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(Untitled short film ) IVth Draft

Written By Niyaz Mujawar afsana.nighar@gmail.com +91-9960898787 Niyaz Mujawar.

FADE IN

1. EXT POLICE STATION- DAY Kalya rangachi Scooty Pep, police stationchya aawarat yeun thambte. Tya varun Anil Ghadge, aani tyanchi bayako Anjali Ghadge utartat aani station chya mukhya daratun aat pravesh kartat. Anjali, Anil chya hi pudhe aahe, tee atyant gadbadine stationchya payrya chadun aat jate, tichya mage Anil pravesh karato.

2. INT.POLICE STATION- DAY Anjali gadbadine aat yeun dutyvar asnarya Constable kade jate, jo register madhe tyach routine lihit aahe.

ANJALI COMPLAINT KARAYCHI AAHE

Constable var tichya kade pahato, mage yet aslelya Anil kade pahato, aani mhanto

Constable Kunavirrudh ?

Anjali kahi bolnar eetkyat, magun

ANIL ANJALI

Anjali mage valun baghte, Anil teela hatanech thambnyacha ishare detoConstable kade pahato aani mhanto,

ANIL SAHEB KUTHE AAHET ?

Constable Anil kade pahato aani mhanto,

CONSTABLE YETCH ASTEEL (O.S. Bullet gadicha aawaj aiku yeto)

CONSTABLE HE KAY AALECH ?

Police station madhe P.I.ARJUN TOPE, pravesh kartat, te Anil aani Anjali kade pahtat, Anil kade valtat, Aani,

P.I.TOPE TUMHI ITHE AAJ? office LA NAHI GELAT KAY ?

Anjali madhech vakya todat,

ANJALI AAMHALA COMPLAINT KARAYCHI AAHE? YANCHYA

Anil, Anjali var aawaj kabut thewun oradato,

ANIL ANJALI

Kahi kshan stabdhta

P.I.TOPE, ya shantatecha bhang karat,

P.I.TOPE AAPAN TITHE BASUYAT, AANI BOLUYAT

He tighehi samorch aslelya P.I.Topechya table jawal jatat, aani bastat

P.I.TOPE SANE, TEEN CUTTING SANGA

ANJALI CHAHA VAGAIRE KAHI NAKO,

AADHI TUMHI COMPLAINT LIHA

P.I.TOPE

O.K., LIHUYAT, PAN KUNAVIRRUDH ?

Anjali Anil kade pahate, aani mhante

ANJALI YANCHYA WADILAN VIRRUDH

P.I.TOPE, Anil kade baghtat, Anil khinnapane maan khali padun baslay

P.I.TOPE KAY KELA TYANI?

ANJALI MAJHYA MULALA PALAWALAY

(BEAT)

P.I.TOPE KADHI ?

ANJALI AAJ SAKALI

P.I.TOPE SAKALI, MAG TUMHI KUTHE HOTA ?

ANJALI GHARAT

P.I.TOPE AANI TUMHI?

ANIL HOSPITAL MADHE

P.I.TOPE KUTHLYA?

ANIL MISSION HOSPITAL

P.I.TOPE

VEDYANCHYA HOSPITAL LA

P.I.TOPE GHARAT TUMHI KAY KARAT HOTA MADAM?

ANJALI MAJHA DOLA LAGLA HOTA

P.I.TOPE, Anil kade pahatat prashnarthak mudrene.

ANJALI HYANCHE WADIL VEDE JHALET, MAJHYA PRATIK LA PLEASE WACHVA TYANCHYA PASUN !

