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This outline presents a cause-effect essay on how overusing Facebook can make people unhappy. The introduction establishes that overusing Facebook has negative aspects and the thesis is that people should be aware of its effects. The body paragraphs then discuss three main effects: people tend to compare themselves unfavorably to others' posts, oversharing can compromise privacy through things like automatic tagging, and it can waste a lot of personal time. The conclusion restates that overuse has these negative impacts and suggests that heavy users reduce time spent on Facebook and correct their lifestyle.
This outline presents a cause-effect essay on how overusing Facebook can make people unhappy. The introduction establishes that overusing Facebook has negative aspects and the thesis is that people should be aware of its effects. The body paragraphs then discuss three main effects: people tend to compare themselves unfavorably to others' posts, oversharing can compromise privacy through things like automatic tagging, and it can waste a lot of personal time. The conclusion restates that overuse has these negative impacts and suggests that heavy users reduce time spent on Facebook and correct their lifestyle.
This outline presents a cause-effect essay on how overusing Facebook can make people unhappy. The introduction establishes that overusing Facebook has negative aspects and the thesis is that people should be aware of its effects. The body paragraphs then discuss three main effects: people tend to compare themselves unfavorably to others' posts, oversharing can compromise privacy through things like automatic tagging, and it can waste a lot of personal time. The conclusion restates that overuse has these negative impacts and suggests that heavy users reduce time spent on Facebook and correct their lifestyle.
1. Introduction (Paragraph 1) A. Hook: These days, people use Facebook so much. B. Connecting Information: There are some negative aspects of overusing Facebook. C. Thesis statement: We should be aware of effects of overusing Facebook. 2. Body A. Paragraph 2 (first point of comparison) topic sentence: People compare themselves with others. 1) Most of people post positive things on the Facebook. 2) Facebook users can look up others daily life on the Facebook. 3) Human beings tend to compare themselves with other people and they keep thinking they are living unfortunate lives. B. Paragraph 3 (second point of comparison) topic sentence: Privacy can blow up. 1) People are not concerned about their privacy and keep their profile on the public setting. This provides no protection against non-friends. 2) There is face recognition function on Facebook and this can tag Facebook friends automatically. 3) Advertisement what people are interested appears on their Facebook. C. Paragraph 4 (third point of comparison) topic sentence: People waste much of time to use Facebook and cannot have personal time 1) People spend their personal time so much on using Facebook. 2) It leads to excessive waste of time. 3) People lose a lot of personal time, so they cannot do self-development such as doing hobbies, having a rest and so on. 3. Conclusion (Paragraph 5) A. Restated thesis: Because of these negative effects of overusing Facebook, people
should know that overuse of Facebook leads negative effects to
their lives. B. Suggestion, opinion, or prediction: Overusers of Facebook have to reduce their Facebook using time, and correct their wrong life style.