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A bit more organization here than in your reference sheet, which is helpful. But, again, how would you break this up into a manageable number of sections for a commentary? Grade: 6
Jisoo Kim IB2 English Literature SL Block G Stanza 6 Brings up past of almost too much love Paradox of placing joy with pain by placing sweetness with bitter bark and burning clove Stanza 7 Alone, seems as though the speaker is tired of the pain takes away hand from where it hurts from leaning Alliteration of Ss: stiff and sore and scarred dramatizes the weariness and pain Stanza 8 Far from unhappy with reality Craves for more knowledge Sitting is not enough, longs to fell the earth as rough to all my length (to lie down) I long for weight and strength associates pain with strength of knowledge ABAB rhyme keeps poem uniform so that a sharper contrast can be made between the two sections Every stanza, first three lines follow iambic trimeter and last line follows iambic dimeter keeps the poem grounded despite the intense imagery used (grounded to earthward) Title: suggests the speakers desire to figuratively lay down on the earth and derive knowledge from the pain of the sand digging into him