
Textual Analysis: Epigraph/ Erich Maria Remarques All Quiet on the Western Front
(TEACHER)
1) Using a dictionary, define epigraph. (Be sure to find the most relevant definition.)
a quotation set at the beginning of a literary work or one of its divisions to suggest its theme
2) Remarque says that this book is not intended to be what? What does he mean by this?
He isnt pointing fingers (accusation), taking blame (confession), or glorifying (adventure) the
content about which he writes.
3) In the second sentence, Remarque describes the intended purpose of the novel. Explain this
statement.
The novel will talk about the survivors of war. (escaped shellsbut were [nevertheless]
destroyed.)
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Your Assignment
After forming in 1899 as an organization to help aid veterans of the SpanishAmerican War, the Veterans of Foreign War (VFW) has served as an organization
supporting the interests and well-being of individuals who have been touched by
armed conflict abroad.
In an effort to ensure that veterans are respected for their service, always receive their
earned entitlements, and are recognized for the sacrifices they and their loved ones have made
on behalf of the American populace, the VFW has been instrumental in advocating for
numerous recognitions and benefits for veterans. Annually, the nearly 2 million members of the
VFW and its Auxiliaries contribute more than 8.6 million hours of volunteerism in the
community; time that is spent but not limited to lobbying for the passing of legislation affecting
veterans, expanding medical care and health benefits, and providing much needed educational
initiatives for active-duty members and their families.
After learning about the local chapter of the VFW and its missions alignment with your own
views, you decide to shadow a doctor in your towns Veterans Affairs (VA) hospital. Once your
internship starts, you discover that the doctor, Dr. Baumer, has become actively involved with
diagnosing veterans with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (P.T.S.D.), a recent controversy in the
national government.
The Department of Veterans Affairs is preparing to issue new rules to make it easier for
veterans who have been diagnosed with PTSD to receive disability benefits. The new
regulations, which apply to veterans of all wars and will cost as much as $5 billion over several
years, essentially eliminate a requirement that veterans document specific events that might
have caused their P.T.S.D. and simply require those with the illness to show that they served in
a war zone.
Considering your interest in veterans and their well-being, Dr. Baumer suggests you take note
of this debate. After a conversation on your rounds, he asks you if, given the research that
exists about P.T.S.D., are these new regulations a step forward?
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Your Task
You will conduct research on the pros and cons of the changes being made by the Department
of Veterans Affairs pertaining to the requirements for P.T.S.D. diagnosis for veterans. Once you
have reviewed the sources provided, you will then write a report arguing your opinion on the
nuances of the issue to be shared with Dr. Baumer based on the research you have conducted.
You have 50 minutes to complete this task.
Steps to Follow
In order to plan and compose your report, you will do all of the following:
1. Review and evaluate the sources provided on the pros and cons of your topic.
2. Make notes about the information from the sources.
3. Answer two questions about the sources.
Research Questions
After you have reviewed the sources, answer the questions below. Your answers to these
questions will be scored. Also, they will help you think about the sources you have read and
viewed, which should help you write your report. Answer the questions in the spaces provided
below each question.
Question 1:
From the sources you have reviewed, summarize 3 major arguments that support and 3 major
arguments that oppose the new rules/regulations for P.T.S.D. benefits adopted by the United
States Department of Veterans Affairs. For each of the arguments, cite at least one source that
supports that point of view.
To begin, you should consider:
Based upon the sources provided, what appears to be the crux of the debate influencing our
countrys current policy for providing P.T.S.D. benefits? Based upon the issue, what are the
arguments in favor of the proposed changes versus against them?
Question 2:
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Research
Source
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How reliable is
evidence from
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Your Assignment
Back in Dr. Baumers office, you start to hand him your notes on the pros and cons of the
proposed changes to P.T.S.D. benefits, but he waves away your papers.
Part of being an effective doctor working with veterans and their families like I do is trusting in
your research and using your voice to advocate for people who may lack one, he says.
Historically, our partnership with VFW has been our ability as volunteers to affect change in the
lives of the veterans we work so hard to care for. As a doctor here at the VA hospital, however,
my job is to diagnose, not question the benefits or sanctions that procure them. Instead of
sharing your thoughts with me on this issue, go ahead and write an open letter to the VFW
advocating for your point of view on our nations changes to these regulations. Do these new
rules for P.T.S.D. benefits actually help veterans and by extension our country? Or have we
missed the mark? Be sure that your recommendation acknowledges both sides of the issue so
that your audience knows that you have considered the it carefully. Ill review your letter
tonight and hopefully get your thoughts published in our local chapters newsletter.
Write an argumentative report that recommends the position that you believe your
representatives should take on humanitarian outreach and aid in areas where violations are
occurring. Support your claim with evidence from the sources you have read and viewed. You
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Response Guidelines
Your report will be scored on the following criteria:
1. Statement of purpose / focus and organization: How well did you clearly state your claim on
the topic, maintain your focus, and address the alternate and opposing claims? How well did
your ideas logically flow from the introduction to conclusion using effective transitions? How
well did you stay on topic throughout the report?
2. Elaboration of evidence: How well did you elaborate your arguments and discussion of
counterarguments, citing evidence from your sources? How well did you effectively express
ideas using precise language and vocabulary that were appropriate for the audience and
purpose of your report?