Anil , P.I.TOPE kade baghto aani mhanto,

ANIL MEE SANGTO

3.INT. BEDROOM (GHADGES HOUSE) NIGHT

Andhuk prakash, atishay stabdh nischal watavaran. Cameryachya firnyane kholitil goshti baherchya prakasha mule andhuk andhuk disat aahet. Jevanach tat bharlela disat aahe, tyachya bajula panyacha tambya var pela.Camera eka tasviri var yeun sthir hoto. Hya tasviri khali KAILASWASI.SUMAN GHADGE asa lihila aahe. JANMA DINANK-15 MAY 1928), MRUTYU DINANK- 12 JANUARY 2000. Ghara baherun prakashacha jhot khidkitun kholit yeto, to tasviri varun firun kholitil kapatachya aarsha var padto aani tyachya reflection madhe SADASHIV GHADGE (70) distat. Prakash tyanchya eka profile var bounce jhalyane dusara bhag andharat aahe, aani te var tanglelya tasviri kade pahat aahet. Kes ruperi, dadhiche khunt pandhre vadhlele, dole khol gelele. Ha prakash gharabaher aalelya Scooty Pep chya headlights cha aahe. Gadicha aawaj aiku aetoy, gadi aata park jhaliy. Dive band jhale aahet. Gharat aata aadhi sarkha andhuk prakash. Off screen Purushacha aawaj aeku yeto

Purush (ANIL) (O.S) KHIDKI BAND NAVHATI KELI KA? Cut to. 4. EXT HOUSE- NIGHT Gadivarun teen jan utartat aahet. ANIL GHADGE (40), tyanchi bayako ANJALI GHADGE (34) aani tyancha mulaga, PRATIK GHADGE (11), jo Scooty pep chya samorchya bhagatun udi marun baher yeto. Anil aani Anjali gharachya mukhya darakade jatat. Pratik khidkit jaun tyachya aajobana khidkitun pahatoy. Tyala aajoba andhuk prakashat man var karun baghtana disat aahet, pratik ektak pahatoy tyana. Anjali darach kulup ughadte, tee daratun aat janar toch tila pratik chi aathwan hote aani mage valun tee pratik kade pahate, ANJALI PRATIK

Pratik chi hyavar kahich pratikriya nahi. ANJALI PRATIK TIKDE ANDHARAT KAY KARTOYS? AAT YE CHAL GHARAT

Pratik tithech thamblay, he pahun tyachi aai tyachya jawal yeun tyacha hat odhate,aani Pratik samor baghun bolato PRATIK AAJOBA AAJOBA Aajoba haluwar pane man walavtat. Te aadhi pratik kade aani mag tyachya aaila pahtat aani kahi kshan pahatch rahtat. Anjali hya najarene aswastha houn, jharrkan Pratikla darwajyachya dishene odhat nete. Pepcha prakash band hoto aani Anil hya doghansobat gharat yeto. Aajoba aata khidkichya dishenech pahat aahet. Aadhichach andhuk parkas aata chehryavar. Tevdhyat tyanchya kholitil Dive lagtat. Anil aat yeun tyanchyakade pahato, bharlelya tatala pahato ANIL AGA HE JEWALE NAHIT Hya aawajane Anjali kholit yete, Pratik pan tyanchya mage yeto

ANJALI AATA BHARWAYCHACH URLELA AAHE Anil , Anjali kade pahato, Khidki jawal jaun khidki lawto aani parade odhun ghetto. Pratik aajobanchya jawal jaun Tat jawal odhun ghetto, table thoda pudhe karto Aani tatatil chapaticha tukda bhajila lawun mhanato

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PRATIK HAAN, AAJOBAGHYA

ANJALI KAY KARTOYAS ?

PRATIK BHARWATOY Aajobanchi man valvun Pratik ek ek ghas bharwatoy, tewadhyat Anil kholitun baher jato, Anjali aswasth pane ubhi aahe, Anil baher gelyavar tee, Pratik jawal yete aani ANJALI UDYA SHANIWAR AAHE, SAKALCHI SHALA AAHE, TU HE UDYOG SODH AANI JAUN JHOP Tee pratik cha hatatun tat vyavasthit bajula kadhun thewate, aani Pratik la jayala sangte, tee pan nighnar eetkyat ticha sadicha padar kashat tari adakto, te pahayala tee mage walate, toch tila disun yeta ki, ticha padar tichya sasryane pakadla aahe aani te tichyakade ektak pahat aahet. Kahi kshan Stabdhta (beat). Halu halu tee aapla sadicha padar tyanchya hatatun sodawun ghete, aani kholibaher yete. Tee kholi baher aalyavar dar lawnya sathi valate, tenvha pan tiche sasre tichya kade ektak pahat aslyach janavata. Tee kholitil diva band karate , aani dar lawun ghete

