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BAR EVENING/NIGHTIME
TITLES: SOUTH END, LONDON PRESENT DAY
1. Bright shining disco lights, dotted around the bar, with disco
and popping 80s symbols like Peace, Retro and emphasising
spot lights. Between the bar is located a huge retro squared
dance floor linking to the genre of the themed music night. A
spate area where its packed with crowds of men and woman
drinking and laughing. The upbeat music engages a lot of
people to the dance floor. Signs read Tropical 80s Groove in
big blue LED retro lighting.
2. The Basic introduction to the female character jenny as it is
showing a close up of her figure (it captures small areas of her
like her hair and side of her face and then her hand when she is
retreating a drinking from the bar. Creates the mood of mystery
as its hiding her character away not showing all of who she is
from the very beginning. There is speak if her thanking the bar
man when the drink is passed to her.
BAR MAN
Your Drink madam
JENNY
Thank You
3. Close up shot of the side of jennys face, still not revealing of
who she is but a man whispering in her ear. You spotted them
yet? creating that mood of mystery and tension. Who is they?
Whats going to happen etc? This is when its a slow process of
introducing the two main characters of the production. Jenny
and Tim who are both undercover detectives that are playing
their part in capture the criminals who are going to the event
they are at (80s Night Club)
TIM
You spotted them yet?
JENNY
No, you?

4. Medium shot of the surround crowd creating the 80s

vibe, retro clothing, dancing and singing to artists like
Michael Jackson, Whitney Huston, Prince etc. Tim and
Jenny are dancing on the bright and colourful dance floor
blending in with the crowd to make sure that there cover
isnt blown.
Everyones singing, dancing and having a really good
laugh, enjoying the night.
They make sure they ae fully equipped with weapons
(Guns) and carrying photos of each individual criminals
profile.
Time is ticking

5. Tim looking down at his watch as the time is slowly

ticking. Its a close up of the watch.
6. A Shot of Tim reaching in to check he has the gun
ready and prepared in his pocket to use it immediately
if necessary in the detective case.
7. A Massive BOOM pop art font comes up on the
screen emphasising something exciting and unknown
has just happened!
8. The Door slams open with a group of shadowed men
walk through.
It leaves raising questions. Are these the men? Why are
they here, what are they going to do etc.
9. Everyone that is within the party, turns to look at the
group of men who are current standing armed with
weapons at the door. The lead man turns to his men.
LEAD GANG MEMBER (RODGER)
Lets Get Started
The tension of what they are cable of do and can the
two detective really take down all of this armed gang in
a Night Club.
10. Close Up of the Lead member of the Gang (Rodger)
hand raised as he triggers a gun shot.
The words BANG come up on the top.
11. People are terrified and trying to run away from the
gun shots, shouting and screaming everywhere. People
running round the areas however is trying to avoid
being attack of shot by the gang.
GROUP (EVERYBODY)
AHH
The music is stopped immediately as the gang have
entered the bar and begin the shooting.

12. Close up of Jenny pulling the gun out of her pocket,

closing getting ready for what could be a shot out
between the cops and the gang. The high tension
atmosphere is rising. Whats going to happen within the
next few seconds? This could be vital to the entire case if
a wrong move is made everything could change for the
worse.
13. Long shot of the gang and notice that there is a gun
pointing in their direction which is aimed at the main
leader Rodger by Detective Tim. The bar at this point has
completely wipe out empty.
The Bar consist of the two detectives and the gang. Its
seen as a very tension War that is going to happen. Who
will make the first move? What consequences will
happen if the wrong move is made?
14. Extreme Close up of Tim and Jennys angry eyes as if
they are ready to start this war between the two. Very
detailed showing the emotion they are feeling before
they begin.
15. The Gangs eyes looking right back at them showing
the very detailed emotion they feel being anger,
aggression etc.
16. Close up of the Gun as Tim is pulling the Trigger.
Showing the aggression within him as they needs to take
down this man.
TIM
Got you now
17. Lead Gang member Rodger Close up of him with his
ganging showing behind him. A way of emphasising the
back up of men he has with him. Showing his patronizing
power.
RODGER
Who the hell are you?
18. The Group of men make sure that the leader of the
gang is completely protected as they jump in front of
him. Showing just how much protection is needed on this
powerful evil leader.
JENNY
The Law and we are here to take you down
19. The gang member Rodger Laughing at the two cops
(Tim and Jenny) in a patronizing and intimidating way.
Making the two cops come across as weak.
RODGER
Take me down Love! Do you know what you just got
yourself into!
The picture will have a close up of only part of Jenny face
due to her speech thats included within it.

20. its a scene where its showing the tension between

the 2 team the cops Vs the criminal gang. The war has
begun tension words creating the build up to the fight.
21. A gun point towards one of the gang members as
they are about to be taken down.
22. Another gang member being hit on the head with a
piece of wood this is showing the immediate win the cops
are having at this moment in time.
23. The lead member of the gang become angry as his
members are being taken down.
RODGER
Im coming for you girl!
24. Jenny is in the way of a shot taken by the lead gang
member Rodger she is terrified and scared.
25. Interjection of the word BANG creating the tense
atmosphere.
26. Close up of Tims Mouth as he screams.
TIM
No!
27. Tim in the background holding Jenny in his arms as
she takes her last breath.
28. Ends with a massive broken heart, emphasising how
heartbroken Tim is about Jennys Death.