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Session 1: Students look at My place video to gain knowledge of like in 1878 and so that
they will see the historical context in which the narrative they are creating in future
lessons will be set.
Session 2: Students will be looking at the structure of a narrative focusing on
Orientation, Conflict and Resolution. They will expand their knowledge through narrative
activities where they will have to pin point the structure in them.
Session 3: Students will look out how to plan a narrative through planning work sheets.
They will begin to plan their fictional narrative based on the main character of the My
Place episode in which they watched in session 1.
Session 4: Teacher will explain the editing process in which students will go through to
edit their draft. Editing worksheets will be given as a resource for students to follow.
Before editing students must finish their drafts.
Session 5: Students will finish editing their drafts and complete their final published
work. At the end of the lesson there will be time for students to share their narratives
with the class.
Text Type:
Assessment and
evaluation:
Program Learning
Outcomes:
Procedural Knowledge
(Organisation)
(Learning Outcomes)
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imaginative, informative
and persuasive print
and multimodal texts,
choosing text
structures, language
features, images and
sound appropriate to
purpose and audience
(VCELY329)
Reread and edit own
and others work using
agreed criteria for text
structures and
language features
(VCELY330)
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Procedural (organisation)
knowledge:
Discuss what students think
life was like in 1878.
Watch My place video
episode 14.
Review writing.
EAL students work with
teacher through guided
reading create a review.
Frontloading Activity:
Activity that activates and builds upon childrens prior knowledge and interests;
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The class will create individual mind maps about what they think/know life was
like in the 1800s in Australia.
Motivates children to be interested in the unit.
Allows fro teacher to asses the students prior knowledge and where they will
need to help branch out their understanding.
Scaffolding Activities:
Explore and practice concepts
Move children from where they are at to where you want them to be
Leading to culminating project that allows children to visually show their
procedural and conceptual knowledge in creative way
Teaching Plan and Key Questions: Link to learning
Assessments
Time
15mins
outcomes:
Students will discuss
life in 1878.
Watch My place
video Episode 14.
Students can see
historical context in
a narrative form.
Individual Writing.
Students will complete a review on
the My place episode
Write a review on
My place episode.
:
Mind Map to
asses
students prior
knowledge.
30 mins
15 mins
15 mins
Individual
writing of My
place review.
Guided writing
of My place
review.
My place episode 14
Blank A3 paper.
Pencils and Texters.
T.V or Smart board to play episode.
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Materials/ Resources
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Session 2
Frontloading Activity:
Scaffolding Activities:
Explore and practice concepts
Move children from where they are at to where you want them to be
Leading to culminating project that allows children to visually show their
procedural and conceptual knowledge in creative way
Learning Experiences and Key Link to learning
Assessments:
Time
Questions:
10
mins
20
mins
outcomes;
What is a narrative
text? What is the
structure of a
narrative text?
Discuss pervious
lesson. Discuss
what a narrative is
and structure.
What is the
structure of a
narrative text? Class
activity on
narratives.
Conceptual map
completed as a
whole class task.
Individual responses
from the text about
its structure.
Students narratives
with correct
15-20
mins
10
mins
Individual writing:
Students will write a short
narrative of their choosing using
the narrative structure;
Orientation
Complication
Resolution
What is the
structure of a
narrative text? Class
activity on
narratives.
What is a narrative
text? How do we
write a narrative
text? What is the
structure of a
narrative text? EAL
narrative activity/
shared writing.
Short narrative
writing. Discuss
what a narrative is
and structure
Extension activity:
Students can brain storm ideas
for a narrative based off the
continuation of the My place
episode.
Share Time
As a whole class student can
share their short narrative.
Students can ask the class
questions such as;
What was my orientation,
conflict and resolution?
Teacher will explain the units
assessment and the rubric with
students.
structure.
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15-20
mins
Assessing by seeing
students knowledge
by seeing their
narrative structure
knowledge and how
they work together
to write.
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Materials/ Resources
White/smart board.
White board markers.
Butchers paper.
