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(Tobeginwith),the_________developeda___________thatallowedthemto
________________________.

(Additionally),the___________was___________andhelpedthemto
________________________.

(Moreover),the____________were[adjective]inregardstotheir__________.

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Becauseofthis,itisclearthat_____________________.

Sincethe_________did/had_____________,itiscertainthatthey________________.

TheEgyptianshadacivilizationbecausetheyhavelandthathadtheNileRiver,a
government,aneconomy,asocialstructure,religion,andculture.
TheEgyptianshada
government,whichmadelaws.mostpowerinEgypt.Hewasthepersonwhomadeallthe
lawsforEgypt.Thepharaohhadthreegroupsofpeoplethatworkedforhim.Onegroupwas
the
priests
,whoprayedtothegodsandpracticedreligiousceremonies
Thepharaohhadthe
mostpowerinEgypt.HewasthepersonwhomadeallthelawsforEgypt.Hehadthree
groupsofpeoplethatworkedforhim.Onegroupwasthepriests,whoprayedtothegodsand
practicedreligiousceremonies.
theyhavemakethemundertheking'syesbecausetheyhaveis
makethemhavemoremoneyandpowerthentheslave
andthesocialstructureitwhatmakea
differentjobsanddifferentpeopleofthesocialstructure.forexampletheymakesocialstructure
whentheybuildthepyramidlikeforwhat'sthemostpoweronEgyptisphorosbutthefarmers
bushedtheblocksandtheynothaveanypowerbecausetheynotmakealaws,andtheslaves
whoputtheblocksonthepyramidandthegovernmentwhogevthelaws.
itmadeofthe
differentpeopleandjobstobecausesocialismeandifferentpeopleandstructuremeanthey
starttomakeasocial.
theytriedtomakeadifferencejobstomakedifferentlife.
Government
andsocialstructuremakeonethinkisEgyptians.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aZeXm9IzqzotbltZj6I5r8Y0b6ilRa_B5ljIKgU8S0c/ed
it

economyiswhereyoucanhaveatradeoramoany
andthetradeisthepeopleiscan
switchthinkwithotherlikefoodwithafoodandstuffwithstof(waterfoodbooksandcloth)but
nowthepeopleusethemonybutthereafewpeoplethatstillusetrade
Theeconomyof

pharaonicEgypthasbeencalledanancientcommandeconomy,butoneshouldalways
rememberthatsuchmoderndefinitionsarenotasaptasonewouldhopefor.
theyremeasured

andreassignedthelandaftereveryinundationbasedonpastassignments,assessedtheexpected
crops,collectedpartoftheproduceastaxes,storedandredistributedittothoseonthestate'spay
lists.
thenileriverhelpedEgyptianstradegoodsandithelpedthemavoidmovinggoodsbyfoot
throughthedesert
.StorageandredistributionwereEgyptwasapatchworkofmostlyautarkic
householdsanddomains.Afterthetaxeswerepaid,domainadministratorsandsuccessful
householdersstoredsurplusesforfutureuseorexchangedthembybarteronthe
market
,an
institutionthenatureofwhichisremarkablybadlyunderstood.
generallydoneonalocalbasis.
Regionalfacilitiesprovidedproduceincasetherewasashortfallinoneofthelocalcentres.
The
percentageofproduceandevenmanufacturedgoodswhichreachedmarketswasprobably
small.Itmayhavebeenofmarginalimportancetothesurvivaloftheindividualproducer,but
providedpartoftheeconomicbaseforthedevelopingEgyptianhighculture

http://www.reshafim.org.il/ad/egypt/economy/