Abandoned Camp Final Draft Written by Rafia Naveed 09/04/13

BBFC slide comes, followed by Dinner Plate Studios Logo, then the production company, Wide Eye Productions. *Blank Screen* We hear a bus pulling over, then driving off. EXT-FOREST-Daylight This is a long shot view, of all the 5 campers carrying very large bags, walking away from the camera. The camera is panning with them. The camera slowly turns, and shows a young male, who seems to be isolated from the rest of group, and is walking on his own. Humaira (loudly) David, come one, catch up. EXT-FOREST-Daylight A medium shot of the campers entering a camp, made out of logs. All of their facial expressions showing happy and excited emotions. Humaira Oh my god, this is so cool. Apart from the boy who seems to be isolated, (David). He enters and sits in the corner, on his own. Campers Having a general conversation between themselves about setting up the camp fire and the actual tent. The attention is now on David, who is sat in the corner with his knees curled up to his chest. This is a medium close up, as he hears noises coming from outside the tent. There are sticks falling on top, and realizes.

EXT-FOREST-DAYLIGHT. David leaves the tent, and it is now a long shot of him looking around his surroundings, which are trees and logs. He walks out the camera shot, and the camera goes into a birds eye view, extremely long shot where the atmosphere is much more clearer. From afar, there is noise coming, from an unknown character. David is walking faster, and eventually runs to see what is happening. David (in shock) Hello? Hello? EXT-FOREST-DAYLIGHT On the floor, there is a male, lying on his front. The left side of his neck has blood dripping from it. (Medium shot in order to see both the victim, and protagonist) This follows a medium long shot of the rest of the campers scurrying across to see what has happened. Panning from the victim on the floor, and going up, the campers all huddle, and are in shock; one gets her phone out in order to call for help. Charlotte Theres no signal! One camper backs away, whilst the rest look for signal; still panning it goes back to the victim, in a big close up of his eye, where it opens and is red. The camera pans back up, with this camper, and she gets the attention of the others by saying Guys Guys.

EXT-FOREST-DAYLIGHT The camera is panning; when the other campers turn around and look on the floor, the bleeding victim has disappeared. TITLE OF THE FILM APPEARS then fades out.