Texters
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Session 3
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Frontloading Activity:
Scaffolding Activities:
Explore and practice concepts
Move children from where they are at to where you want them to be
Leading to culminating project that allows children to visually show their
procedural and conceptual knowledge in creative way
Learning Experiences and Key Link to learning
Assessments:
Time
Questions:
15
mins
15
mins
10
mins
Individual writing:
Students are to plan a narrative
based around the My place
episodes character Henry and an
invention he has made. Teacher
will go through the planning, draft
and editing stages for students;
outcomes
Whats the historical
context of our
narratives? Discuss
previous lesson.
Visual assessment of
students planning
work sheet.
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Planning worksheet.
(appendix 1)
Students are to draft their
work.
15
mins
Individual Writing:
Students and EAL students will fill
out their planning sheets.
15
mins
Mini Lesson- Guided Writing:
the teacher will work with a small
focus group that will need help
when in the planning stages of
their narrative to keep them on
the write track of a narrative
structure;
Guided writing; the small
group will all write a
narrative based on the
same narrative structure
so that the teacher is able
to watch how the stick to
the narrative structure.
5
mins
Extension activity:
Students should begin to writing
their drafts which follow their
planning sheets.
Share Time
Students can come up and share
with the class their ideas for their
narratives.
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Visual assessment of
students planning
work sheet.
Visual assessment of
students planning
work sheet.
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Materials/ Resources
My place clips
Tv/ Smartboard
Planning worksheet (appendix 1).
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Session 4
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Frontloading Activity:
Whole class will under go an editing task where they will edit a piece of work as a
whole class.
Bring children back to the on going topic of writing narratives.
Creates a visual representation of what their edited work should look like.
Scaffolding Activities:
Explore and practice concepts
Move children from where they are at to where you want them to be
Leading to culminating project that allows children to visually show their
procedural and conceptual knowledge in creative way
Learning Experiences and Key Link to session
Assessments:
Time
Questions:
20
mins
10
mins
learning
outcomes
Discuss last lesson.
How do I edit my
narrative?
How do I edit my
narrative? Writing
narrative. Editing
narrative
Writing narrative.
30
mins.
Individual Writing:
Students and EAL students will
Students editing
skills on their work
and another
students work.
15
mins
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Extension activity:
If finishing their narrative
students can begin the editing
process.
Materials/ Resources
Smart/whiteboard.
Markers.
Editing sheet (appendix 2-3)
Previous planning sheet (appendix 1).
Writing narrative.
Visual assessment of
students planning
and beginning to
write their
narratives.
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Session 5
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Frontloading Activity:
Scaffolding Activities:
Explore and practice concepts
Move children from where they are at to where you want them to be
Leading to culminating project that allows children to visually show their
procedural and conceptual knowledge in creative way
Learning Experiences and Key Link to session
Assessments:
Time
Questions:
10
mins
40
mins
15
mins
learning
outcomes
How do I edit my
work? Discuss
previous lesson. Go
through editing
process.
Narrative writing.
Edit/ publish work.
Narrative writing.
Edit/ publish work.
Mini lesson Individual
Writing/ Writing Conference:
Teacher will meet with the EAL
group to help them through
shared writing to complete their
Visual assessment
on how much
students have
retained from
previous lesson.
Visual assessment of
drafting/editing and
publishing skills. Self
assessment through
rubric.
Visual assessment of
drafting/editing and
publishing skills.
10min
s
Share Time
Students will get to share their
completed narratives to the
whole class.
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Materials/ Resources
Smart/white board
Markers
Editing sheets (appendix 2-3)
Planning sheets (appendix 1)
Rubric (appendix 4).
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This unit of work looks at teaching instruction for students who have English as an additional
language (EAL). It focuses mainly of EAL students that are placed in a classroom that is on English
speaking students. Throughout the unit the teacher holds mini-lessons with the group of EAL students
so they get the further instruction that they need. The Mini lessons have a writing focuses such as
Shared writing and Guided writing therefore the EAL students get more teacher focus as their specific
needs so they can build on their knowledge and understanding of the English language and English
curriculum.
