Jose Real

Kneece
Writing 2
23 May 2016
A Writing Suggestion
Verse 1
Diction are the words we use
It makes us look so cool
We can transform from a little kid
Into a grown adult
Diction can make us look so smart
And professional as well
But be aware it can be upset
If your words arent used their way
Mark Bunn said uncommon words
Will cause it to stand out
But if you use it the right way
Itll make you have no doubts
Its hard(pause) to(pause) complex your diction
But if you(pause)pay(pause)attention to its use
Your writing might (pause) go (pause) your way
Chorus:
Writing is super important
It is used in all the jobs
Writing conventions create
A piece that brings all mobs
Writing connects the lives
Of those who can and cannot hear
But writing is important
To myself and you, oh dear
Verse 2
Organization is the prevention

Of a messy writing piece

It makes your paragraphs so much flowy
Which will make sense to me
It separates your points
So they dont seem awkward there
If you write pure bologna
With it no one really cares
L. Lennie Irvin mentioned
That organization plays
Into his characteristics
Of Academic Essays
Its hard (pause) to(pause) organize
But if you (pause) find (pause) all your points
You will organize so well
Chorus
Writing is super important
It is used in all the jobs
Writing conventions create
A piece that brings all mobs
Writing connects the lives
Of those who can and cannot hear
But writing is important
To myself and you, oh dear
Bridge
We must not forget
About the logos, ethos, pathos
They help communicate
And influence those out there
Logos is the obvious
Its all the facts and logic
Ethos helps back up
Those who think their words are tragic
Laura Bollin Carroll
Said pathos may be seen
As a whining little girl
Or a manipulative king

These are important in writing

To make people believe you
Repeating them has helped me
To write when theres a piece due
Organizing,
Organizing,
Organizing,
Organizing,

Diction,
Diction,
Diction,
Diction,

Ethos
Ethos
Ethos
Ethos

Logos
Logos
Logos
Logos

Pathos
Pathos
Pathos
Pathos

Chorus
Writing is super important
It is used in all the jobs
Writing conventions create
A piece that brings all mobs
Writing connects the lives
Of those who can and cannot hear
But writing is important
To myself and you, oh dear

Blissful Writing
Organization succumbs my heart
It makes me happy, with bliss and all
Discuss one point per paragraph
And mention the one that goes after that
Flow is like the running lights
But essay flow is much more than that
The potential of a flowing heart
Depends on recurring paragraphs
L.Lennie Irvin clarified
The necessities of some essays
Organization was a fresher
Leg of this powerful message
Diction causes my heart to friction
With professionalism and a melting blizzard
But the over usage of powerful diction
Could break the bond like a rotten lizard
A dead lizard of powerful words
That overwhelm all audiences souls

So if your diction has overflown

A darkened essay will come in hold
Mark Bunn likes the unnatural
Of words and the factual
Using strange words will cause attention
That will hold a special mention
Ethos, Logos, Pathos
The influential sisters that do matter
With their powerful influential powers
Could make a room have less clutter
Ethos gives credibility to writing,
Like the stars give to the clear night
It makes you feel at peace in mind
At what youre about to read in might
Logos has the logic
With bouncy facts and legs
If it were not for logos
You would laugh as reality begs
Pathos holds the laughter
The crying and the thoughtful
It holds all the emotions
Like a face thats gone through matter
Laura Bollin Carroll
Tainted what pathos beholds
She contains manipulation
And sentiment is not on hold
Conventions are desserts
The sweet things of writing
They dont have to be included
But if they are the world would be cooler