Characterization in Emerald knights

Wellan is a character in a story called Emerald Knights written by.Anne Rollibard. this story talks about seven knights united to save the world from the Black emperor. Wellan is described as a trustworthy, brave and a loving man.The way of describing a character in a story is what we refer to as characterization, which is a method Anne Robillard used to let the reader know who Wellan really is.

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First of all, Wellan was described as trustworthy. This is based on how a queen called Fan asked Wellan to take care of her baby and yet the father was the antagonist Black emperor. The way he accepted and took the risks describes how he was trustworthy ,which Anne Robillard wanted the reader to know. Furthermore, Wellan is described as a brave knight .the fact that he saved many kingdoms lives and fought against the antagonist Black emperor and yet he knew he will die. Anne Rollibard wanted to show readers Wellans bravery.You need to tell us more about how he was brave and give more examples.

Comment [JM1]: Did Wellan know who the father was? This should be a new sentence. Comment [JM2]: Can you use a quote here to show how he was trustworthy? Comment [JM3]: Hmm, a kingdom is like a country.

In addition, Wellan proves to be a friend and a loving man in many areas of the story. For example, he extremely loved the queen Fan who was now a ghost, which ghost can be loved by a human? Wellan was ready to do nothing anything for her. After Fans disappearance, Bridgess now a knight, she and Wellan fell in love and got married. When Brigdess wounded, Wellan saved her. Also Wellan is characterized as a friend to others. For example, while married, Wellan discover that Knight Falcon is still in love with Bridgess, he saidIf something happens to me, please marry Bridgess.Wellan didnt get angry learning that. This shows the reader that Wellan had a loving heart. So at first Wellan loved Fan, then Fan dissapeared. Then Wellan married Bridgess. Then he learned that Knight Falcon loved Bridgess, so he told Falcon that he could marry Bridgess if he died.

Comment [JM4]: Who is Bridgess? Is Bridgess male or female?

In conclusion, Wellan has a great role in the story of Emerald Knights since he acts as a protagonist and the leader of all the soldiers .It is a great story thus. You need more information in your conclusion. Repeat that he is brave, trustworthy and a good friend. Comment on the use of characterization.

Sylvie, This is a good start to a literary essay. You need to include more information in your body paragraphs so the reader has a better idea of Wellans character. You should include quotations from the story. In your

conclusion you might want to mention what happens to Wellan in the end. Is he able to save his kingdom? Does he die a hero? What was your final impression of Wellan?

Grade: 9/10