IELTS test in Saudi Arabia May 2011 (Academic Module)

Some say that public health is important and there should be more sports facilities. Others say that they have small impact on individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Introduction

Public health has been the primary concern not only for civilians but also for governments around the globe. However, when it comes to measures of its improvement, views differ greatly.

View 1 arguments

1. Since sports facilities are of great benefit to citizens physical health, it is absolutely necessary and wise to enhance their numbers for the sa e of the improvement of public health.

2. Sports facilities that are easily found and controlled can provide great convenience to people who have paucity of time to ta e physical e!ercises more fle!ibly.

3. Sports facilities are particularly welcomed by senior citizens and youngsters whose health is vital to the whole society. "herefore, more sports facilities should be built to meet the great demand of citizens of all ages.

4. "here is no doubt that ta ing regular physical e!ercise reduces the incidence of obesity and heart diseases to some e!tent, so that increasing the number of sports facilities in the local communities can help some people to establish an active lifestyle, thereby improving their health condition.

View 2 arguments

1. #t is a fact that only a minority of people utilize facilities at sports centres to eep fit, which means the vast ma$ority of people do not benefit from this programme.

2. Some people argue that the use of sports facilities is restricted by time, seasons and location. "herefore, they are not suitable for all citizens, especially those wor ing from %am till &pm.

3. 'odern diseases are triggered by various factors, such as eating unhealthy food and neglecting regular chec ups. Hence, it is recommended that governments and health authorities put health education among the masses high on their agenda and raise public awareness on health issues. "his can be accomplished by delivering information on how to lead a healthy life to every household, and putting stringent regulations on the fast food industry.

Opinion

#mproving public health re(uires a combined effort and no single action can resolve the problem effectively. #n addition, although solving the problem is not insurmountable, yet a long term commitment by both individuals and governments is re(uired.

Vocabulary

paucity, stringent, vital, incidence, obesity, triggered, advocate, accomplish, neglecting, insurmountable

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*eneral Training !riting Tas+ 2

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,educing global en-ironmental damage s.ould be .andled by go-ernments rat.er t.an indi-iduals. To w.at e'tent do you agree or disagree/ *i-e reasons $or your answer and pro-ide rele-ant e'amples $rom your own e'perience.

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The rate at which the Earth is being damaged through human activity is alarming. As awareness of this disturbing situation grows, actions are increasingly being taken to meet the challenge. Although world governments play key roles in the question of environmental health, it is strongly disagreed that their environmental efforts negate those of individuals. I will use both a personal experience I have had as well as non government inspired initiatives undertaken in my country to illustrate this position.

!irstly, the si"eable contribution an individual can make in the world#s attempt to cleanse itself should not be underestimated. I feel the changes I have made to my own lifestyle act as a good example here. !our years ago, I made a conscious effort to start taking the subway to work instead of driving after reali"ing I had been burning an entire tank of gas every week. The effect of this small change over the course of four years became magnified when I reali"ed I had refrained from burning more than two hundred full car tanks of gas$ Thus, although there are many things that governments can do to help fight environmental damage, the individual still plays a huge role.

In addition to this, many non government related entities have also been making inroads in the battle for a cleaner world. !or example, at many of the universities in %anada, there are student groups that work to raise awareness of the lifestyle changes people can make to better help the environment. These independent groups help put a face to a message and really push people to alter themselves for the benefit of the natural world. As this makes clear, pro&ects aimed at preserving the Earth do not have to be government run to make a difference.

As my experiences show, the world#s governments should not solely handle the issue of global environmental damage. It is hoped that the future sees more people contribute to this cause in any way they can.

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ome people belie-e t.at uni-ersities are producing more graduates t.an needed2 and t.at less emp.asis s.ould be placed on uni-ersity education. Ot.ers are o$ a di$$erent opinion. 3iscuss bot. -iews and include your own opinion.

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As the world develops, the opportunity to achieve a tertiary education is becoming more widespread. This has led many to question whether larger numbers of university graduates is a positive trend. 'owever, others counter than university does more than simply provide employment opportunities. (oth of these arguments will be analysed before a reasoned conclusion is reached.

)n the one hand, many feel the rising number of university graduates today causes more harm than good. !or example, graduates from %anadian universities are having to wait for employment simply because there are no working opportunities for them to engage in. *espite this, %anadian labour related &ob openings are booming. This example shows a disparity that is common in many parts of the world and makes clear that achieving a higher education can actually be the precursor to unemployment. Thus, it is understandable why many support the argument that less emphasis should be put on garnering a university education.

'owever, in contrast to this stance, there are those who believe higher education provides more to people than simply &ob related skill sets. !or instance, the analytical skills honed by university graduates in the +nited ,tates give them a heightened perception and deeper understanding of the world. Although this benefit does little by way of professional development, it gives people the chance to develop and challenge themselves personally. This makes it is clear why many do not agree with reducing the enthusiasm for higher education.

After analysing these stances on university, it is felt the argument to lessen educational emphasis holds little water. It is hoped the world continues to push its young people towards the challenges offered through higher learning.