3. Conventions: How well did you follow the rules of usage, punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling?
To Begin Work
Manage your time carefully so that you can:
plan your report
write your report
revise and edit for a final draft
Word-processing tools and spell check are available to you. Type your response in the space
provided.
Write as much as you need to fulfill the requirements of the task; you are not limited by the
size of the response area on the screen.
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http://www.scientificamerican.com/ar
ticle/post-traumatic-stresstrap/?page=1
http://roomfordebate.blogs.nytimes.c
om/2010/07/08/should-moreveterans-get-p-t-s-dbenefits/?_php=true&_type=blogs&_r
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http://www.washingtonpost.com/worl
d/national-security/afghan-rampagesuspect-robert-bales-was-a-soldierstrained-bydeployments/2012/03/17/gIQAwmRSJ
S_story_1.html
http://www.nytimes.com/2010/07/08/
us/08vets.html?pagewanted=print
TIME:
The Unintended
Consequences of the
Current PTSD
Diagnosis
http://nation.time.com/2012/11/27/th
e-unintended-consequences-of-thecurrent-ptsd-diagnosis/
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Scoring Rubrics
Scorable Constructed Response Part I
Question 1:
2 Point Rubric
Using Evidence (CCSS RI.7, RI.8, W.7, W.9)
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The response gives sufficient evidence of the students ability to cite evidence
to support arguments and/or ideas.
The response gives limited evidence of the students ability to cite evidence to
support arguments and/or ideas.
Question 2:
2 Point Rubric
Evaluating Sources and Information (CCSS RI.8, W.8)
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The response gives sufficient evidence of the students ability to evaluate the
credibility, completeness, relevancy, and/or accuracy of the information and
sources.
The response gives limited evidence of the students ability to evaluate the
credibility, completeness, relevancy, and/or accuracy of the information and
sources.
The response receives no credit if it provides no evidence of the students
ability to evaluate the credibility, completeness, relevancy, and/or accuracy of
the information and sources..
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Focus and
Organizatio
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variety of transitional
strategies to clarify
the relationships
between and among
ideas
of
ideas from beginning
to end
introduction
and conclusion for
intended audience
and purpose
Evidence and
Elaboration
NS
The response is
adequately sustained
and generally focused:
The response is
somewhat sustained
and may have a
minor drift in focus:
Insufficient,
illegible, in a
language
other than
English,
incoherent,
off-topic, or
off-purpose
writing
mostly maintained,
though some loosely
related material may
be present
ided for
the claim is adequate
within the purpose,
audience, and task
focused on the
claim but is
insufficiently
sustained, or
brief
major drift
issue may be
somewhat unclear
and/
confusing or
ambiguous
of
transitional
strategies
and/or little variety
transitional
strategies are
evident
extraneous ideas
may intrude
Insufficient,
illegible, in a
language
other than
English,
incoherent,
off-topic, or
off-purpose
writing
progression
of ideas from
beginning to end
introduction, if
present, are weak
among ideas
introduction and
conclusion
inconsistent,
connection among
ideas
The response
provides
uneven, cursory
support/evidence
for
the writers claim
that
includes partial or
uneven use of
sources,
facts, and details.
The
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The response
provides minimal
support/
evidence
for the writers
claim that
includes
little or no use of
sources, facts,
and
details:
and
Insufficient,
illegible, in a
language
other than
English,
incoherent,
off-topic, or
off-purpose
writing
from
sources is integrated,
comprehensive,
relevant, and
concrete
variety of elaborative
techniques
Effect on
Audience
response achieves
little
depth:
some elaborative
techniques
sources is weakly
integrated, and
citations, if present,
are uneven
The response
adequately expresses
ideas, employing a
mix of precise with
more general
language:
use of domainspecific vocabulary is
generally appropriate
for the audience and
purpose
use
of elaborative
techniques
The response
expresses ideas
unevenly, using
simplistic
language:
use of domainspecific vocabulary
may at times be
inappropriate for
the audience and
purpose
evidence
from sources is
minimal, absent,
incorrect, or
irrelevant
The responses
expression of
ideas
is vague, lacks
clarity, or is
confusing:
language or
domain-specific
vocabulary
Insufficient,
illegible, in a
language
other than
English,
incoherent,
off-topic, or
off-purpose
writing
sense of
audience and
purpose
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The response demonstrates a partial
command of conventions:
errors in usage may obscure meaning
inconsistent use of punctuation,
capitalization
NS
Insufficient, illegible, in a language
other than English, incoherent, offtopic, or off-purpose writing
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W. 1Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning
and relevant and sufficient evidence.
W.4Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to
task, purpose, and audience.
W.7Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions, demonstrating
understanding of the subject under investigation.
W.8Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, assess the credibility and accuracy
of each source, and integrate the information while avoiding plagiarism.
W.9Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.
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NOTES about Stimuli If sources in the selected grouping of texts do not meet an educators
needs, excerpts from WCPSS approved English II texts may be
substituted. It may be enriching for students to be able to supplement
their research with texts they may be familiar with from their studies.
Suggestions for supplemental referencing could include:
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