Together We'll Succeed - Draft 01

Written By Jebb Bobbett

INT. MUSICIAN'S APARTMENT - DAY An aspiring young musician sits in a chair, tuning his guitar, when he is disturbed by the sound of construction. He heads to the window where he sees a beautiful young woman directing the finishing touches to the exterior of her beauty parlour. He heads away from the window to continue practicing. FADE TO BLACK. INT. YOUNG WOMAN'S APARTMENT - EVENING The young woman sits in her apartment above the beauty parlour reading a book, when she hears the gentle melody of a guitar from the garden. She heads to the balcony to investigate. EXT. BALCONY She opens the doors to the balcony and steps outside before looking down into the garden. EXT. GARDEN Standing in the garden playing his guitar is the young man as he attempts to serenade her. EXT. BALCONY Uninterested, she walks back into her apartment. INT. MUSICIAN'S APARTMENT - MOMENTS LATER Back at his apartment, he places the guitar in a corner by the window before heading to bed. FADE TO BLACK. EXT. GARDEN - THE NEXT DAY - EVENING The young man is once again standing in the garden, this time with a different instrument, in another attempt to serenade the woman. INT. MUSICIAN'S APARTMENT - MOMENTS LATER Once again, he carelessly throws the instrument below the window before heading to bed. EXT. GARDEN - THE NEXT DAY - EVENING Again the man stands playing an instrument to serenade the woman. she heads back inside shutting the doors to the balcony.

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INT. MUSICIAN'S APARTMENT - MOMENTS LATER Once again, he carelessly throws the instrument below the window before heading to bed. (A repetitive montage begins)Where the young man attempts to serenade the woman each evening, but to no avail. INT. BEAUTY PARLOUR (Time Lapse)As the days pass, the initial boom of customers begins to die down, with the woman beginning to day-dream, of the young man, in the shop as she awaits for customers. INT. MUSICIAN'S APARTMENT - MORNING Sitting in a chair in his apartment, he glares at the pile of instruments, which eventually give him an idea. EXT. MUSICIAN'S APARTMENT - DAY - NIGHT He constructs an elaborate contraption all through the day and into he night. EXT. BALCONY - EVENING Oblivious to the man, the woman eagerly awaits for him to begin the routine evening serenade. Disappointed, she retreats back into her apartment. FADE TO BLACK. INT. YOUNG WOMAN'S APARTMENT - THE NEXT DAY - EVENING Once again, the woman sits in her apartment reading a book, when she hears the squeaking of wheels. In excitement, she rushes to the balcony. EXT. BALCONY The doors fly open as she rushes out and looks down into the garden in excitement. EXT. GARDEN There he stands once more, with a sheet covering his contraption. He removes the sheet before sitting down and beginning to play. EXT. BALCONY She is clearly beginning to swoon, when the music suddenly stops. She rushes from the balcony into the garden. EXT. GARDEN

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The man has somehow become entangled in the contraption. As the woman rushes to free him, she freezes for a moment, as the position he has ended up in gives her an idea. FADE TO BLACK. INT. BEAUTY PARLOUR Two days after the incident, there is a large gathering of people at the beauty parlour to witness the unveiling of a new leisure and beauty appliance, the bizarre contraption the young man invented. Now deeply in love, the couple unveil the contraption to the large audience and the business becomes more successful than ever. FADE OUT. END. 00:01:51