English12InvestigativeResearchPaper

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RebeccaMaynard
WRITER:
AlexaMarston
PleaseCOMPLETEthefollowingstepsALONGWITHMAKINGCOMMENTS(Use
EditingFeature)ONGOOGLEDOCStoreceivePeerEditingPoints
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LOOKOVERPAPER
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Format(CheckGoogleClassroomTips
orOWL)MakeSureitisAlphabetizedbyfirstletterAuthororArticle.Flushleftfirst
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MLAPageFormatting
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READ
Paper.(Nomarking.AllowthePapertospeaktoyou.
JustRead
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TwoComments
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OverallIreadthroughitprettygoodwithsomemistakes,butthatisokaybecauseitis
justaroughdraft
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Icouldseethatitwasnotcompletelysidedtooneside,whichisgood.

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HIGHLIGHTINRED
anyMechanicsProblems.(Dothebestyoucan!)
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BiggestProblem:____RunOn___Frag___Sp_
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CHECKTHESIS
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HighlightThesis
IsitOneSentence?___
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DoesitStateMainIdeaofPaper?__
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IsittooOpinionated?(Remember,itshouldExploreTopicNotRant!)_
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SuggestionsforThesis
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_Great___OkaybutcouldbeBetter____NeedsWork
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Itwasaquestionatfirstbutaftereditingwecameupwithabetterstatement
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Ibelievethatitrelatestothepaperwellandisdiscusseduponinthepaper

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CHECKTOPICSENTENCES
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IsthereaTopicSentenceforEachParagraph?inPaper__
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DoTheyhavesomeThreadfromtheThesis?____Yes
Sortof
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SuggestionsonTopicSentences:____
AllGreat_
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Couldaddsomekeywordsthatthreadfromthethesisintoeachtopicsentence
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overallitisprettydecentwithsometweaking

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CHECKOPENING
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Explain
AttentionGrabber:____Great_
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___OkaybutcouldbeBetter___NeedsWork


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Whatwasused?__
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CHECKHISTORY(CAUSE):
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__Great___OkaybutcouldbeBetter__NeedsWork
DoesitExplainHowTopicBegan?___
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Yes____No
DoesitDetailWhowasInvolvedinitsBeginnings?___1__Yes_____No
DoesitProvideWhen?Where?_1___Yes___No
DoyounowUnderstandtheTopicsHistory?____Definitely__1_Sortof____No
CHECKPROGRESSION(EFFECT):
__Great_1_OkaybutcouldbeBetter
__NeedsWork
DoesitExplaintheTopicsDevelopmentinHistory?_1___Yes___No
DoesitDetailThoseinvolvedasTimeProgresses?__1__Yes___No
DoesitDiscussNegativeorPositiveChanges?___1_Yes____No
CHECKPROBLEM:
____Great_1__OkaybutcouldbeBetter__NeedsWork
DoesitDiscussTopicsPresentConcerns?1___Yes___No
DoesitDiscussWhoisInvolvedwithTheseConcerns?_1__Yes___No
DoesitDiscussitsPros?__1__Yes____No
DoesitDiscussitsCons?__1__Yes____No
CHECKSOLUTIONS:
___1_Great___OkaybutcouldbeBetter__NeedsWork
HowmanydoesPaperDiscuss?___One___Two____1Three____Four

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CHECKCONCLUSION
:____Great___OkaybutcouldbeBetter__NeedsWork
DoesitWrapUpPaperPoints?___1__Yes____No

DoesitreferbacktoThesis?____Yes
sortof
_____No
DoesitprovideFuturisticViewofTopic?__1__Yes____No
DoesitprovideFoodforThought?_1__Yes___No

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CHECKParentheticalCitations
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_____AuthorsLastName________ArticleName_______Other_____hasntcitedyetbutI
knowshewillinthefinal___
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(Minimum9
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___9__HowManySources?(
ALLCITEDONWorksCitedPageUsed=Minimum9
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OVERALLSUGGESTIONSOFPAPER
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Staredoutwellforsroughdraft,someminorfixesneedtobedonewithwording
(2)avoidusingIintheparagraphs,butoverallgoodstart

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