Cut To: 5.INT GHADGES HOUSE- BEDROOM-NIGHT

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Anil aani Anjali tyanchya bedroom madhe jhople aahet. Anil ghortoy. Ya Ghornyacha Anjalila tras hot aahe. Tee kahi kshana nantar jhopetch kus badalte, aani kus badallyavar teela ticha bajulach konachya tari shawasachi gharghar aeku yete. Tee dole ughadte aani pahate tar, teeche sasare teechya bajulach jhopale aahet, aani tyanche dole satad ughade aahet.Anjali jorat kinchalte. Kinchalna aekun Anil khadkan jhopetun jaga hoto. To uthto, aani pahato tar tyache wadil ajun tasech bedvar jhople aahet, Anjali bhintila tekun ubhi aahe, aata Paratik hi tyachya room madhun bedroom chya darajawal aala aahe,to Anil la , Anjali la aani tyanche aajoba disat naslyane vicharto,

PRATIK KAY JHAL ?

6 Int. Ghadges House- Noon

Anil aani Anjali doghe dinning table var Virrudh dishela baslelel aahet. Doghehi chintatur awsthet. Tewdhyat tyana bolnyache aawaj aeku aetat.

(O.S) Jaude soda, kay aata mhanav, Teenshe paper pahana teen diwasat Mhanje kay cheshta watate ka tyana ?

Ho barr akshar thik astil te ek, pan Kay giravtat mula aajchi , tyana pan kalat nasel

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Te ekmekana pahtat, khurchya sarkavnyache aawaj dekhil aeku yetat. Doghehi uthun aajobanchya darashi jatat, tyana Aajoba konashi tari boltana disat aahet. Doghehi dara aadun aeknyacha prayatna kartat, tyana jorat hasnyacha aawaj aeku aeto, doghehi haluch dar thodasa dhaklun aat dokawtat tar konihi disat nahi, Aajoba aektech konashi tari boltana distat.

Aajoba Ho na, me tarich tumchi Aathwan kadhli hotee, Bar jhal tumhi aalat, Kay ghenar tumhi ?

Anil aani anjali aat kholibhar pahtat, konihi disat nahi, aajoba tithunch aawaz detat,

Aajoba Suman jara chaha tak, Aani ho aadhi pani gheun ye Ranade Sir aale aahet

Anil dachakto, Anjali pahate aani vicharte,

Anjali Ranade ?

Anil

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cut to:

7 Int. Ghadges House- Night

Dinning table var mantrik basala aahe,dole band karun , hatat ek imaginary gola aslyacha mime karat, madhech tyacha shwas kami jast hotoy, khadkan dole ughadto, aani tonadane aawaj kadhto,

MANTRIK Hmmm

Tyachya mage tyacha shishya tyach saman gheun tyachya mage patapat jato, Anil aani Anjali pan yeu pahtat, Shishya tyana adawto, aani manenech nahi mhanto Anil aani Anjali tatkalat baher thambtat

Shishya dar aatun lawun gheto

He doghehi baher Kahi velane aatun fandine pathiwar marlyacha aawaz aeku yetat Sapasap Sapasap

Anjali , Anil kade pahte Anil man khali takun ubha aahe, Anjali aswasthpane baghte Vhivalnyache aawaj aeku yet aahet

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Cut to :-

8 Int. Aajobanchi Room :- Night

Aajoba ajunhi khurchi var baslele aahet, ughde Aani tyanchya pathivar marlyache wal aahet. Atyant haluwar pane tyancha shwaochshwas chalu aahe Te atyant kami aawajat tyanchya sammor baghun konashi tari bolat aahet,

Aajoba Kalch me ek paper tapasla, Atishay sundar aksharat, Atishay sundar paddhatine Lihalela eetka sundar paper me Nahi pahila Ranade Sir

