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By : ABIDAH BT SARAJUL HAQ , English Language Master Teacher, Sekolah Tuanku Abdul Rahman , Ipoh
Writing is a way of communicating your ideas. The art of good essay writing is to have something to say and to express these ideas clearly and concisely. In Paper 2 of the PMR English Language examination , students are required to write one composition in not less than 120 words. The types of guided compositions are as follows : 1. Pictorial or route maps 2. Descriptive compositions 3. Narratives 4. Note expansion 5. Processes and procedures 6. Letters ( Formal or Informal) 7. Articles 8. Speeches and Talks 9. Giving opinions 10. Dialogues and conversations
Guidelines
You are advised to spend 40 minutes in Section A , where you will have to write one guided composition. Read the instructions and question carefully so that you understand the requirements of the task. Underline or circle the keyword or main point to ensure that you are keeping track with the requirement of the question. Focus on the format that is required, for example whether it is a letter, a speech or writing a story based on given pictures. Spend time to plan for your composition. Jot down important notes and ideas using a mind map. Present you ideas in sentences and later write them out into paragraphs. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use interesting expressions to arouse the readers interest. Finally, after you have completed your composition, read again and edit your work. Check for spelling errors, inappropriate tenses and incorrect sentence structures.
This is the main section of your composition. Write out each mainin BODY a paragraph you will main idea in a paragraph. Remember : in a paragraph you will have a topic sentence and supporting details (which include examples and further elaborations). TOPIC SENTENCE : to inform readers what the paragraph is about. SUPPORTING DETAILS: to explain, give reasons or examples that support and elaborate the topic sentence. An example is given below
A forest is a large area of land covered with trees. A forest is not only made up of trees. It also includes smaller plants such as mosses, shrubs and wild flowers. In addition many kinds of birds, insects and other animals make their home in the forest.
Topic sentence :
Supporting details : It includes smaller plants for example mosses, shrubs and wild flowers. Many kinds of birds, insects and other animals make their home in the forest.
This is the last paragraph of your writing. Here you are to summarise the main points which you have stated in the earlier paragraphs or to restate your opinion or stand on the topic.
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Notes ( expanded) Relevant details (added ) Examples (given) Main ideas ( in sequence) Tenses( used correctly) Sentences ( grammatically correct) Paragraphs( organised) Spelling( without errors) Punctuation (correctly placed) Handwriting ( eligible)
I would advise students to take some time every week to practice your writing skills. Although some of you may feel it to be taxing at first but I can assure you that this exercise is most useful for an English Language student to do. And with constant and consistent effort , without giving up , you can eventually write better compositions in the PMR examination. Remember : We can do anything we want to do if we stick to it long enough Helen Keller.
ESSAY WRITING LEARNING AND STUDY TECHNIQUES ( PART I1) THE FIVE PARAGRAPH ESSAY
By : ABIDAH BT SARAJUL HAQ , English Language Excellent Teacher, Sekolah Tuanku Abdul Rahman , Ipoh
TIPS AND TECHNIQUES As a teacher , my sole concern will be to find ways on how to improve my students essay writing skills. In this issue I would like to share some ideas that I find useful to practice . Writing a good five paragraph essay requires one to master the format of this kind of essay. What is required for writing a good five- paragraph essay is the same as writing any good piece of writing but in this case the format has to be exact. Since writing is a form of communication , you must always remember that the goal is to become clear, concise and unified so that the reader can follow along and appreciate your piece of writing and flow of thought. The five- paragraph essay is indeed a great tool for learning and communicating at all levels. Here are some ideas that are helpful when writing the above essay :
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BATA has a whole new range of bags and shoe wear. It ___(1)______ offering a 10 per cent ___(2)______ on any of it standard collection of products. Just cut ____(3)_____ the coupon in our Batas advertisement page. Ladies items are ____(4)_____ from RM29.90 to RM139. The Bata __(5)________ in Malaysia have ____(6)_____ a long way. Remember First to BATA then to school ?. From a household name selling school ___(7)_______ , BATA has gone on ____(8)_______ serve different segments of the market. Adapted from KLIA Times, July 2007
1 A B C D
3 A B C D
out off in on
7 A B C D
8 A B C D
to for up on
PRACTICE 2
Five- year old Daniel woke up one day to a rainy morning . It was pouring cats and dogs outside. Mummy , of course did not want him to get in the rain and suggested that day he stay home for the day. Just then came a totally unexpected reaction from Daniel .He screamed Nooo!! and threw a tantrum like never before . He insisted on going to school ,no matter what. Most children would very happy stay home from school , but not Daniel , a Smart Reader Kids student . He has never missed a day of school. A chat with any Smart Reader Kids teacher confirms that most centres have a very low non-attendance rate. Children have short attention spans. And if you cant keep them interested , you will have a headache chasing after them because they will be running all over the place, says a teacher at Smart Reader Kids. Three to six- year- olds are constantly moving about and they cant sit still for more than two minutes in one place. It makes our work much easier as we have a curriculum that captures their attention 100% , said one of the teachers. Adapted from The Star Education Guide 20/ 9/ 07 9 Pouring cats and dogs in passage means A B C D flood thunderstorms heavy rain scanty rain
10 What is special about the Smart Reader Kids Centre? A B C D students are always 100% attentive students are always running around students can play anytime students are always chatting
