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modelanswer:
Thefirstgraphshowsthatthereisagradualdecreaseinstudyforcareerreasonswithage.Nearly
80%ofstudentsunder26years,studyfortheircareer.Thispercentagegraduallydeclinesby10-20%
everydecade.Only40%of40-49yroldsand18%ofover49yroldsstudingforcareerreasonsinlate
adulthood.
Conversely,thefirstgraphalsoshowsthatstudystemmingfrominterestincreaseswithage.Thereare
only10%ofunder26yroldsstudingoutofinterest.Thepercentageincreasesslowlytillthebeginning
ofthefourthdecade,andincreasesdramaticallyinlateadulthood.Nearlysamenumberof40-49yr
oldsstudyforcareerandinterest.However70%ofover49yroldsstudyforinterestincomparisonto
18%studingforcareerreasonsinthatagegroup.
Thesecondgraphshowsthatemployersupportismaximum(approximately60%)fortheunder26yr
students.Itdropsrapidlyto32%uptothethirddecadeoflife,andthenincresesinlateadulthoodup
toabout44%.Itisunclearwhetheremployersupportisonlyforcareer-focusedstudy,butthehighest
levelisforthosestudentswhomainlystudyforcareerpurposes.
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dramaticallyfromabout500kmtoaround3,000kmintheyear2000.Waterusedintheindustrialanddomestic
sectorsalsoincreased,butconsumptionwasminimaluntilmid-century.From1950onwards,industrialusegrew
steadilytojustover1,000km,whiledomesticuserosemoreslowlytoonly300km,bothfarbelowthelevelsof
consumptionbyagriculture.
Thetableillustratesthedifferencesinagricultureconsumptioninsomeareasoftheworldbycontrastingtheamount
ofirrigatedlandinBrazil(26,500km)withthati ntheD.R.C.(100km).Thismeansthatahugeamountofwateris
usedinagricultureinBrazil,andthisisreflectedinthefiguresforwaterconsumptionperperson:359mcompared
withonly8mintheCongo.Withapopulationof176million,thefiguresforBrazilindicatehowhighagriculturewater
consumptioncanbeinsomecountries.
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a lot grammar mistakes are found in sample essays. I wonder who are responsible for posting all of
the samples. Just a simple thought that, once we call "sample", it must be perfectly correct.
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can anyone share me this copy, coz i can't use paypal or any other cash account from our country.
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Malshi Liyanagamageleft a comment
@ Elleh Luz, did u finished ur IELTS exam?
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should be: DID U "FINISH"
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This site is very helpful and I suggest it to everyone who would prepare for ielts
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this site is really good site for practicing graphs and tables. thank you
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