Fade out :

Ext streets Morning

Aajoba aata aekatech rastyavar ubhe aahet, te eka mall samor ubhet aahet. Mall chya bajula asnarya flat madhe te

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rokhun pahat aahet Ektak Ek stree tiche kes pusayala, walwayala balconyt yete, Aajoba tichya kade pahat aahet, tee bai aajobankade pahate, aajoba fakta underwear aani fatkya baniyan var tya bai la ektak pahat aahet tee bai gondhalte aani aatun tichya navryala bolwayala aat jate, jo paryant tee tyachya navryala gheun yete balcony, to paryant aajoba tithun nahise hotat

Cut to: 10 Ext Ghadges House- Morning

Aata aajoba two wheeler varun utartat, tyana gavatil ek olakhicha manus gheun aala aahe GOPAL, to Gadi parat start karun nighun jatat, Aajoba tyanchya gharakade pahtat, aani parat dusrya dishela chalu lagtat, chaltana tyana ek plastic cha daba disun yeto aajoba tya dabyala rokhun pahatat Cut To : 11. EXT VILLAGE OUTSKIRT- EARLY MORNING Gava baherchi Tekadi. Aaju bajula sagala MAAL-raan. Hya tekadichya eka tokala Aajoba shantpane ubhe aahet, bajula panyacha daba lawandlela, aani aatla pani sandlela. Aajoba tekdichya tokawarun khali vahnarya nalyakade tak lawun pahat aahet. Pakshyachi kilbil aani eetar aawaj aiku yet aahet. Aajobanchya dokyatil vichar he sagale dhwani tipun ghet aahet. Haluch aajoba halkasa smit hasya kartat, khali pahun Te ek paul pudhe taktat, te khali padnar eetkyat tyana konitari pathi magun pakadta Cut to : 12.EXT/INT GHADGES HOUSE GOPAL aata darabaherun Anilshi boltoy, darat anjali ubhi,

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GOPAL PAUL PUDHE TAKNAR TOCH MEE PAKADLA. AANI HYA ASHYA AWTARAT.aani aadhich me tyana Gavatlya rastyavarun gate paryant Aanun sodala hota, tar he parat firale Mhanun aata aanun tumhala aawaz dila

Gopal aajoban kade var pasun te khali paryant nazar firavto. Anil chya chehryavar saaf naraji disate, Anjali nakala padar lawate. ANJALI GHARAT CHANGLE DON SANDAS AAHET, KAY DHAD BHARLIY KON JANE

Anil man tirki kadun Anjali kade baghto, aani ANIL CHAHA GHENAR KA ? Gopal

GOPAL NAHI, CITYT JAYCHAY, USHIR HOEEL. FAKTA WAHINI KAPAD AAHE KA JARA, HYANA MAGE BASVUN AANALA NA, SEAT JARA

Anjali kapad dete. Gopal kapad gheun gadikade jato, toch Anil

ANIL

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GOPAL AJUN EK KAM GAVAT HE KONALA SANGU NAKO

Gopal kapad gheun gadijawal jato, Anil gharat jato tyachya mage mage Anjali pan aat jate, Darwaja lawun. Gopal chya Bullet cha Aawaj suru hoto, To jata jata mhanto

GOPAL WAHINI, KAPAD FATAKA JAWAL THEWLAY Cut to: 13. INT. GHADGES HOUSE- MORNING PANYACHYA SHOWERCHA AAWAJ AIKU Anjali aani Anil bolat aahet. YETOY, TYACHYA BAKGROUND VAR

ANJALI MEE MHANTEY, TYANA VEDYANCHYA ISPITALAT BHARTI KARA, TABADTOB

ANIL KAHI PAN BARLU NAKOS

ANJALI MEECH JATE PRATIK LA GHEUN MAHERI. ANIL HE BAGH VAYA-PARATVE HOTA ASA

ANJALI

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VAY-PARATVE VED NAHI YET SAGLYANA.

