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Two other cranes were called in to Two

other

cranes

were

lift the fallen crane. which lay at called in to lift the fallen Km3.6 of the Butterworth-bound side crane, which lay at Km3.6 of the bridge. of the Butterworth-bound side of the bridge.

Lower case The word in bold should be written in lower case, and not in upper case. Spelling error The word councillar is wrongly spelled. It should be spell counsellor.

Two other cranes were called in to Two

other

cranes

were

lift the fallen crane. which lay at called in to lift the fallen Km3.6 of the Butterworth-bound crane. which lay at km3.6 of side of the bridge. the Butterworth -bound side of the bridge. State executive councillor Lim Hock State executive counsellor Seng expressed anger and Lim Hock Seng expressed and the Bhd dissatisfaction High Bridge and took to Malaysian Penang (PBSB) dissatisfaction that the Malaysian anger High authority, Penang Bridge Sdn that contractor UEM Construction took Sdn criticising their lack of coordination UEM and preparedness for emergencies. almost remove and

Bhd (PBSB) and expansion project authority,

almost eight hours to remove crane, expansion project contractor Construction eight crane, hours

criticising for

their lack of coordination preparedness emergencies.

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I wish the state government I wish the state government had Short form We cannot use short form in writing a sentence. had the authority to do the authority to do something, but something, but we cant as we cannot as this is under federal this is under federal control, control, he said. he said. PBSB said in a statement Repetition The repetition of the word and should be replaced comma ( , ). with that all necessary action had been taken to manage the congestion, including updates via the main radio stations, variable message signs and alerts, and police managing the traffic. PBSB said in a statement that all necessary action had been taken to manage the congestion, including updates via the main radio stations, variable message signs, alerts, and police managing the traffic.

BROCHURES ARTICLE

Grammatical items Lower case The word in bold should be in lower case, not in cupper case.

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Winners shall be notified by Winners shall be notified by post post before 15 days after before 15 days after draw date. Draw date.

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An agent appointed by us An agent appointed by us will offers attractive price for offer attractive to prices parts for any for the students to purchase students computer, and purchase

any replacement part for replacement servicing PC with Alfatera with Computer Resources. Article The usage of article to be is not suitable in this text. Word Usage The word usage is not suitable in this text. The word computer components should be replaced with the word computer parts. STUDENT WORLD privilege offers marvellous benefit such as insurance coverage and other discount privilege and facilities, up to purchasing computer components, travelling, revision books, accommodation, holiday, shopping even an Umrah Package for Muslim student. Alfatera

even computer, and servicing PC Computer Resources.

This to be included when This will be included when you you subscribe. subscribe.

STUDENT WORLD privilege offers marvellous benefit such as insurance coverage and other discount privilege and facilities, up to purchasing computer parts, travelling, revision books, accommodation, holiday, shopping even an Umrah Package for Muslim student.

Grammatical items Sentence structure We should put a conjunction in the middle of the sentence to make the sentence more meaningful .

Original text STUDENT benefit such as coverage discount computer and privilege

Revised text WORLD privilege

WORLD STUDENT

privilege offers marvellous offers marvellous benefit such as insurance insurance coverage and other other discount privilege and facilities, and up to purchasing computer

facilities, up to purchasing components, travelling, revision components, books, accommodation, holiday,

travelling, revision books, shopping and even an Umrah accommodation, Package student. for holiday, Package for Muslim student. Muslim shopping even an Umrah

SONG LYRICS Cmon Lah lyrics by KRU When was the last time you pay for a Malaysian movie Or a music CD or if ever maybe Was it a pirated copy or illegal MP3 Cause the cinemas all look empty to me Is it because everyones too busy Fighting and voting on reality TV shows Whos better, Mawi or Jackie

