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Lord of the Flies/Platoon Comparison Essay Rubric

Score Length Paragraph Formation Thesis 4


Paper exceeds given length requirements Paragraphs are effectively structured using T-BEAR in a logical and cohesive manner Thesis is clearly stated at the end of the introduction Both topics are discussed equally at length and in detail The three points of comparison directly relate to the thesis

3
Paper meets maximum length requirements Paragraphs are effectively structured using T-BEAR Thesis is stated at the end of the introduction but is slightly unclear Both topics are discussed equally with some detail The three points of comparison directly relate to the thesis

2
Paper is within given length requirements Most paragraphs are effectively structured using T-BEAR Thesis statement is present but not in the appropriate location Both topics are discussed but one is done with more detail than the other The points of comparison are slightly disconnected/disjointed but relate to the thesis Provides some interpretation of the book and film using some quotes and some examples Most quotes are introduced but not discussed/developed fully in the paragraph 3-5 grammatical mistakes

1
Paper just meets required length Few paragraphs are structured properly Thesis statement can be inferred by reading the introduction but is not clearly stated The three points of comparison contain information that does not relate to the thesis

0
Paper does not meet length requirements Sentences are not coherent Thesis statement is not present The comparisons are incoherent

Comparative Descriptions

Analysis

Use of Quotes

Provides original ideas & insightful interpretation of the film and book using concrete examples and quotes for support All quotes are introduced and discussed fully so that they fit smoothly into the paragraph No grammatical mistakes

Provides some interpretation of the book and film using quotes and concrete examples for support Most quotes are introduced and discussed so that they fit smoothly into the paragraph 1-2 grammatical mistakes

Provides little interpretation of the book and film using few quotes and examples Few quotes are framed properly

Provides no interpretation and/or uses few quotes and examples Quotes are not framed into the paragraph so that they appear to be disconnected More than 10 grammatical mistakes

Grammar

More than 5 grammatical mistakes

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