PRATIK tyachya kholitun dole cholat baher yeto, to doghan kade baghto, PRATIK KONALA VED LAGLAY, AAI ? He doghe Pratik kade baghtat ANJALI TUJHYA AAJOBANA PRATIK AAJOBA VEDE NAHIT Anjali pratik kade ragane baghte, ANIL JA TU BRUSH KAR, SHALA AAHE NA TUJHI Pratik batroom kade nighto, toch tyala bathroom madhe thand shower khali aajoba ubhe aslyach disata, te thandine kudkudat aahet, to aajobana kade baghto, aani valun Anjali la mhanto,

PRATIK AAI AAJOBANA TOWEL DE, TYANA THANDI VAJTYE.

Anil , Anjali kade baghto, Anjali man modun shejari tanglela Towel gheun bathroom kade jate, darat thijun ubhi rahate, Pratik la pahate, Pratik brush kartoy, Anil phone var number dial karat aahe. Anjali chya manat aat jave ki nahi asa vichar. Samor Aajoba panyane olechimb jhale aahet.

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Anjali haluch ek paul pudhe takate, aawandha gilate, aani towel dyayla hat pudhe karate, Aajoba anjali chya dishene baghat nahit, tee thoda pudha haat karayla pahate, towel chya kinaryala dharun, tichya hatatun towel khali padato. Aata towel var showerch pani jorat padtay. Aajoba panyakhalich ubhe, Anjali towel kade aani Ajoban kade pahate, aani towel uchlayla ek khali vacate, toch tichya pathivar aajobancha panyane bhijlela haat padto, aani Anjali kinchalun mage bathroomchya daratun khali padate. Anil hya oradnyane dachkun jaun anjali jawal yeto. Pratik chya tondat paste cha fess aahe, to pan anjali jawal yeto Anjali thar-tharatey, tewadhyat Anil cha phone vajato. Anil phone var uchalto, phone office madhun aahe. ANIL MEE AAJ YENAR NAHIYE OFFICELA Anjali kopryat thar-tharat ubhi rahate ANJALI TUMHI KAHI KARNAR AAHAT KI?

ANIL AGA, kay kela tyani

ANJALI Hat takla majhya var

ANIL Thik aahe mee

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Nahi malach jaun aanav lagel tya lokana

Pratik vicharto, PRATIK KON YENAR AAHE? AANI KONALA KUTHE GHEUN JANAR AAHET?

ANJALI TUJHYA AAJOBANA, TYANA VEDYANCHYA DAWAKHANYAT BHARTI KARNAR AAHOT

PRATIK AAJOBA VEDE NAHIYET

Anjali Pratik chya muskadit jorat thewun dete, to kolmadun jaun bajula padato Tyachya tondatala paste cha face baher padto. Anil he baghun mage firto, phone var number dial karu legato, aani tewadhyat Aajoba. Halu halu bathroom madhun baher yetat, te aata halu halu Anjali chya dishene chalu lagtat. Anil phone var bolat aahe, ANIL HAAN, HOSPITAL

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Anjali stool var basil aahe, Aajoba tichya jawal jaun thambtat, Anjalila tyachi janeev hote, aani dachkun tee aajobanma dhalakalte aani jorat kinchalte. Aajoba dekhil Pratik sarkhe kopryat padlele aahet, tyanchya dokyala jakham jhaliy te agadi nischechta paddle aahet. Pratik tyanchya dokyala hat lawato, aani bhijlelya towel ne tee jakham pusato He pahun Anjali fankaryane aatlya khiolit nighun jate aani aatun darala kadi lawun ghete. Anil Tichya janya kade aani Aajoba aani natava kade pahato, aani phone var parat bolu legato,

ANIL THIK AAHE, MEECH YETO TUMHALA GHYAYLA, HO AALOCH, NIGHALO

Anil ghara baher padto Pep suru honyacha aawaj. Pratik aajoba ek mekanshejari padlele. Aajoba haluch uthtat Pratik kade baghtat. Aatlya kholit Anjali darwajyala tekun radat ubhi aahe. FADE TO BLACK:

FADE IN:

