Peer
Editing
Worksheet

 
 


Read
the
narrative
thoroughly,
making
notes
in
the
margin
that
describe
your
immediate

reactions
to
what's
written.
Then
answer
these
questions:




1. Did
the
narrative
focus
on
a
specific
moment
of
the
timeline
or
sum
up
the
entire
life

story
of
the
brownfield?

Was
this
method
done
effectively?







2. Did
the
opening
paragraph
catch
my
attention?

How
can
this
be
improved?







3. Does
the
paper
flow?

What
transitions
need
to
be
improved?







4. Did
your
partner
utilize
personification
techniques
attempted
imagery?

Cite
examples.







5. Is
there
too
little
information?

What
do
I
want
to
hear
more
about?









6. What
can
be
taken
out
of
the
narrative?







7. Are
there
any
grammar
or
punctuation
errors?

Where
are
they?










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