Public Service Presentation AO2 - Describe three different areas of work in your chosen armed force
Excellent description with extensive examples
COMMENT
Area 1 of the Army
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Area 2 of the Army Area 3 of the Army Importance of chosen areas
Overall comments/Suggestions for improvement:
Adam you provided basic descriptions of 3 different areas of the army with some examples. To improve you need to add more information on the importance of the chosen areas as well as more in depth examples of there roles and responsibilities.