English as an additional language (EAL) is a term used for students whos first or even second
language is not English. Since English is not the primary language or dialect the students will need
addition support to assist them to develop proficiency in many curriculum areas particularly English
(Flint., Kitson., Lowe., & Shaw., 2014). These students will have competency and have the acquired
understanding of their home language, however for these students when it comes to learning the
English language it will become a major component of their schooling needing explicit and systematic
instruction in different contexts and an enormous amount of teaching support (Winch., Johnston.,
March., Lijungdahl., & Holliday., 2010). In the Australian education system, a quarter of the student
population at students that are learning English as an additional language, this means that Australian
schools must cater for these students who have different abilities, prior learning experiences, varied
intellectual and learning potential (Winch et al, 2010). Teachers must prepare for students with
different English speaking levels, it is important for them to identify the level of schooling the student
has received and how similar their first language is to English (Winch et al, 2010).
In this unit of work, the teacher holds a number of Mini-lessons within class time with EAL students
to extend their knowledge and understanding of the narrative writing process. The students focused on
in this unit of work at EAL students who are at the level of consolidating as stated in the Australian
Curriculum Assessment and Reporting Authority (ACARA, 2011). Students who are at the
consolidating level of English can speak one or more languages as well as having the sound
knowledge of standard Australian English. Once students have reached this level of English they
should be working independently, participating in classroom discussions, routines and focusing during
instruction time (ACARA, 2011). EAL students at this level still require focused teaching lessons on
language, reading and writing skills (ACARA, 2011). This unit of work focuses on a writing unit so
students at this level of English understanding should be beginning to produce a range of text types
for different purposes and topics. They will begin to demonstrate knowledge of a particular topic and
understand their structures and grammatical features (ACARA, 2011).
Guided writing allows a small group of students to work closely with the teacher, the teacher will
guides, supports and provides feedback to the students so that they can grow as writers. The teacher
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will hold writing conferences with the students to assess students strengths and determine where they
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will need further support (Flint et al, 2014). These conferences will develop into Mini-lessons where
the teacher will focus on a particular writing strategy, these Mini-lessons allow students to reflect on
their work as they progress through the drafting and editing stage (Flint et al, 2014). Throughout this
unit of work students of EAL go through a number of Mini-lessons with the teacher that focuses on
Guided writing. Throughout this lesson the students will use Guided writing as the begin to plan their
narratives to the narrative structure. So that the teacher can keep the focus on structure the groups
narratives will be based on the same invention so that the structure of Orientation, Conflict and
resolution are the same and the students can work together to create their narratives. By having a
Mini-lesson focused on Guided writing it allows for students to gain some control over their learning
as the jointly participate in a literacy demonstration (Wing Jan, 2009).
Like Guided writing, shared writing again allows for students to gain control over their learning and
jointly participate in a literacy demonstration by suggesting with the teacher relevant words, phrases
and sentences (Wing Jan, 2009; Winch et al, 2010). When holding Shared writing sessions teachers
must allow for a broad and balanced selection of factual and narrative genres. (Winch et al, 2010). By
having a broad range of lessons it allows for students to become familiar with different kinds of
writing (Winch et al, 2010). Writing conferences allows for teachers to see a students composing
strategies, teacher will be able to see the students thought process so that they will be able to create a
Mini-lesson on components that are relevant (Winch et al, 2010; Flint et al, 2014). Shared writing if
used throughout these Mini-lessons with EAL students so that they do have the joint control of the
writing. As a groups students and teachers will plan their narrative based off the My place episode
together. By creating their plan of a big piece of paper it allows students to contribute to the writing
and idea process, allowing them to extend their knowledge and understanding of the planning process.
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References:
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Appendixes: 1
PLANNING A NARRATIVE
SETTING: TIME AND PLACE
PROBLEM / GOAL:
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IMPORTANT EVENTS:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
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Beginning
Middle
End
Appendix 2
REVISING MY STORY
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Name: ___________________________________________
Title: ____________________________________________
A beginning that:
A middle that:
An ending that:
adventure.
in order
NEXT STEPS
clear
interesting
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Appendix 3:
EDITING CHECKLIST
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Name: ___________________________________
Date: _______________________
1.
Title: ____________________________________
YES
NO
2.
YES
NO
3.
YES
NO
4.
YES
NO
EDITING
CODES
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SPELLING
CAPITAL
PUNCTUATION
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REMOVE A WORD
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AWKWARD WORDING A W K
INDENT
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