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TopicSentence
(Yourthesisstatementforyouressay)
Claim
(thefirstreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
Claim
(thesecondreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
ConcludingSentence
(restateyourthesisandconcludeparagraph)

TopicSentence
(thisrelatestoyouroriginalthesisstatement)
Claim
(thethirdreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
Claim
(thefourthreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
ConcludingSentence
(restateyourthesisandconcludetheparagraph)

TopicSentence
(thisrelatestoyouroriginalthesisstatement)
Claim
(thefifthreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
Claim
(thesixthreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
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(connecttoyourthesis)
ConcludingSentence
(restateyourthesisandreturntoyourhook)

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(transitionword)

(Tobeginwith),the_________developeda___________thatallowedthemto
________________________.

(Additionally),the___________was___________andhelpedthemto
________________________.

(Moreover),the____________were[adjective]inregardstotheir__________.

Accordingto______________,the___________was[adjective].

Researchshowsthat________________________(source).
[referringtoasource,paraphraseinyourownwords]

or
Researchshows,_________________________(source).
[directlyquotingasource]

Scientistshavefoundthat____________________________(source).

Scientistshavefound,____________________________(source).

(Forexample),___________________________________(source).

(Forexample),_________________________________(source).

Thisevidencesupportstheideathattherewas[asystemof]________.

Becauseofthis,itisclearthat_____________________.

Sincethe_________did/had_____________,itiscertainthatthey________________.

Egyptshadareallybigrivercalledthenileriverandtheycouldgrowfood,drinkwater,takea
bath,washclothes,andgetfood.

Thesearealltheelementstoprovethategyptwasa
civilization.economytheyhadeconomybecausetheyhuntforfoodorgrowthentheycouldsell
itortogetmoneywhichiseconomy
.
Theprooftheyhadthiswasthenilerivertheycouldgrow
foodandhuntanimalswhentheredrinkingwater
.
Thenileriverisreallybiganditisreallyuseful
youcouldgetwatertakeabathwatercropsgetfoodhuntfoodandthat'sprettymuchitthat's
whythenileriverisuseful.
Thesecondelementissocialstructuresocialstructureisdepending
ontheirjobsdependinghowgoodtheirjobsarethemorepowertheyhaveiftheyhaveareally
goodjoblikewritinglawsthepeoplewouldbeforcedtofollowthelaws
.
Socialstructurewasa
bigprobleminegyptbecausetherewasalotofslavesthatworkedfor3yearsanddidntget
paid
.
Thesocialstructureisimportantcauseitishowmuchpowerthepersonhas.Thisiswhy
egyptisacivilization
.

Geographyisthelandweretheybuilttheirbuildingslikehowegyptiansbuiltpyramidson
sand
.
ThepyramidswereactuallybuiltinsandGeographyisreallyimportantbecauseitisthe
landwherepeoplearegoingtogrowtheirland.
Thecultureofthepeoplewasreallycrazythey
believedtheybelievedinstuffthatotherpeopledidn'tbelieve
.
Egyptiansbelievedthatother
that'swhyverymanypeoplecouldnotbefriendswithothersbecauseoftheirbeliefs.
Theculture
ofpeoplewasreallycrazybecausetheydidnotbelieveotherpeopledidnotbelieveother

peopledidnot.
ConclusionIthinkthatcultureandgeographyareoneofthemostimportant
elementsbecausegeographyiswherepeoplearegoingtobuiltthebuildingsandtheculture
arethepeoplesbeliefs.

Thereligionoftheegyptianswerepolytheisticwhichmeansthattheydidnotbelieveinone
godtheybelievedinmanygods.
IknowEgyptianswerepolycysticbecauseinMr.Rutherfords
videothegirlsaidthattheywerepolytheisticandtheybelievedinmanygodsnotjustone
.
The
peoplebelievedinmanygodsnotjustonemanygodsthat'swhypeoplepraysomuch.

The
governmentofegyptwasprettypowerfulbecausehecouldwritelawsthatthekingaskedthem
towritethelawsinegyptwerereallycrazylikeifyoudisrespectsomeonethathasmorepower
thatyouyou'llprobablydieorthey'lltakeyoureyesout
.
thegovernmentwasthelawsthatallthe
peopleinegypthadtofollowandiftheydidnotfollowthemsomethingreallybadwasgoingto
happentothem
.
Thegovernmentisimportantbecausethegovernmenttheyrightlawsand
peoplehavetofollowthem