And in awards shows, will anyone ever beat Miss Siti? Who cares if shes got something going on With all these Datuks cause its a big yawn A love saga or some courtroom drama Yo, dont be kaypo MYOB Joe Haiya, why you want to fight-fight Make noise some more Make the blood go up Cmon lah, we Malaysian what?!! Cmon lah, together-gether mah How to go far when we fight-fight Make noize some more Make the blood go up Cmon lah, we Malaysian what?!! Cmon lah, together-gether mah Now pay attention sit down and listen So why cant we be obedient when no ones watching us 24/7 Passing red lights in the middle of the night Whats right is wrong, on the roads we become demons Honks and fingers, abuses and sisters That you force to stand and book your spot at the parking lot Unless if youre an AP king driving Ferraris Hustlers will scratch your doors and nail your tyres So which team do you support here? Melaka, Pahang , Selangor or Johor? Cause at the mamak stalls they watch the EPL scores Maybe thats why its hard for our national team to beat Singapore Just think about it..just give it a chance coz we need it Theres no one else in the world who cares if we dont care at all Just go on and on..and move on

Now everybody cmon, Say La-la-la.. Haiya, why you want to fight-fight Make noise some more Make the blood go up Cmon lah, we Malaysian what? !! Cmon lah, together-gether mah How to go far when we fight-fight Make noise some more Make the blood go up Cmon lah, we Malaysian what?!! Cmon lah, together-gether mah Hey brutha..hey sista! Too many wannabes in our Hip Hop community Talking crap bout the ghetto, G thang and the rivalry Talk the way you normally talk lah Youre from KL, not an American rap star Whats wrong with the honies wearing minis Whether in the clubs or malls or streets in the cities We make a big deal about the little things in life On the differences rather than the similarities alike Just chill, be cool with each other After all theres no one out there gonna do us this favour Stop the slacking, dissin, slammin and moanin Cause were brothers and sisters, now everybody sing Haiya , why you want to fight-fight Make noise some more Make the blood go up Cmon lah, we Malaysian what?!! Cmon lah, together-gether mah

How to go far when we fight-fight Make noise some more Make the blood go up Cmon lah , we Malaysian what?!! Cmon lah , together- gether

ANALYSIS OF SONG LYRIC- Cmon Lah by KRU Grammatical items Spelling Make noize some more There are some spelling error in this song lyrics. Whats wrong with the honies wearing minis Stop the slacking, dissin, slammin and moanin Hey brutha..hey sista! Whats wrong with the homiest wearing minis Stop the slacking, dissent, slamming, and moaning Hey brother, hey sister! Make noise some more Original text Revised text

Talking crap bout the ghetto, G thang and the rivalry Past Tense We should add ed to an action that happened in the past Short form

Talking crap bout the ghetto, G thang and the rivalry When was the last time you paid for a Malaysian movie

When was the last time you pay for a Malaysian movie

Is it because everyones too

Is it because everyone is too busy Who is better, Mawi or Jackie Come on, we are Malaysian right? Do not be a busybody. Mind your own business ,Joe.

Short form is not suitable busy in writing. There are few of short form in the lyrics. Cmon lah, we Malaysian what? Yo, dont be kaypo MYOB Joe Whos better, Mawi or Jackie

Short form

Whats right is wrong, on the roads we become demons

What is right is wrong, on the roads we become demons

Maybe thats why its hard for our national team to beat Singapore

Maybe thats why it is hard for our national team to beat Singapore

Colloquial

Yo, dont be kaypo MYOB Joe

dont be busybody MYOB Joe

There are many improper spoken language in this song lyrics.

Haiya, why you want to fightfight Cmon lah, together-gether mah How to go far when we fightfight

why you want to fight? Come on together. How to go far if we always fight

Punctuation We should put a question mark (?) after at the end of the text because it is a question. Tenses We should add ed at the word pay in the text because it is in the past Tense

Melaka, Pahang, Selangor or Johor.

Melaka, Pahang, Selangor or Johor?

When was the last time you pay for a Malaysian movie

When was the last time you paid for a Malaysian movie