14.INT ANJALIS BEDROOM(GHADGES HOUSE)-NOON ANJALI bedvar jhopleli aahe, tyach awasthet kholichya daravar aawaj aiku yetatyat ANIL (O.S)

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ANJALIANJALI Anjali uthaun dole pusate, aani dar ughadte, darabaher Anil ubha aahe, tyachya sobat Hospital madhil 2 brothers (ward boys) aahet. ANIL BABA KUTHE AAHET Anjali sthir-sawar houn, ANJALI UHHHKON

ANIL BABA KUTHE AAHET ? HOSPITAL MADHUN MANASE AALI AAHET GHYAYLA TYANA Anjali, tyanchya kade pahate, aani eekade tikade baghun, ANJALI ITHECH TAR HOTE, MAGHASHI TUMHI GELAT TENVHA, PRATIK PAN SOBAT HOTA Anjali achanak Pratik cha nav ghetlyavar,

ANJALI PRATIK, PRATIK KUTHE AAHE? Anjali aata Pratik la aawaj det gharbhar shodhat aahe Tee don brothers Anil kade pahatat Anil,

ANIL

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PRATIK SHALET GELA NAHI KA?

ANJALI TUMHI SODNAR HOTA NA TYALA?

ANIL MEE HYANCHYA KADE GELELO,

BROTHERS SAHEB PATIENT KUTHE AAHE

ANIL EK MINUTE THAMBA TUMHI. EK KAM KARA TUMHI JAA, MEE AANTO PATIENT LA

DOGHE BROTHERS NIGHUN JATAT. Anjali yete gharbhar shodhun, ANJALI AHO PRATIK AANI HE PAN NAHIT GHARAT

ANIL majh pakit disala ka ? aani TU AAT KAY KARAT HOTIS ?

ANJALI

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MAJHA DOLA LAGLELA ZARA ANIL ragane Anjali kade baghto, Anjali parat radu lagate

ANJALI TE PRATIKCH KAHI BARA-WAIT TARI KARNAR NAHIT NA?

Anil aata aswastha houn yer-jharya ghalu legato Khishatum phone kadhto, aani phone lawto

ANJALI madhech todun bolate,

ANJALI AAPAN POLICE STATIONLA JAUYAT

CUT TO: 15 INT.POLICE STATION- DAY ANIL BOLAYCH THAMBTO, ANJALI CHYA DOLYAT PANI AAHE, P.I., Anil chya samor panyacha glass thewto, P.I. samor Constable la bolawun ghetto, P.I.TOPE SANE, EEKADE YA ANIL kade walun

P.I.TOPE TUMHI GHARI JA, SANE WIRELESS

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VAR KON AAHE? TYALA PATHWA (ANIL AANI ANJALI LA SAMBODHUN) TUMHI JA

ANJALI PRATIK LA KAHI

P.I.TOPE KALAJI KARU NAKA, TUMHI JA

SANE , Anil aani Anjali la gheun jato.

16. EXT.PUNE CITY CROWDED ROAD NOON Aajoba Pratikcha hat ghatt pakdun baslele aahet Dole lambvar rowlele Pratik aswasth pane eekade tikade baghtoy. Dokyavar unhachya ashayya jhala. Aaju-Bajula manasanchi prchand gardi. Aajoba Pratik cha haat ghatt dharun gardit tasech dhimmpane ubhe, yenarya-janarya manasana tyancha adthala hotoy Pratik halu halu tyana khechat gardichya baher aanun eka jhadakhali basavto, aadhi te taiyaar nahit. Mag swata basun tyana halu halu khali khechto. Aajoba bastat. Pratik la tahan lagleli aahe, to Panyach pouch viknarya manasala hat karto, khishatum paise kadhun tyala deto, aani ek pouch gheto, aani Aajobana eka hatane pouch fodun pani pajato. Aajoba halu halu pani peetat, kahi pani tyanchya shirtvar oghalala jata Pratik aajobanchya chehrya varun hatrumal firavto. Haluwar pane tyancha hat aaplya hatatun sodavto aani, tyancha haat tyanchyach hatavar thewun deto. Aajoba aaplya davya hatachya mangatavar ujva haat thewtat. Pratik haluch uthato aani bajuchya pan tapari walya kade jaun khishatun kagadachi chitori varcha patta vicharto. To pan taparivala manenech nahi mhanto Pratik tyala paper cha tukda

