Mohammed Alalshaikh ENGH 121 | Fall 2013 Academic Language Analysis Data Collection - Due Wednesday, November 20 Group

p Submission For this assignment, you will choose two paragraphs from your own ALA article to analyze. In the first step, you will label and mark up each sentence. In the second step, you will tally (count) the items you marked and put them onto a form. STEP ONE a. Copy sentences from the paragraphs you chose into a blank Microsoft Word Document. b. Name paragraphs in your new documents and number the sentences in them (PARAGRAPH ONE, Sentence One, etc.) c. Mark the sentences using the following system: Green highlighting = Underlining = Yellow highlighting = [Bracket] = (Parenthesis) = Blue text = Red text = Purple text = phrase subject verb object /complement d. Save the file with the following name: firstnames_markedparaphs_AC4 e. Submit on Blackboard, under Homework. DC IC

EXAMPLE: Paragraph One

Questions of voice, address, and intention all arise and because these questions have similarly occupied literary scholars its tempting to transpose lessons from narratology onto the study of code and comments in code 2. early considerations ( by computer scientists ) ( of the role of comments in code ) acknowledged the centrality ( of these narratological questions ).

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STEP TWO Fill in the following charts and complete the calculations. Expand the tables as needed.

# Sentences

# ICs

# Simple Sentences 2 1

# Complex Sentences 1 0

# Compound Sentences 0 2

# CompoundComplex Sentences 0 0

# Direct Quotes 0 0

# Indirect Quotes 0 3

# Words

1 2 3 4 5

3 3

3 5

65 98

Totals =

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Verb
(base form )

Frequency Degree Tense Strong,

Neutral, Weak

Voice
Active Passive

Past Present Future Conditional arise

(example row)

Simple Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive

1 Launched N Simple Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive 1 Intended N Simple Progressive Perfect Perfect-

Past Present Future Conditional * A

Past Present Future Conditional *

Mohammed Alalshaikh Progressive 1 Exist W Simple Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive 1 Shared W Simple Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive Stored 2 W Simple Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive 1 Sharing W Simple Past Present Future Conditional A Past Present Future Conditional * A Past Present Future Conditional * A Past Present Future Conditional * A

Mohammed Alalshaikh Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive Past Present Future Conditional Simple Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive Past Present Future Conditional Simple Progressive Perfect PerfectProgressive Past Present Future Conditional Simple Progressive Perfect Perfect*

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Adverb likely

Definition probably From a distance Introduce the statement Very Mainly

Placement in Sentence after verb in IC After verb in IC Before verb in IC After Verb in IC Before verb in DC *

Used

Not Used

(example row)

Contractions (its) Personal Pronouns (I, you, we)

Remotely However Extremely Primarily

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Simple Subject of Independent Clause (copy & paste from text)

single word or a noun with an article and/or adjective in front of it

Noun Phrase Train or Noun Clause

EXAMPLE:

Questions of voice, address, and intention all

x x x x X X X X X X Totals 2 4

EXAMPLE: It EXAMPLE: early considerations by computer scientists of the role of comments in code It This section The privacy challenge for software engineers Similar methodologies Key aspects of cloud computing The topic of privacy protection Protection of personal, confidential and sensitive date

Specialized and/or Repeated Key Vocabulary

Mohammed Alalshaikh Term Privacy Date System Engineer Computer Synonym or definition Isolation, solitude, seclusion Statistics, details, facts Structure, complex, network Originator, designer, architect Pc, terminal, internet, appliance

Calculations Ratio Verbs to Words (example row) Verbs to Words Adverbs to Verbs Strong to Neutral Verbs Simple Sentences to all other types Direct Quotes to Indirect Quotes Simple subject to noun phrase or noun clause subject Numeric Ratio 28/314 Percentage 9%

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1.(Key aspects of cloud computing) are that there is an infrastructure shared between organisations that is off- premise. Simple sentence

2.Therefore, there are threats associated with the fact that the data is stored and processed remotely, and [because there is an increased (usage of virtualization) and sharing of platforms between users.] complex sentence

3. (Protection of personal, confidential and sensitive data) stored in the cloud is therefore extremely important. Simple sentence

Paragraph two

1.(In November 2007) (the UK Information Commissioners Office) (ICO) [15] (an organisation responsible for regulating and enforcing access to and use of personal information), [launched a Privacy Impact Assessment (PIA) [15] process to help organizations assess the impact of their operations on personal privacy.] compound sentence

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2.This process assesses the privacy requirements of new and existing systems; [it is (primarily intended) for use in public sector risk management,] [but is increasingly seen to be of value to private sector businesses that process personal data.] compound sentence

3. (Similar methodologies) exist and can have legal status in Australia, Canada and the USA [16]. Simple sentence