Doan Uyen Thao (gonnafaith95)

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There It is no doubt that education and the learning process have changed since the birth of technology. Nowadays, people are speculating on the possibility of Internet-based online lessons taking the place of traditional schools. In my opinion, technology can serve as an additional tool for learning but not an alternative to traditional classrooms. To begin with, it is the lack of human interaction when we study at home that should be taken into consideration. When we study at home alone, we can not meet and talk with other people, as well as make friends and expand our social relationships. Therefore, this makes us feel very lonely and bored. Schools, on the contrary, provide us with an opportunity to chat with our friends, our teachers and other people living near them. Moreover, when we contact and interact with more people or take part in learning groups or school clubs, we can improve our communicating, organizing or and problem-solving skills. Furthermore, when we go to school, we can obtain much more information when we go to school than when we only study at home .Schools can provide us with all the necessary technologies. For example, our Bien Hoa gifted high school has a huge number of information facilities such as projectors, televisions, computers, eBooks , Internet or so on which are very useful for our researches and study . Also, we can learn many things not only from our teachers but also from our friends as well.

Doan Uyen Thao (gonnafaith95)

We can acquire not only the academic knowledge but also the lifestyles and the proper ways of behaviors. Finally, motivation is definitely an important aspect that studying at home alone cant provide us but traditional schools can. In other words, a school is, in some ways, an environment of competition. When I am at home, nobody can see my work . and tell me whether I did a good job or a bad one. When I am at school, my teacher and my classmates see my work and I can see my classmates work as well. Thus, I will try to do a job as good well as my classmates or even a better one and have to study harder. In addition, at school, I can receive the encouragement and advices from both my teachers and my friends, which will motivate me a lot in my study. In conclusion, in comparison with studying alone at home, learning at school has more benefits for us. : itIt can provide us with much more information, the human interaction and motivation to study. Therefore, we should use technology as a helpful tool for studying not a substitute for traditional schools.
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