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dakhawto. Pantapariwala to tukda hatat gheun vachaycha prayatna karto, Cut to: 17.INT GHADGES HOUSE- NOON Anil gharat aata police constable sobat aahe, Anjali khinna pane kopryat basali aahe, Anil la constable vicharto, CONSTABLE PAPERAT JAHIRAT DYAYCHI KA? ANIL NAHI, GARAJ NAHI TYACHI

Anjali fankaryane uthateaani mhante, ANJALI KA? KA NAHI DYAYCHI? SAGLYA JAGALA KALU DE KI HYANCHYA VEDYA BAAPANE MAJHYA PORALA PALWUN NELA TE

CONSTABLE ME HOTLINE VAR AAS-PASSCHYA SHAHRANSHI BOLUN GHETAY, TE KALAWTILACH

Anil , anjali kade baghto aani maan valvun parat phone var number dial karu legato. Cut to:

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18.EXT CROWDED STREETS OF PUNE- NOON Pratik aata rastyachya dusrya bajula aala aahe to ekala patta vicharto, kagad dakhvun, To manus MANUS BALA, TULA RASTYACHYA TYA BAJUNE JAWA LAGEL, TITHUN RICKSHA GHE

Pratik tyala THANK YOU, KAKA, mhanun nighto, aani parat aajoban kade yayla nighto Tya jhada jawal aalyavar tyala tithe aajoba disat nahit. To eekade tikade pahato, Aajoba disat nahit. To pan tapari valya kade parat jato,

PRATIK AHO, ITHE BASLELE MAJHE AAJOBA KUTHE GELE?

Hya prashnala uttar dusrach manoos deto, malkat kapade aani kes dadhi wadhlela, Gardulya disnara Manoos, Pratik kade aani tyachya galyatalya chain kade rokhun baghto, aani mhanto, GARDULYA BALA, TUJHE AAJOBA KUTHE GELE AAHET, TE MALA MAHIT AAHE, CHAL MEE TULA DAKHAWTOCHAL

Sambhanit dhoka janun Pratik mage sarakto aani chalu legato Cut to :

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19.INT GHADGES HOUSE- NOON Anjali gharachya darabaher waat pahat basali aahe, Anil car gheun gharat yeto Anjali dhawat jaun Anil la vicharte, ANJALI PRATIK MILALA KA ? Anil gadi lock karun dusrya dishela baghato.

Cut to: 20. EXT.PUNE STREETS- NOON Aajoba rastyachya Madhya bhagi ekate ubhe aahet. Dutarfa wahane jorat jaat aahet. Loka rasta cross karat aahet. Aajobanchya bajune ek wahan jorat pressure horn wajvat susat vegat nighun jata. Aani gelyavar oradta, BIKER AE THERDYA HO BAJULA! Gadyanche karna-karkassha horn wajtayat, aajoba tasech ubhe. Cut to: 21.EXT PRATIK Streets NOON Pratik aata vegat chaltoy, aata rasta paar karnyachya prayatnat aahe, pan vahane jorat jatayat, Pratik traffic madhe shirto Aani palu legato, wahane chukwat. Pratik divider cross karun khali rastyavar yenar toch samorun ek two-wheeler tyachya angavar yete, pratik ghabrun aa-wasun ubha rahato, jorat aawaj hoto To wahan-chalak kar-kachun break lawato, aani Pratik la baghto, aani maan modun nighun Jato. Aata pratik aawaj jhalyachya dishene pahu legato, tar eka thikani gardi jama jhalaych tyala disata, to tya gardichya jawal jato, aani vicharto,

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PRATIK KAKA, KAY JHALAY HO?

