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Associative poem
Awesome, I love it. You can obviously tell wonderful stories and use great sensory
language to do it. Yay. I hesitate to suggest anything, I like this so much. The one
thing you might think of is James Merrills poem and how it goes to different places
that all contribute to an idea or theme what you want to say with this piece. As it
stands, it is luscious with life but it isnt particularly deep with meaning. Not every
poem is or needs to be, but you are so good at this level, you could easily ask
yourself what you want to, or could, say with this piece and then expand it or
augment it with other scenes or snapshots that give it some dimensionality.
Nerudas odes, too, go to different places in their realization of his subjects. But I
love your writing. You must keep doing it.