11 Why did Daniel scream when his mother told him to stay home?
A B C D
12 He has never missed a day of school means A B C D his attendance in school was 50 % his attendance in school was 100 % his attendance in school was 80% his attendance in school was 99%
PRACTICE 3 On 31 August , Malaysia will celebrate her 50th birthday! It is s special day for us . We remember how our country achieved its independence from the British at midnight 30 August 1957. It was our first Prime Minister , Tunku Abdul Rahman ,who helped our country to achieve its independence. Tunku ,as he was fondly known , formed an alliance between the United Malay National Organisation [UMNO] , the Malayan Chinese Association[MCA] and the Malayan Indian Congress[MIC] . Together with his colleagues, Tunku led the fight for independence from the British When Malaya ,as it was then known, became independent, Tunku was elected as the countrys first Prime Minister . A prince from Kedah, Tunku was loved by the people . For his role in uniting the three races and achieving Malaysians Independence, he became known as Bapa Malaysia. Thanks to the efforts of the older generations , young Malaysian today live in peace and harmony. Adapted from Quest magazine July August issue 2007
13 Who had helped Malaysia to achieve its independence? A B C D Tun Abdul Rahman Tun Hussein Onn Tunku Abdul Rahman Tun Dr Mahathir
14 On 31 August 1957,Malaya achieved its independence from the A B C D Japanese Portuguese Dutch British
15 Why was Tunku loved by the people? A He invented a special place for certain people. B He united the races in Malaya C He fought in the war with the British D He was our second Prime Minister 16 The word colleagues in the passage means A B C D neighbours schoolmates partners enemies
PRACTICE 4 The fitting sessions would be conducted at either Hajjah Cik Minahs Songket House in Penambang or at the tailors in Kota Bharu . Jamal and his fiance would have their songket fitting sessions in the morning at the baju Melayu sessions in the afternoon . Then they usually lunched together in Kota Bharu , chaperoned , definitely, but it was a small matter . The more important matter was that these fitting sessions were the times Jamal stole precious few moments with his wife-to-be. He began to notice more things about her . She had a mole on the left of her chin and she was actually far fairer than she had seemed when he had first seen her. Fair complexion in ladies were was very much prized. Of Bunga Telur and Bally Shoes by Che Husna Azhari
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B To try out the wedding outfits C To discuss wedding outfits D To organise the buffet lunch
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The word chaperonedmeans A B C D followed by an uncle followed by a stranger accompanied by a husband accompanied by an older woman
19 Jamals wife-to- be- is described as A Very fair without any mole B Quite fair with a mole on her cheek C Fair with a mole on her chin D Moderately fair with some moles on her chin 20 What did Jamal and his fiance do during the afternoon ? A B C D They had a stroll They did some shopping They visited friends and relatives They had lunch together
PRACTICE 5
Zahid , youve turned into a little monster!. In reply Zahid merely lifted his eyebrows and gazed off into space. He was really putting on a show .From time to time ,he sniggered . No one could fathom his thoughts. If you dont have a book or pencil , then go home . Youre better off staying at home and sleeping . Whats the use in coming to school if youre going to act like a brat? . The teacher s threats didnt bother him at all. His face remained expressionless and empty. Once in a while , he would stare spitefully at his teacher and wish , if you were only my size, Id take you on too, just as I did Dolah..
Stand here until school is out, Mr.Jamal commanded . Zahid headed for the corner, with his head down, but on his lips there was a smile. He strutted, as though mocking the command given by his teacher. Mr.Jamal became furious. When school was out , Dolah was waiting for him. But Zahid was in luck, because he happened to be carrying a piece of wood to protect himself. The Pencil by Ali Majod
21 The phrase putting on a show means A B C D to show something to take part to pretend to react
22 Why did Mr. Jamal call Zahid a little monster? A B C D He looks like a monster He sings in the class He helps the students in the class He disturbs the students in the class
23 The piece of wood that Zahid carried was for A donation B protection C selling D throwing 24 The teachers threats didnt bother Zahid because A B C D he was not afraid of anyone he was happy in school he did not understand what the teacher meant he did not know what to do
1C 2 D 3 B 4 B 5A 6 A 7 A 8 A 9 C 10 A 11 D 12 B 13 C 14 D 15 B 16 C 17 B 18 D 19 C 20 D 21 C 22 D 23 B 24 A