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It allows you to continue practicing the approaches youve learned, particularly through the process of revisiting your text
and revising your Source Page over the course of several days.
It gives you a chance to critically engage with a single text in a sustained and focused manner, which will allow you to
deepen your understanding of a particular aspect of social class while also helping you to determine which of the methods
youve learned work best for you as a reader and writer.
It serves as a showcase of the skills youve mastered during the first unit of the course; your product will be something that
you can be proud of as well as something that you can return to later in the course to assist you in crafting your
Documented Argument.
Before beginning to develop the nuts and bolts of your Source Page, you will need to find an acceptable article from an
appropriate database and have it approved by Mr. Peters or Mr. Austin. For our purposes, appropriate databases include
Academic OneFile, General Reference Center Gold, and New York Times, all of which can be found at www.mel.org/databases.
The Tasks
The required components of the Source Page are as follows, with point values indicated in brackets:
Full MLA citation [5] for your chosen article. The Purdue OWL website is a great resource to use for help with
creating and formatting your citation. The database you use may provide you with a citation, but it is important that
you check it to confirm its accuracy. You must also provide the stable URL for your article provided by the database.
Analytical Summary [10] of your article (150-250 words). Remember to begin with a discussion of the what before
focusing the majority of your summary on the how and why through the lens of one or two specific details,
elements, or passages from the text. See the Analytical Summary template for more information.
Paraphrase 3x [10] (with written commentary) for five (5) important lines from your chosen article.
You must also include a fully annotated copy [10] of your chosen text to accompany your Source Page. You may turn
in a hard copy of your annotated article, or you may scan your annotated article and submit it electronically. If you
choose to scan your article, it is up to you to ensure that your annotations are legible.
Note: If you plan to submit a hard copy, it must be turned in by 2:40 on Friday, 4/1 in order to ensure that I receive it.
o Remember: For our purposes, fully annotated will mean something different for each individual, since we
each have our own preferences when it comes to reading and writing. What matters is that your annotations
do the following:
Give your audience an idea of your thought process as you actively and critically engaged with the
text. This might involve any combination of the annotation skills we have discussed (see Lecture
Slides from 3/15 for a reminder), along with any other strategies that work for you.
Provide evidence of your process for completing the Notice and Focus, Analytical Summary, and
Paraphrase 3x components of the Source Page. This might include, for instance, clearly identifying
the details you choose for Notice and Focus or the lines you choose for Paraphrase 3x (along with the
specific words and phrases you focus on in your commentaries).
Demonstrate that you have read and considered feedback you have received on your annotation skills
from Mr. Peters.
Reflexive Component [5]: In a brief (150-250 word) response, comment on the process of creating your Source Page.
What did you find rewarding, challenging, or surprising about this experience? Which method did you find most useful
in critically engaging with your chosen text, and why? How has practicing and mastering these skills helped you to
become a more active and engaged reader?
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Monday, 3/28/16: Have your article approved by Mr. Peters or Mr. Austin before the end of class.
Tuesday, 3/29/16: Annotate your article fully and completely and complete the Notice and Focus method on your article;
show your work to Mr. Peters or Mr. Austin before the end of class.
Wednesday, 3/30/16: Draft your Analytical Summary and your Paraphrase 3x of five (5) key lines; show your work to Mr.
Peters or Mr. Austin before the end of class.
On Thursday, 3/31/16, you will have the opportunity to work on revision with tutors from the Writing Center, and you will
finalize and submit your work on Friday, 4/1/16.
Extra Credit
Per the Extra Credit Policy explained in the Course Syllabus, you can earn an additional two (2) mastery points for visiting the
Writing Center with work from this course. You can (and should) attend Writing Center as often as you wish, but the amount of
extra credit is capped at six (6) points per trimester. Although we will have an in-class revision day with tutors from the
Writing Center, you are more than welcome to visit the Writing Center for additional assistance with this assignment.
Remember: to receive the extra credit, you must submit your Writing Center receipt to Mr. Peters after your session.
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Component
Notice and
Focus
Analytical
Summary
Paraphrase 3x
Component
Annotations
Component
MLA Citation
Reflexive
Component
40-44.5
B
9-10
Demonstrates thoughtful
selection and ranking of
details, with thorough
explanation of criteria
used and clear, welljustified explanation of
top three selections.
Response is at least 150
words and provides both a
concise and accurate
statement of the articles
main point(s) and a rich,
analytical discussion of
particular passages from
the text focused on the
how? and why?
Component is fully
completed for five (5)
different lines.
Paraphrases are
adequately distinct from
one another.
Commentaries include
thoughtful reflections on
how understanding of
meaning is affected by
paraphrases. Chosen lines
are among the most
significant in the text.
9-10
Annotations clearly
illustrate critical
engagement with the text
and delineate the
students thought process
in great detail, with
evidence of incorporation
of feedback from
instructor.
35-39.5
C
Total Points: 50 Mastery Points
Major Components
7-8
29-0
E
5-6
Below 5
Demonstrates acceptable
selection and ranking of
details, with sufficient
explanation of criteria
used and of top three
selections.
Demonstrates careless or
incomplete selection and
ranking of details, with
only limited explanation
of criteria used and of top
three selections.
Component is fully
completed for five (5)
different lines.
Commentaries are mostly
thoughtful and
appropriate, though
paraphrases may be too
similar. Chosen lines are
at least somewhat
significant to the text as a
whole.
Additional Components
3-4
Citation is present, but
Citation is fully or mostly
includes significant errors
accurate.
or inaccuracies.
Response is at least 150
Response is too short or
words and answers all
fails to answer all
required questions
required questions
thoroughly and
completely.
thoughtfully.
4-5
30-34.5
D
Response is missing or
completely off task/topic.
Response is missing or
completely off task/topic.
5-6
Annotations demonstrate
little or no critical
engagement with the
text; students process is
not visible in any
meaningful way. No
evidence of incorporation
of feedback from
instructor.
Below 5
Below 3
Citation is missing.
Response is missing.
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