MANOOS-2 ARRE MHATARA GADI KHALI AALA? Pratik aat gardit shirato, tar ek mhatara cycle varun khali padlyach tyala disata. Pratik chya jeevat jeev ueto. TO garditun baher nighto , rastyachya virrudh dishela jau legato, tyala aajoba rastyachya madhe ubhe aslele distat, aanandane to palat Aaajoban kade jau legato, aajoban jawal to yenar eetkyat tyachya payala khetun ek 2-wheeller chake khrwadat yeun thambte, to manus dokya varch helmet kadhun Pratik la baghto, ha GOPAL aahe, GOPAL ARRE, ITHE PUNYAT KAY KARTAY TUMHI DOGHE ?

PRATIK AAMHALA YA PATTYAVAR NE, GOPU KAKA

GOPAL BARR NETO, PAN EK GOSHTA, GHARI MAHIT AAHE KA , TU AANI AAJOBA PUNYALA AALA AAHAT TE?

Pratik maan nakararthi halawto. Cut To :

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22. INT HOSPITAL AFTERNOON Hospital madhe aata Dr. patankar, Anjali, Anil, Pratik aani Aajoba aahet, nurse Aajobanchya taste ghetey, DR. PATANKAR ALZEIMER CHI PRIMARY LAKSHANE AAHET, YAAT MANOOS EETARANA VEDA VATU LAGATO MHANJE KEE TO TYACHYA LAHANPANAT GHADLELYA GOSHTI AATHWU LAGATO, MHANJE AAI-BHAU- BAHIN YANCHYA BADDLACHYA AATHWANIBADDAL TO KRUTI KARU LAGATO, AANI TYAT TYACH WAGANA LAHAN MULASARKHA HOTA, AGDI NIRAGAS, AANI HO YAAT MANASALA KAHIHI AATHWAT NASATA, MHANJE TYALA BHUK LAGLIYE, HE SUDDHA AATHWAT NAHI !

MEE KAHI TEST KELYAT, LAWKARCH PUDHCHYA GOSHTI SANGEN. OK, AANI HO TUMCHYA SOBAT MAGHASHI POLICE KA AALE HOTE? ANYTHING SERIOUS ?

Anil kahi uttar denar toch Anjali uttar dete.

ANJALI

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NAHI, KAHI NAHI ASACH, MITRA AAHET YANCHE

DR.PATANKAR AANI HO, GOD AAHE TUMCHA CHOKRA, AALYA AALYA TYANE SAGALA SANGITLA VYAVASTHIT AAJOBANA KAY TRAS HOTOY TE. AANI MEE VICHARLA KI AAI-BABA KUTHE AAHET TUJHE,

TAR MHANALA KI MAGUN YET AAHET.

Anil aani Anjali, Pratik kade pahtat Pratik tyanchya kade pahun halkas hasto. Cut to 23.INT GHADGES HOUSE NIGHT Jewanachya table bhowati, Anil, Paratik, aani aajoba baslele aahet. Samor pan wadhleli aahet. Aajoba nehamichyach mudret, Anil Pratikla vicharto, ANIL TULA JAYALA PAISE AANI HYA DOCTORANCHA PATTA KUTHE MILALA?

PRATIK TUMHI JENVHA HOSPITAL LA GELAT

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TENVHA MEE TUMCHYA PAKITATUN PAISE GHETLE

ANIL AANI PATTA?

PRATIK PAPERATUN

Anjali polya aanun samor thewate aani Pratik la vicharte,

ANJALI AANI PUNYALA KASA JAYACH HE KUTHUN SHIKLAT TUMHI?

PRATIK TYAT KAY AEWADH MOTHA, BUS-STAND VAR GELYAVAR SAGLYA GADYA PUNYALACH JATAT

Sagalech hasu lagtat, te pahun Aajoba Var pahtat, Aani Anjali la pahun tee vadhat asnarya hatala dhartat, achanak kahi kshanasathi watavaran stabdha hota, pan Anjali haluwar pane hat sodawun ghete aani tyana ghas bharwate Anil, Pratik Anjali kade baghtat,

ANJALI

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BAGHTAY KAY? JEWA PATAPAT,

Aajoba haluwar pane ghas chaghalat aahet Fade out: